Adult-FanFiction.org : Inuyasha / Yashahime

Reviews for Beautiful Souls

By : BrethlessM

From ANON - flrsblue on March 04, 2005
oh this story is great!!!! i love it!!!! please update again soon i must know how it ends. i havent enjoyed a story like this in some time now so i would hate it if you didnt finish it.
Report Review
From ANON - Anon on March 03, 2005
Wow!!!!! that was excellent. I love it, I really really love. Please Update soon!!!!! I want to know what happens to Kagome.
Report Review
From ANON - PJ on March 03, 2005
Wow!!! I don't know what to say!! This was an awesome chapter the whole battle scene was great and very well written. You did a great job in writing all of that. I am glad Kohaku is alive. I loved that Sessy showed up and helped. Even Shippo did his part. I kind of figured that either Kikyo or Kagome would end up being the ones to finally get rid of Naraku because his soul had to be destroyed. I like how you are taking things from the anime and the manga after the anime stopped. I read those online so I know what happened to Kagura and how Inuyasha got that new attack for his sword (the one that absorbs 'energy or whatever') I hope they can get through the well ok if not I hope Kagome is ok. I do have a small request "please, please don't make Inuyasha stay human" I would miss his ears LOL. He is so cute as a hanyou but he is a cutie as a human as well. I would just prefer him to stay the way he is which is hanyou but if you do make him human I will still read and try not to be too upset. You can tell how much Inuyasha loves her he held her hand and carried her to the well even though she was still purifying him. He didn't hesitate at all. If he does stay human I hope he doesn't 'regret' doing all that or be mad and make Kagome feel bad (not that he would want ot hurt her) Also if he stays human I hope Kagome doesn't feel bad if Inuyasha is ok with what happened. I wish Kouga would get a clue he is still thinking of making Kagome his mate when she rejected him yet again. about the red scarf I went back and read chapter again a few days ago and figured it out. So you don't really need to change things I figure kouga took it sometime when he was "holding Kagome's hands" and nobody noticed or something like that. Keep writing sorry I babble so much
Report Review
From ANON - Stuey on March 03, 2005
wow, i love it. you said that fight scenes were hard, but you did well with this. i thought i had caught you in a plot hole when miroku sucked up the poison insects and didn't get posoned. but you ended up covering that later. as for the WAFF thing, thanx for being understanding. oddly enough, i checked the story codes right before you posted ch. 10. yes, i was up waiting for you to post it. looks like im gonna have to join the club with PJ and Vikki. as for the sequel, waste of time.. are you nuts, you're an exelent writer. i say go for it. and as for the bitch thing, thats what i expected. you have to keep in mind the difference in morals between japan and the u.s. (things like master roshi drinking a big mug of water thats foaming at he top in the u.s.) any way, that being the case, im glad you stayed with it, and kept true to who the characters really are. keep up the awesome work, and please post again soon ( i MUST know what happens next) oh, and best of luck with your real book and the play
Report Review
From ANON - Stuey on March 02, 2005
awesome work, can't wait for more. i ended up staying up until 3 a.m. reading all the chapters you've posted so far. i went and looked through the reviews, looks like you've got a few fans following you. anyway, im glad to see that this is updated so constantly, cuz im really geting into it. love the use of the japanese. the only thing i really dont like about this is the whole inuyasha calling kagome a bitch thing, but ive never seen the japanese manga so maybe that was an original part of it that got cut in the u.s., part of the whole 'dog' demon thing. anyway i cant help but think abusive relationship when i see that, even though that definatly isn't the case. 1 more thing, you'll have to forgive the noobish question, but what is 'WAFF'
Report Review
From ANON - Vikki on March 01, 2005
Wait, i just read your other fans review and it made me remember about that red scarf. What was that. Did kagome give him that or something. What was it. Please tell us it's hunting my mind now.
Report Review
From ANON - Vikki on March 01, 2005
Once more i'm here to say...I LOVE THIS STORY. At first i was getting really mad, because of Kouga, but it was the best one yet that i have read. She hit him, i loved that. Also he has a necklace too. I'm so happy right now. I still will wish them to be friends, so i hope that they will make up. Also he asked her to be his mate (crying here). I loved that, and that he finally came to see the Kikyo isn't the real kikyo and that he is meant to protect kagome. I Love this chapter. As for that little lime moment there. If the lemon is anything like that i'm going to love, i just hope it's much longer. Most likely it will be so i don't have to worry. I love long lemons as long as they're well writen. I have had really good lemons that aren't very long, and it gets me so sad. But i know that yours will be GREAT so i don't have to worry at all. I can't wait to read the next chapter i hope no one dies. It will just make me cry, but i don't think you'll kill off inuyasha or kagome. If you do, i will never stop crying. Ok, i think i', done now. talk to you later, and remember this was a great chapter. Your Fan
Report Review
From ANON - Sarah on February 28, 2005
Man! Not only is this a great Inu-fic, it's a great fic period! It's cannon without being boring and uninventive and it's got a great blend of angst to romance. (I hate those fics where the angst just drags on and on for chapters without reliefe.)

