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By : BrethlessM

From ANON - CrossbowTrueshot on March 10, 2005
bravo.....just bravo...and yes a sequel will be nice.....

kinda thrown off by the whole.,...live for eternity thing.....but i hope u find someway to work with that

-the ever faithful Crossbow Trueshot
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From ANON - Anon on March 09, 2005
Wow!!! that was an excellente chapter, so cute, so romantic, so..... I dont know.... I loved it. The fact of eternity and Inuyasha asking Kagome to marry her maked it different and also special.
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From ANON - Juice on March 09, 2005
Way to good damn this is really good. 1 question how many chapters r u going 2 have? why i want 2 know is... because i don't want 2 see it end 2 soon. I know i said this befor but this is way 2 damn GOOD. ps what hapend 2 songo's arm in chapter 11?? P.S> I'm sucked in and i can't get out like i would want to. :D
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From ANON - Vikki on March 09, 2005
Hello again. First let me get this out of me...that chapter was so beautiful and heartfiled. Also i love the idea of one shots between the two stories, this one and the wonderful one that will come next, that i can't wait for. Also, i havn't thought of a school yet. I'm not so sure what i want to do. I need to think of that soon, but i have so many choices. I can't wait until after high school, but i'm worry that i will never see the people i love so much after that. Well, other then that...SATURDAY. Just waiting for this chapter was killing me. Still i'll wait a whole life time to read this story. I told my friends about this story. One of my closes friends that loves inuyasha is so hooked on this story just as much as i am. She's always asking me "is it updated?" or "is she going to get the next chapter up soon?" Sometimes i just laugh at her, but i understand what she's going through. She's new at reading these, and she hasn't gain the feeling of having to wait*can't remember the word for it*. The play went great, lucky no set peice broke until after the show was done. It's was funny and luckly no one was hurt. Other then that i can't wait to read the next chapter. Also i'm never leaving you. I'm going to be for every story you have writen. I already read your other story that was writen. I liked it too. I think it's just you're a great writer that i'm so hooked and that you understand what could really happen and what people want. Well, until we meet again. With love, your fan Vikki.
One more thing...FINALLY PEOPLE ARE NOTICING THE GREATNESS OF THIS STORY...GO ALL OF YOU!!!!!!!
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From ANON - PJ on March 09, 2005
Gee I don't know what to say. This story just keeps getting better and better. I do have a question I may have missed this I am not sure. Will their kids have eternal life as well or is it just those that were in the cave and Kagome? (she has eternal life also correct?) And I am also not sure did that include Kohaku I know she didn't get part of the jewel so I was wondering. I am going to read the chapter again and it will probably be clear to me so don't worry about my questions too much. This was a great chapter I am glad you didn't split it up. I was getting a bit scared there about Miroku I thought he was going to mess things up with his trying to be "noble crap" and not marry Sango. He was being a real baka. I liked the whole amusement park stuff and Inuyasha's reaction to the ride "again" was just so cute. I loved little Shippou he is such a sweetie but he can be a little 'terror' when he wants to be. LOL In the anime he was always saying "I am just a kid" and then 2 secs later he was running after them to help saying "Hey wait for me" I just loved him. Anyway keep writing and if the sequel isn't too centered on 'their kids' and still have the "Inu gang" I would love to read it. Update when you can.
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From ANON - Vikki on March 06, 2005
I was a little worried about that whole inuyasha turning human. See i'm one of those people that think that he should remain the way he is. In the anime and manga Kagome is also big on how she loves him, for him, not his human side. I really like it when he remains the same. As for Kagome not Dying, i was beyond happy. Yet i wonder where she took them at the end of this one, or what happened. Also, i also am wondering is Sessh. going to be in this story. I was thinking about that when the doc, which i also love him both in the story and when he appeared in the anime/manga, was talking about how demons still live. One more thing, i'm finally done with my play. It was great, i think i told you about that, at my school(i'm a 12th grader *hope do don't think less of me*) we had done the play Les Miserables. It was great. Also, you should never worry about me not reviewing, i always will(unless i die) which isn't going to happen soon. I can't wait for next chapter. Your fan, i love you(not in a weird sexual way).
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From ANON - Anon on March 06, 2005
What happened? Dont leave it there!!!! PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!!!!!!!!!!!! Cant wait to read next chapter. But let me tell you, you have a great talent there. Excellent writing.

