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By : BrethlessM
  • From ANON - VIKKI on April 25, 2005
    Lemon just for me...i feel loved. ONCE MORE WE"RE BACK. i hope that you didn't go overboard trying to get this chapter up. Ok, where to start, i know, miroku about to hit a child that was great. Sad, but great...i love how inuyasha rushed right in there to stop him that was good. I would, personally, beat the shit out of him if he ever tried that to a kid. As for him being controled that made it all the better, we know that miroku would never hit a child. Now, on to the new evil here....i like it. Now rin, the way sango is teaching her fight and kagome is the educational stuff that was VERY SMART. That made my day...you're getting a glimpes into what they're going to be like as mothers. Ok, i'll leave you know...you have much to do. but remember THIS IS A GREAT STORY AND DON"T FORGET ABOUT US....with love your fan forever Vikki...:)
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  • From ANON - ravenshadow on April 25, 2005
    I was beginning to worry about the plot, but this chapter was awsome. I really like the twist and the drama of Miroku being under the control of one of the snake youkai. I really liked the show of power also. I can't wait to see what is going to happen next!! So please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Stuey on April 25, 2005
    wow, you included a TON of outside references for this one... ranma 1.2 (i need to watch that some time) the beauty and the beast thing, and rin wanting the yellow kimono.. man this is gonna be good. you'll be happy to know that i'm looking at your work in a different way now, looking at ways to improve my own writing. you're an inspiration to me in that aspect, and i hope that some day my work will be half as good as yours :P. one piece of criticism here though, and thats the lack of a definition for 'ohayo gosaimasu' i dont think that one has been mentioned before, so for those who dont know, it means good morining. if it has been, then well, forget i said that. keep it up.
    REVIEWERS- check out the website (http://theotherside.125mb.com for those who missed it). like kim said there can and will be changes made to it. if you have any suggestions, let me and kim know. also, this site is the biggest undertakeing i've ever done, so there are likley still errors (spelling and otherwise) on it despite my best efforts. if you catch anything, dont hesitate to email me.
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  • From ANON - PJ on April 25, 2005
    yay!!! Nice update I loved how they "put their heads together" to figure out what to teach Rin. Poor Miroku being "controled" it was cute the way Inuyasha put it about seeing so many of them controled over the year that he could tell when it was going on. I liked the fight scene and how they worked together. I am glad they are all going to the mountian. Keep writing update soon.
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  • From ANON - Juice on April 25, 2005
    YES this is kick ass stuey has been showing me the web site seeing what i think. Well i needed that now i can't what to read chapter 20 well see you then
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  • From ANON - Diane on April 25, 2005
    Ah Kim, I can't write what I tell you every day, but once again, the wait was worth it. Another great chapter, showing the bond of family and love, while still staying in character! Great Job, I am amazed once again!
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  • From ANON - Aleke on April 11, 2005
    ahhhh, i read this all night, i was tired as hell the next day, but it was worth it! i thought about it all day...but then again, i'm starting to think i may be a bit of a nerd...oh well, I'M HAPPY! this story makes me happy!
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  • From ANON - Diane on April 07, 2005
    Kim.....did I ever tell you how much I love ya ;) Any who, I loved this chapter. Unlike most writers, you are unpradictable, and I love it. Most importantly, your very original, and I havent seen a story with all these elements in it at once!! YAY FOR KIM!!! I also love how you rembered that they are in the past, and silly things like band-aid's and needles (and ramen for that fact, even though thats not your origional idea) that are every day things to us are sure to ohh and ahhh 'em back then. Well, keep it coming. btw....Im almost done with "THE KISS" scene!!
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  • From whirleeq on April 07, 2005
    This is a beautiful piece of work. You certainly write like you have been writing for years! I truly love your portrayal of the characters - they are written extremely in character, and this story is right up there with anything written by resmiranda, wheezambu, and sueric. Although your summary needs work - I almost bypassed this story entirely because the summary appeared to be too... generic. Which would have been an utter shame. I have only read the first five chapters so far, and usually don't review until I've read a fic in its entirety, but since I'm so darned impressed, I couldn't help but to jump out and leave this little note! Thank you for such a great, great read = fun, poignant, emotional with just the right touch of angst, and very well written!
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  • From ANON - BakaInuGirl on April 07, 2005
    Once again an excellent chapter! I'm in love with the Ji-chan/Kaede thing! Chicken pox? Harsh! I cannot express my love for this story in words, just know that I look forward to EVERY update. Poor Sess, he cares so much for Rin but has no idea how to show it. He's more defunct that Inu is! I love it! Can't wait for your next update. P.S. Can Sess and Inu take care of a few of my co-workers?? Hasta la next update! B.I.G.
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  • From ANON - stuey on April 06, 2005
    ahhh, its here at last. good chapter. its gonna be cool to see how rin turns out. 1 week around the inu-gang ought to have quite a profound effect. i never would have thought that was the reason sesshomaru payed them a visit. seems he's slowly accepting them as family, and i'm anxious to see how his personality changes as the sequel is written. anyway, i loved the story at the end, great way to let off a little steam i bet.
    NEWS FOR THE MASSES; the website is about 90% done. pretty much all it needs is a name, chapters 17 and 18 to be added, and i still need to build dianes image gallery. once thats done i'm going to upload it and we'll be ready to go.
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  • From ANON - Vikki on April 06, 2005
    hello....from one, if not your bigest, FAN. TEHE...lol. You got to love me sometimes...:). Ok, let me started with this....I'M loveing the whole seshh/rin thing...alway been a fan of theres. Also, i know that sessh wasn't going to hurt kagome....so it had to be something to do with rin. Also don't worry about taking forever getting this chapter up...it was still worth every hour i spent checking here to see if it's up yet. ALSO THIS IS THE BIGGEST THING. i heard that THIS SITE NEEDS MONEY...if that is so i'm ask, begging, demends, all that have money to donate it. I did some money...but i'm a teenager and i have very little. Still i did what i had to to keep this place. Now, back to the story....waiting for another lemon, hope it comes soon. Also your hero's sessh and inu. saving you that was so cute. I hope that someone isn't that mean to you. If so then your fans will come and kick there asses, and we'll bring the HOTTIES along to. lol. Hope that you update soon. With love, your fan Vikki
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 06, 2005
    Great chapter!!!!! I love it!!! I'll never get tired of reading this fanfic...the ability you have is very impresive use it well(just like you are doing now) Can't wait to read next chapter. Update as soon as you can please!!!!
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  • From ANON - Mike *articgreen* on April 06, 2005
    This is my first review on this site. This is my fav story, period. That was a great way to get shessmrou to smile, i always wondered what would get him to smile. This one of the few stories that actully have a plot. I cant wait to see what happens with Rin and her training. i also want to know what happens with "snake women". I have no qualms about this fic pleeeaaasssse continue.

    P.S. im a guy who loves love stories.
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  • From ANON - PJ on April 06, 2005
    Well this was a good chapter. I don't have much to say I did like the 'insight' to Sessy you did a great job. I hope Miroku is ok after being bitten by that snake ting. Not much to say this is a great story. I am headed out the door will have to come back and read "The Brief, Yet Violent Tale of Revenge - In which Kimberlee’s Co-Worker Lu* Get’s What She Deserves." Sorry your move didn't go well. Update when you can.
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