I'm excited to read the upcoming chapters!
Report Review
From ANON - PJ on February 28, 2005
Sorry what I meant about that 'red scarf' that Kouga had was how did he get it?
Report Review
From ANON - PJ on February 28, 2005
Great chapter! Here I am after midnite reading your story. this was a wonderful chapter and Kouga is a character that I sometimes love and other time I just want to strangle with his 'my woman' stuff. Kikyou well when they thought she died in the anime I was like GREAT and when she came back (because Kagome helped her) I was like well 'poopy' why couldn't she stay dead. Anyway Inuyasha could be right but then again Kikyo was devoted to protecting the jewel 50yrs ago and it is possible that she would have sacrificed a person to protect the jewel. Also she wanted to be a normal woman and was (to me anyway) only looking out for her own interests when she convinced Inuyasha to wish himself human. I liked that Kagome put a rosary on Kouga too... it is too bad she didn't use a different word so she doesn't 'sit' them both at the same time. I am glad Inuyasha finally asked Kagome to be his mate and she accepted I supposed Kouga will do his best to stop it. He just doesn't get a clue I mean Kagome trusts Inuyasha enough to fall asleep on his back while he is running. But when Kouga carries her she is scared but of course when he carried her it was like a 'sack of potatoes' I would be scared too. I also thought it was cool how Inuyasha pointed out that Kouga didn't know anything about him. But what was that piece of 'red cloth' that Kouga had? Anyway done babbling keep writing update when you can I hope they can save Kohaku and that Kikyo isn't "up to something"
Report Review
From ANON - nabikineum on February 28, 2005
I think you do a really good job of balancing dislike and pity for Kikyo. I don't know how the non-Inuyasha characters don't get around to smiting her for her soul-sucking ways, but that's just me.

I'd be all critical, but I think it's a really good story. Thanks for posting it. I look forward to more.
Report Review
From ANON - Vikki on February 25, 2005
Where to start. Ok, yes i loved this chapter the results were great, not what i was hoping for but it did for me. As for your other book, it sounds great. Also my best friend is gay too. I FIGHT FOR THEIR RIGHTS TO MARRY. Ok, i feel better. Now back to the story. Kim, girl, you know i'm loving it or i would be writing every time you update. As for your surgery, can i have that done too. I'm just kidding i think i'm pretty, maybe not what others think, but it's what i think that matters. Once again i will say "I Can't wait for the lemon". I'm beginning to think that i'm the only one that reads fanfics and read them for the lemons and the romanic. I hope not, who cares. Well, until you update again we love you. Sleep well and don't over do it. Your fan vikki.
Report Review
From ANON - PJ on February 25, 2005
Cool chapter. I really liked this one it was a nice balance between all characters. I liked that Inuyasha is making and effort to spend time with Kagome alone and trying to convey his feelings as best he can right now. I hope Kouga doesn't mess it up or that Kagome finally makes him understand she is not 'his woman' I mean she told him that right from the beginning. And he had said she can sense the shards so she is perfect for him.... Then he said he loved her (all this was said in front of everybody and Kagome said he was 'mental' LOL) Anyway I really liked Sango/Miroku you did great with them. And Shippou was sweet too him doing his best to help even though he is so little. Keep writing you are doing great.
Report Review
From ANON - Anon on February 23, 2005
awwww so good!... i cant think of anything else to say...
Report Review
From ANON - Hello!! on February 22, 2005
Wow!!!! I love it!!!!! you are a great writer... you have a great talent I felt part of it and being honest in some parts I could even feel the emotion that was domaining the scene. PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!
Report Review