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Reviews for Beautiful Souls

By : BrethlessM

From ANON - Juice on April 06, 2005
THANK YOU i needed that well then the next one should be really interesting an on the little short you wort thats funny as hell LOL

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From ANON - anaidil on March 31, 2005
I must tell you....I completely love this story so keep up...update as soon as posible....PLEASE!!!!!!!!

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From ANON - Diane on March 30, 2005
OMG...Dun Dun Dunnnnnnnnnn....Sessy, please be good. Its getting sooooo interesting and you leave me hanging. Rember everyone! By the Inuyasha First Response Pregnency (sp?) test...its 100% accurate. Kim, WTG, you are the best fan fic author I have every met. Granpda, Mama, and the part with Inu and Shippo, all the descriptions are just as they would be if Takahashi wrote it her self! Wonderful! Once again you out did your self! Till the next chapter......
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From ANON - queen bean on March 28, 2005
hi again... just wanted to say i really loved the lemon, it was worth the wait and all the effort you put into it, and where the story is headed... but you better give us a happy ending! at least a mostly happy one... sniffs...holds back tears at the thought of inuyasha and kagome not making it out ok... but i know you'll pull through. what can i say? i know a lot fo people don't like the endings where everything works out, but i'm not one of them! i'm a sucker for a happy ending. i'll stick it out with ya and see where you're going.

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From ANON - BakaInuGirl on March 27, 2005
Once again a wonderful chapter! As per your author's note I am reviewing! Haha! Sango's pregnant! I had NO IDEA! You were sneaky with that one! Thanks for writing Sess in, I mean I know it was your plan and all but I'd like to think I peer pressured you into it too! J/K! Awesome chapter! So, um... how does Jinenji have all this power??? I mean he just whips up documentations all over the place. You sure he doesn't have some inside tai-youkai help? Oh! And Shippo should totally call Inuyasha Oyaji at some point! It kind of means "My Old Man" rather than the formal "Father" Otou-san. I just think it would be hilarious to see Inuyasha's reaction to that since he doesn't take too kindly to Father and since he tends to call Myouga 'jiji' in the manga anyways. Just a some babble which you can ignore since your fic is kickass anyway! Can't wait for the next chapter! B.I.G.
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From ANON - Just some advice on March 27, 2005
Please quit inserting numbered footnotes. This is not a formal paper; it's a fanfic. The numbers within the paragraphs are annoying in the extreme. I've written and read enough graduate research papers to fill a large closet and I don't want to feel like I'm reading one when I read a fan story. If you think Inuyasha fans have suddenly forgotten the story elements of the manga or anime, or that they have sudden amnesia and can't remember who the characters are, then include a glossary at the end (although why you think anyone reading an Inuyasha fanfic is unfamiliar with the story is beyond me).

This isn't a flame actually, even though I sound bitchy. I actually like your story, however the distraction of the numbered footnotes and your assumption that you have to explain who each character is and/or each story element is annoying.

Please continue your story and try to relax your style. Thank you.
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From ANON - Stuey on March 27, 2005
doors... how could they possibley built their house without doors. oh well, got to hve some fun right :P anyway, ch 16 wasnt bad at all, even though it did slow down some. anyway, i'd love to write more, but i have work to do around the house (the basement flooded :( ) *sigh* got to wait an entire week now...
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From ANON - Vikki on March 27, 2005
What's he going to do? Oh, no i can't think.*jumping around thinking the worest*. Ok, it can't be that bad i hope. Ok, i feel better. Sorry this review is late, vacation time is here. Happy for me. Just like always this chapter was great. My thoughts on what inuyasha smelled was right. It's great sango is too. Now the shippo thing had me in tears..He can call them mama and papa now. I feel so happy. I also hope that sango's brother is going to get over the guilt and be a kid once more. Well, until next time. Love ya, your fan.
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From ANON - Juice on March 27, 2005
Now this is good both Sango and Kagome are going to have kids. This is just to much fun now i can't wait to see what Sesshoumaru wants to see Kagome about but i guess I'll have to wait till wednesday to find out and happy easter

