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By : BrethlessM
  • From ANON - PJ on February 22, 2005
    Woo Hoo!!! Great chapter. I hope when Kikyo said join together to defeat Narku that she didn't mean both pieces of her soul joining together unless maybe for Kikyo's part to rejoin Kagome like it should be. I am not a big Kikyo fan but she seemed alright in this chapter at least she didn't try to kill anybody and actually helped some. It is too bad that Inuyasha thought she hurt Kagome but after everything that has happened I guees I can't blame him. Keep writing this is very good don't push yourself too hard though. BTW what kind of book/novel are you writing?
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  • From ANON - vikki on February 22, 2005
    HOW DEAR HE SAY THAT IN A MOMENT LIKE THAT. So someone was making her have those dreams, understandable. Happy i hope next chapter Inuyasha will tell her the way he feels. I love those moments when he does. Ok, i do remember you telling me about chapter 15, sorry i was just so obsessed with this story. Update when you can. Your fan.
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  • From ANON - psyco_chick32 on February 22, 2005
    You are SO bookmarked. Update more! This is a really really good story and I want more!!! :)
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  • From ANON - Vikki on February 21, 2005
    I noticed that you havn't updated lately so i was just making sure you are ok. I now that you said that you didn't want to update every night that is ok, but first hear me. I have been stuck looking at this fic about every ten minutes hoping that a new chapter is up. I think i more then obsessed, but hey we all are a little. So when you have the chance UPDATE. with love vikki.
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  • From ANON - PJ on February 19, 2005
    Wow great update!!! Don't make yourself too tired with posting, working on the play and your other writing. I write some and posted some at ff.net and at another site. I haven't written in a while. One of my stories just seemed to 'suck everything out of me' if you know what I mean. Anyway this was a great chapter I totally loved it when Kagome shot that arrow that killed that youki. I seem the meditating is helping and I am glad Miroku is looking out for things by telling Inuyasha that if she gains power to fast it could be bad if she doesn't have control. I also like to see Inuyasha looking out for Kagome in his own way. Poor Kagome having those dreams I hope she can make sense of them soon. Maybe when she get more training and better control they will either go away or make sense. And now Kikyo shows up this could be good or bad. But Kikyo saying she needs Kagome's assistance should help if she asks it right and doesn't 'talk down' to Kagome. Keep writing this is good.
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  • From ANON - PJ on February 17, 2005
    Cool chapter! I am glad Kagome has decided to get some training. Sometimes I think she tries to hard to "not" be like Kikyo. And in her trying to not be like Kikyo she is sometimes being more like her. I mean when I was in high school my sister was a few years ahead of me but we had some of the same teachers and at first they expected me to get the straight "A" that she did. One of them even mentioned it to my mother at parent/teacher day that he had to remember that I wasn't my sister and not compare us. I learned to just be me and do my best that is all that was 'required' that I do my best (of course I don't look like my sister though) .... So back to the story all Kagome needs to do is her best and not let the stuff about being like Kikyo bother her so much. She does her best and people will soon see Kagome and not Kikyo. It seems like both Inuyasha & Kagome are letting Kikyo come between them more then she actually is. I understand Inuyasha wanting to keep his promise, etc but don't let your 'duty' get in the way of you being happy. That is exactly what Kikyo she let her duty to the jewel prevent her from 'living' As for Kagome she needs to quit thinking that all Inuyasha thinks about is Kikyo. *sigh* I am done babbling for now keep writing I really like this story.
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  • From ANON - psyco_chick32 on February 17, 2005
    I really, really, REALLY like this piece!! I hope you write more... I LOVE InuKag fics and think Kikyo needs to just go away, lol
    I look forawrd to you writing more, this is really well done!!
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  • From ANON - PJ on February 16, 2005
    Yay another update!!! I loved the gift they gave her. It was real sweet that they made it nd now she has her own bow and doesn't need to "borrow" one all the time. Plus this one is "Kagome's" and not Kikyou's. I hope Inuyasha is able to tell Kagome his feelings sooner or later. I understand why he doesn't want to promise anything until things are settled with Kikyou. In a way he is a two timer and in a way not since he doesn't want to give Kagome false hope. I just wish he would at least explain why he can't promise anything to her or at least tell Kagome that he doesn't see her as Kikyo. I loved the whole dance part of the story and Inuyasha trying to help by talking to Houjo. I am also glad Kagome finally told Houjo how she felt or didn't feel. Maybe the kiss that Inuyasha gave Kagome will help thing but I have a feeling Kagome will "poke" at it until she believes that Inuyasha was kissing Kikyo.... somtimes Kagome just upsets me she just has to "over think" stuff I guess you could say. Anyway keep writing I look forward to updates. Oh and I think that Kagome should also say sorry for sitting him so much Inuyasha was only trying to help I mean she did tell him she didn't have feelings for Houjo but yet she was being so 'wishy washy' about it until Inuyasha kind of 'pushed the issue' (now all she has to to is the same with Kouga while Inuyasha is there because Kagome told Kouga 'no' right from the beginning) OK done babbling now LOL
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  • From ANON - PJ on February 15, 2005
    This was a sweet chapter I loved the gift he gave her. I see Kagome is realizing she doesn't have that much in common with her friends as she used to. And the stuff about her being in better shape, etc was kind of funny if you think about it. Here she is suppose to be sick so much and she probably could out last most if not all of her class. Kagome's mom is nice too telling him not to get caught. and Kagome finally fell asleep after she knew Inuyasha was there to keep watch. Update when you can this is good. And good luck with the play!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 15, 2005
    i take japanese and akai mena red not gosai! great story by the way keep updating as fast as you can!PLEASE!!!
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  • From ANON - PJ on February 14, 2005
    Cool update. Man I am glad Kagome didn't get absorbed by that guy. I think Inuyasha should calmly explain to Shippo about that powder stuff. It could have been alot worse also Shippo should have been able to smell the guy unless he was down wind or something. He probably covered his scent so nobody could smell him. Anyway nice chapter did anybody from the past get Kagome a birthday present? Does this mean Kagome will be going on that camping trip and will she have to 'fend' off Hojo and her friends good intentions? I know you will answer all my questions in the later chapters. I will wait keep writing!!!
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  • From ANON - PJ on February 13, 2005
    This sounds pretty interesting please do continue. I liked the addition of the glossary for the Japanese terms. Keep writing I want to know what else she got for her birthday. I think Kagome didn't think about the camping trip because with her other 'duties' in the past the trip didn't really seem that important compared to fighting things like Naraku. Kagome just kind of grew up a bit more then her friends. While they were worried about boys she was worried if she and her friends were going to make through the nest battle. Anyway update again soon
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  • From ANON - vikki on February 13, 2005
    i just loved it, please update soon. I don't understand why you haven't got many reviews i just love it. It was really good, and the plot. I can't wait to read what happens next. I hope there is a good lemon between inuyasha and kagome. I just love that pairing. PLEASE don't keep me waiting, update soon even if it's just for me to read it. It'll be worth it.
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