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From ANON - PJ on March 06, 2005
Well I just read the chapter agian and I realized I asked what happened to Kagome's family but they were not in the room at the end of the chapter so forget I even asked. that is what I get for staying up so late I get confused. *cross eyed* Keep writing!!!!!
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From ANON - PJ on March 06, 2005
Here I am again up late reading this wonderful story. I am glad they were all able to get through the well. I am also REALLY glad Inuyasha got his cute little ears back LOL You did a great job with this chapter the trip to the hospital was cool that guy telling INuyasha what he was doing I am sure that helped. And Inuyasha kept telling himself that they would help her so he wouldn't "freak" was sweet. I totally didn't expect you to bring in Jiniji (sp?) I think this is the first time I have read a story that included him in the future. I can really see him becoming a doctor after seeing him in the anime/manga. He was so kind and always helped people. He helped those villagers after they were going to hurt him and he even told Rim where to get the herb to help Jaken. I just loved Rin in that episode she was so sweet and determined to help "Jaken-sama. I have seen all the anime most of it in Japanes w/English subtitles and it is so much better than the English language. Anyway not much else to babble about you did a great job I am just wondering where everybody went. I mean if all were gone but Kagome was her family gone too? You will most likely explain it all in the next chapter what Kagome was supposed to do and I hope in the next few chapters that Kouga gets his "big clue/hint" and figures out that Kagome only may like him as a friend. She might not after what he tried in the last chapter. Here I am babbling LOL. babble, babble, babble... LOL ok done now I will wait for the next chapter.
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From ANON - Stuey on March 05, 2005
well, that was definatley a change of pace from the last chapter. kinda odd really. i like the idea of putting all the demons in the present tho, that was awesome. anyway, you told me to ask if i got confused with any of the terms so i got 2 more for you. angst, and what were you refering to when you said cannon? thanx, and keep up the good work
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From ANON - Stuey on March 05, 2005
well, i guess juice liked it... juice is a personal friend of mine who i refered to your story. while talking to him after he read it i was trying to recount an episode of the anime series, when i relized that it was part of your story (the chapter with the birds fertilizing the village.) you have done so well in writing this that i'm actually getting it confused with the real thing.... again, i must praise you for this excelent work.
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From ANON - Juice on March 05, 2005
damn way to good polease post the next 1 please
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From ANON - Juice on March 04, 2005
DAMN this is the best lemon i have ever read please please plaese get the reast out

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From ANON - Sarah on March 04, 2005
Whew! What a fight! I'm glad that everyone got a piece of the action (Go Sessy!)

I'm torn about Kikyou tough. On the one hand, I'm glad she had a happy-ish ending. Afterall, she wasn't a *bad* person...but on the other, I still really dislike her. I guess the Inu/Kag shipper in me just cries out for a beat-down. Oh well. If I want things to be different, I can write my own damn fic. XD

Noooo, Inuyasha! You're so much cooler as a half demon! *cries*
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From ANON - Vikki on March 04, 2005
The tears are coming...she will not die the lemon isn't here yet. Please tell me she WILL NOT die. Ok. i feel a little better. As for the last battle have to say VERY nice. i was a little worried much of the time the last battle with Naraku sceens suck but yours was good. Once more i have to bow down to you. Next, I CAN NOT BELIEVE YOU LEFT IT RIGHT THERE. The pain, it's so overwhelming, i'm going to die if you don't update soon. I'm sorry all my reviews have been lat see. I'm on stage crew for the play Les Miserables, which i'm guessing you have already heard of that before. Ok i have to go. Update soon. Your Dying Fan.
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