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From ANON - PJ on March 27, 2005
Nice chapter!! I really liked reading a bit more about Kohaku and his thoughts. I am glad Inuyasha put Shippou's mind to rest about being his father and all. I kind of figured when I read about Sango being sick several days in a row that she was going to have a baby too. Not much else to say about this chapter it was really good. I just wonder what Sessy wants now. He could be a bit more polite about asking to see someone. You don't just barge in and demand to see someone especially if they are believed to be kami.... I don't think the villagers will take too kindly to this. But maybe it has something to do with that 'snake lady'. Keep writing I look forward to the next update.
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From ANON - Vikki on March 24, 2005
First my boyfriend says that he is always nice to me, which he always is. I loved the whole chatper. The mountain and their two weapons being there. I think i understand what you're trying to say there. Also, i have a really good guess on what inuyasha smelt at the end. TEHE. I'm breathing don't worry i'm ok. I also love the history lesson like. The three gods, you were so good with that it most be real. I can't wait for the next chapter to read more. This new evil is sure sounding like a bitch to me. Me and Ton(boyfriend) are waiting to read what is coming next. Love ya, always Vikki

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From ANON - PJ on March 24, 2005
awesome chapter!!!! That shower scene had me thinking about taking a shower myself (a cold one LOL) This snake youki sounds like she is going to be a problem. I wonder if Inuyasha's attack is a bit different now since he recieved his gift from the jewel. I remember he said he hasn't been in any fights when he talked to Sessy. I know he go into a fight on the way back but I don't recall him using the "wind scar" (sorry can't spell the japanese name even though it sounds so much better then "wind scar") I figured that snake queen would want to get rid of the ones that defeated Naraku because at the moment they are the strongest. I also think Kagome is right they need to get back. What I do think is kind of 'stupid' is that the others are patroling alone they are getting over confident. they wouldn't do that before they shouldn't do it now. They may not age but they can still be killed. Anyway great chapter and I know Kouga is in the sequel but will he be back in this story at least to find out that Kagome is taken? Keep writing I look forward to the next update.
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From ANON - Stuey on March 24, 2005
EUREKA!! I'VE GOT IT! i figured out what i didn't like about chapter 11. you said it in your reply to vickie (sry if i spelled that wrong, im tired) you go from this raging battle scene, to this hospital scene, and while that's certainly what would have to happen next in nearly every story, it's 'mundane' in comparison. ok on to this chapter. mmmmm... doughnut ..... i mean lemon. yay for more lemony goodness. glad to see the atention to detail about the area. here's somthing you may or may not have caught on to. the hotel share's a name with one of the minor characters of the anime series. ryokan was some kind of gaurdian for a forest who was corrupted by naraku. any idea if there's a connection? anyway, it kind of startled me when the first time you put in there "his wife". not used to seeing that. i like it though, it kind of makes it more... relizable (am i making up words here?) that they really are together now. anyway, i do have a request, while you're doing the sequel, please do through in a lemon here and there for eveyone to enjoy :P ok, hmm well i'm either off to get some much needed sleep, or get back to working on the website. hmm... tough choice.... hey, wait a second, WHEN IS CH17 can we expect it sat. or are you going to make us wait becuase we're catching up to you? oh well, i guess ill go lose myself in my programming...
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From ANON - BakaInuGirl on March 24, 2005
Thank you again for another fabulous update! Never worry about the inner geek doing the research because as soon as I read this chapter I pulled out my book of the week which happens to be World Mythology (yeah.. I know.. my friends tease me about it too) and checked out the legend of Izanagi no Mikoto and Izanami no Mikoto. I knew I had recognized the names! And I totally agree that it's one of the most interesting creation stories. KAGOME IS TOTALLY PREGNANT! wow.. that was like Tourette's or A.D.D. or BOTH! But I just had to yell it! And who is patrolling ALONE at NIGHT in the Sengoku Jedai???? Have they learned NOTHING?! I can't wait for you to write Sess in. I have a confession to make... I'm a closet Sess Fan-girl. Now don't get me wrong I'm all about the Baka Inu! But Sess does grow on me from time to time. KAGOME'S PREGNANT! Sorry, so excited! And who are the owners of the Inn?!?! Thanks for keeping me on my toes! Can't wait for the next chapter! (Bows in reverence). Thanks!!!! B.I.G.
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From ANON - Juice on March 24, 2005
Damn this is to much fun. I wonder at the end of this chapter if Inuyasha has relized Kagome is pregnant or not well we'll see i guess.
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