Reviews for Commitments Made In BloodBy : ryukotsusei |
YAY!! I LOVE this story!!!! I may rant, but that doesn't mean I don't love it!! Sooo, looking forward to the next chapter!! (Not rushing you, just excited.)
...Seriously?! Kagome is NOT THIS pathetic! ... ... Sigh, on to the next chapter.
LOVING this story, but THAT is annoying! -> So far, Kagome is the only one having to make compromises. If their relationship is going to work, Youko/Kurama/Shuichi is going to have to start compramising too. She has to accept the Demon things about him, but HE needs to accept the Guardian Priestess of the Shikon no Tama things about her. She is NOT the kind of person that can sit at home waiting for the fighters to come back, she IS a fighter. Ok, rant done, none of that means that I don't love this story, because I MAJORLY do!
Um, I would think that her real issue with what Youko did would be that he didn't TRUST HER enough to let her handle it herself. That would be my problem. I mean, if he hadn't come out when he did, she was going to give him one of her signature slaps, and Miroku if proof of just how painful those things are. If she had handled it, Hojo wouldn't be stuck with a scar, she wouldn't have gotten bruised, and Youko and Hiei (though mostly Youko) wouldn't be in trouble with Koenma. I'm of the opinion that Youko screwed up. Oh, by the way, GREAT story.
ahh, Hiei's met her? This is getting VERY interesting! Oh, everything else is REALLY good too! (Sorry, I'm not very good at reviews.)
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