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By : BrethlessM

From ANON - Crossbow Trueshot on March 24, 2005
Once again we see another great chapter.......
wish i could write more for now but ill just send u it directly....

Dont get flabbergasted now, pace yourself....we will all wait til u finish as long as u can kepp this excellent qualityup

-The Ever Faithful Crossbow Trueshot
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From ANON - Diane on March 24, 2005
Wow....did I say wow? You never cease to amaze me!! To bad not everyone's relationship is like that....(they'll get sick of eachother) Jk, Im still happy after 3 and a half years, so Im sure thet can make it.....Wonder how many kids will pop out after there rabbit like ways. Im just messing around, Its a great story with another great chapter as usual. Keep it up, keep it comeing! We are all thirsty for more, includeing Inuyasha. ;)
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From ANON - Juice on March 21, 2005
This is great but i guess the ending i was wondering when you would have the other Inuyasha and Kagome in this. that was the best way to end this chapter. well now for the honeymoon this is to much fun
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From ANON - Crossbow Trueshot on March 21, 2005
OMG I love you ....Glomps!.

Looks over a extreamly ticked off gf.....backs away slowly from glomp

Wow that was a fantatic chapter....so long and beautiful ....and long Sweet
And I may have picked up on your little plothole/foreshadowing ill have to chat with you about that sometime...one author to another ..wink wink

anyway it was fantastic...the love scene,the pure amount of realworld and historical detail in the wedding scenes.....you pulled one great story from that kawaii little head of yours so far

keep up the great work!

-The Ever Faithful Crossbow Trueshot
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From ANON - Crossbow Trueshot on March 21, 2005
OMG I love you ....Glomps!.

Looks over a extreamly ticked off gf.....backs away slowly from glomp

Wow that was a fantatic chapter....so long and beautiful ....and long Sweet
And I may have picked up on your little plothole/foreshadowing ill have to chat with you about that sometime...one author to another ..wink wink

anyway it was fantastic...the love scene,the pure amount of realworld and historical detail in the wedding scenes.....you pulled one great story from that kawaii little head of yours so far

keep up the great work!

