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By : BrethlessM
  • From ANON - PJ on May 31, 2005
    Hey am back read the last 2 chapters they were great. I loved how you brought everything together. Inuyasha/Kagome got some answers to their questions. You did a wonderful job. Poor little Shippou he really is so brave... that doesn't mean he isn't afraid now and then it just means he does the best he can to protect those he can. Can't wait for the next chapter. I am sorry that the next chapter will be the last for this wonderful story. *sniffle* Keep writing
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  • From ANON - Inuzands on May 31, 2005
    Excellent as always! And I loved your description of evil. You made is so that I could actually see and smell and taste what evil is and why we fear it. I'm sad to see this story come to an end, even though I know all stories do, but I hope to see more from you in the future. :)Until the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - vikki on May 31, 2005
    NO, i'm so so so so sorry about that last chapter. I missed one.NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. it's the end of the world i'm so sorry. My brother got wrose and i'm so afraid for him. I haven't left his side these last two weeks. I love him a lot and i don't want to loss him. I'm sorry that i missed a chapter...me miss one...crys her heart out. I feel like shit for doing that. Now to the story..the passion is dying out girl. Yet the ending fight was well worth it. that was one of the best fights ever written...hell it was the best. The fight with naraku wasn't even this good in my eyes. My favoirte part was when Kagome had that vision of every ones past lives, mostly inuyasha's. It was so perfect. The emotions within me rose up and i cried knowing everything was going to be ok. Also when Miroku told Sango to go on without him and to save their baby...cryed. He risked everything, but she loved him so much that she wouldn't let him go. I now what that feels like, gods. I hope the last chapter has the arrival of the children...dying to know what they're going to be. I hope for a lemon, but not sure how that'll work out...but you now i love them. Well, i hope to read the last chapter soon and i will NOT miss this one. crys...still feeling bad. Keep up the GREAT work kim. I have never read better. Forever your undying fan VIkki
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  • From ANON - Fran on May 31, 2005
    Again, another great chapter! I can't wait for the next. I'm glad that you are doing another chapter, that way I don't have to imagine a description of the babies. Great work!!

    My story is call "Mark of Intent" there's only two chapters right now because I have school to finish. I will be updateing no later than the 15 of June. Check it out and let me know what you think.
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  • From ANON - Diane on May 31, 2005
    Kim.....Great climatic ending!! I loved the hole story and I cant waite for the one shpts, espically about the babies!! but, rember I told you I never scoffed at your story? You made me scoff in this chapter!!!! Inuyasha's kimino can't catch on fire, nore can his leg get burned because it it the protective robe of the fire mouse. (yes people is mouse in Japanese, they changed it to rat when dubbed so it sound more manly) Any who, I still loved your story, and Im sure you knew that, and I believe in artistic freedom, even in writing, so I didnt scoff to much ;) Love Ya sis, great story!!!
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  • From ANON - Kelsey on May 31, 2005
    I know I already reviewed, but I can't help it, I'm totally hooked, I can't stop reading!
    so...I guess that means there is only one thing to do huh? *gets down on hands and knees* please, PLEASE write a tid bit more! AHHHHHH! I'm so addicted, I think I need to start a help circle, write a book about my obsession and make millions as I strike it big when I get my book on the Oprah book club list. yes, it's perfect! *insert evil laugh* you know, that really doesn't sound all that evil does it? I don't think it really deserved an evil laugh...wait...wait... let me put it in german...Ich bin mich so hingegeben, denke ich, dass ich einen Hilfenkreis, zu schreiben ein Buch um meine Besessenheit und zu machen Millionen anfangen muss, während ich es groß streike, wenn ich mein Buch auf der Oprah Buchklub Liste. ja erhalte, ist es prima! there, that sounds much more evil does it not? hahah i love that language!
    anywho, the real purpose of this long comment of hell was to inform you that your novel is AMAZING, and just...keep up the good work I guess!
    well have a nice evening!
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  • From ANON - Diane on May 28, 2005
    Wat to go...gotta leave me hanging? Damn you!:) The descriptions in this chapter are amazing, I felt like I was the one climbing through the mountain. Once again all the little datails added up to make a great descriptive chapter! I cant wait to see how you apply this talent to our story. I would like to draw just a concept sketch of how the Snake Queen should look, so e-mail me and let me know how you want her to look. Don't get me wrong, I like your lemons, but I do love that you chose to make a fan~fic with a real story behind it. It shows you that sex isint everything, espically in a good realationship, and in a good story!! Keep up the good work Kim, in a few years or sooner I expect to be buying your novles on the best seller lists at the Barns & Nobles....but who will draw your book covers?..... ;)
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  • From ANON - silverhentai on May 28, 2005
    Wow!! This story is really awesome, the lemons, the plot, the characters, the situations, everything!!
    You are really talented, I can't wait to read what's coming next. If kagome's nightmare would come true and why if that is the case.
    Does the fight would risk the babies' lives?? Oh well, I guess I'll have to wait to find out ne?


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  • From ANON - New Fan on May 24, 2005
    Great chapter. I wonder how much that Elk youkai can put together about Inuyasha and Kagome?
    In the Kagome's dream, she only saw herself and Inyasha; will Sango and Miroku show up to
    destroy the snake queen? Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Kumiko on May 24, 2005
    Awwwww, a cookie for me? I feel so loved! *huggles* Great chappy, and I love the story about the Sacred Dog. It's so darn cute, especially with this being a Inuyasha fanfic. Lol. Well, I can't wait till the next chappy! See ya then! :D
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  • From ANON - cjflutterbye on May 24, 2005
    evil cliff hanger! Looks like you have an action chapter to write! I'm looking forward to it.
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  • From ANON - Fran on May 24, 2005
    Great chapter! Yea, I know how those bunnies can be. I keep going in different directions with my story too. Can't decide which way to send chapter 3. But anyway, love this chapter! Can't wait to see what happen's next! I will be looking for your next update!
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  • From ANON - Juice on May 24, 2005
    Damn i don't know what to say but i really really really want to see MORE. damn this is going to be grate . well see you next monday and thank you for explaining how InuYasha got kagome pergnet now the fun really starts >:-)

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  • From ANON - Kelsey on May 23, 2005
    Darn you and your addicting fan fiction! *shakes fist in an angry mannor* I should study for my finals, but I can't help it, I feel I must continue to read your story! It's...so...good! English seems so unimportant compaired to this!
    Anywho, job well done! This is by far the best fan fic i have ever read!
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  • From ANON - Lori on May 22, 2005
    Oh my goodness!!! Write more this is fantastic. I think I started reading this story three days ago. This story just keep a great pace. Congrats on the Nomination! You deserve it most definitely!
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