-The Ever Faithful Crossbow Trueshot
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From ANON - Stuey on March 20, 2005
holy crap, that was awesome. I LOVED THE ENDING!!!!! ok, skipping to the begining, i was kind of expecting the lemon between those 2 to wait until after the wedding, so i was kind of surprised when it started right at the begining of the chapter, but the way you worked in in later and making it kind of thier private wedding worked out very very well. its pretty cool about how you actually lresearched how the actual wedding would go, i enjoyed it. was kind of expecting hojou (sp?) to say more to the couple, but then i put myself in his shoes, and really couldn't think of anything else you could really say in that position. glad to hear you're up to ch.19, almost done :D keep up the good work
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From ANON - Vikki on March 20, 2005
I can't breath...that was...THE GREATEST. i mean it, i can't breath. I love it and the wedding, that was so good. All the traditions and everything. You had to have done a lot of research. Also, the whole honeymoon thing. I loved that, and the people that payed for it. Looks like they lived for five hunderd mores, or else they wouldn't have come to that time. That was great. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I still can't breath...ok girl it's ok just relax. BUT IT WAS SO GOOD. The lemon in the beginning even had me going...if you know what i mean.lol. Sorry had to say that. My boyfriend was reading this story with me. He normally does. He really like the lemon, very well writen. The wedding i started cry and he said suck it up. I asked him if our wedding would be that nice. Him being a men an all just walked away. Now if you he was inuyasha....Ok i'm done. He's a sweet boyfriend and i love him. So there...that made him happy. Until next time...with love...your fan vikki. P.S. i still can't breath
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From ANON - ~like-it-matters~ on March 20, 2005
LOVE, LOVE, LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - PJ on March 20, 2005
Wow!!! is all I can say!!! Actually I will be saying more but Wow describes this whole chapter. I lemon was great you did a wonderful job with it. The wedding was nice too and it was great that Keade and Myoga (sp?) were able to come as well. I love that Jiniji and his mate were there as well and that they were able to make Inuyasha "real" in Kagome's time. I wonder if Inuyasha & Kagome helped her mom with that stuff I am pretty sure Jiniji knows them after they lived the 500yrs. It was cute that they gave 'themselves' a honeymoon and they want to pay 'themselves' back. That time line stuff can get confusing. I wonder what they thought when Kagome was born in her time, etc About her falling down the well and how she would come back mad at Inuyasha. I wonder if Kouga lived the 500yrs and if he did do you suppose he would try to get Kagome before she went down the well. Maybe Houjo is actually Kouga LOL just kidding. this was a great chapter I hope there is more I want to know what they do about that 'snake lady' You could make a series or several one shots about their adventures over the 500yrs. As far as Kohaku what ever you decide is up to you I will not have a problem I would just not like to see him with Shippou or Souta they seem more like brothers too me anyway. Keep writing this was a wonderful chapter!!!!!
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From ANON - Diane on March 20, 2005
Wooooo!!! Im so into this story Im reading it when I should be watching the show on adult swim ( its ok I have all the dvd's, and there repetes). I fell a bit guilty actually, your poping out stories quickly and all I have is a sketch. Im happy with all the hype, and Im greatful, so if you wanna get a good web site Ill be more then happy to chip in some money if need be, I know we are doing this both for free. Im pretty sure Im gonna do the battle secene ( and the other pics as well) in the style I showed you, the realistic one, not so much anime style. I think it would be a welcome difference to the same old stuff. I'll e-mail you with any more news as I get it. Once my bio is changed in elfwood, Im sure you will be getting more readers, and thanks to your posting of my site, Im getting more comments. Hopefully we can help eachother out......"we are stronger together" ;) Keep up the great work, as I said it inspiers me!!
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From ANON - BakaInuGirl on March 20, 2005
Hallelujah I've finished reading all the posted chapters!!! Thank God colleges have spring break otherwise my residents would never go home and I'd never get a break from the office!! (Yep, that's right I work and live at a college.. it's SO sad!) I absolutely loved this chapter. The lemon was beautiful and touching and made me feel all schmoopie! Your attention to detail once again astounds me and I appreciated all the information about the traditional wedding. Haha! Jii-chan and Kaede! How cute! I've never read a fanfic where they actually meet and I loved their interaction! I've been thinking about your proposal to make Kohaku gay (don't worry I NEVER flame.. the eternal optimist). I'm always a fan of seeing Kohaku get together with Rin just because they're interaction in the anime is SO CUTE! Well, it's more like a babbling Rin and Kohaku saying she talks a lot, but still! It's cute! And he doesn't harm her under Naraku's control so I think there's something deeper!!! So, anywho back to my point... I always like to see him have a happy ending with Rin... BUT that's not to say he can't end up with a happy ending with another character, even another guy! Hey, it's original.. it's edgy.. it's new! So, basically, gay or straight I'm a fan! As long as he's alive and happy I'm happy, too. How will Sango react?! If she's uber-traditional about marriages and stuff what will she think about having a gay brother? Would he be gay in the Sengoku Jedai or the present?! So many questions!!! And what about Sess?? Where does he fit into all of this? If Jinenji's in the present where's Sesshoumaru? Okay, I'm done bombarding you with questions (which by the way you do NOT have to answer, I completely understand about author secrets.. gotta keep us guessing!) I loved this chapter! I appreciate the length so much! Great job! Can't wait for the next update! ~B.I.G.~
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From ANON - Inuzands on March 20, 2005
All I can say is..... Well done! You have such a way with details and making the story come alive. I enjoyed the wedding scene, and the lemon....well.....::::fans face::::: Just makes you wish InuYasha was real. :grins:
Looking forward to the next chapter!
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From ANON - Diane on March 19, 2005
Woooo!! Im so glad you posted yet agan another great chapter. The only problem is I must read faster then you post ;) Any way I just started a sketch of "the battle" Im so exicted. I'll send it to you whens it done, being the first to see! Keep up the great work, you details in the story are amaizing, always providing me with a great mental image, I notice some writers lack. Keep it up, your what inspiers me and gives me the great ideas I can get on to paper!
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From ANON - PJ on March 17, 2005
Nice chapter. I know Kagome's friends mean well but sometime I could just strangle them with they way they always ask so many questions. It is clear they have no 'love life' fo their own. They don't have time they are too busy sticking their nose into Kagome's life. LOL Not much to say this morning I have off to the store. I did like that Kagome was able to go help Inuyasha during that fight it was cool that she was able to tell he was in danger. I also liked Sessy in this chapter him trying to understand and then giving Inuyasha that gift I guess from his father was nice as well. Keep writing.
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From ANON - BakaInuGirl on March 17, 2005
Tonight is a monumental event. I RARELY write multiple reviews for one fic, but I LOVE this story. Once again I have not been able to read all the chapters posted, but it once again is 2:30 in the morning and work is rearing its ugly head already. Where do I begin? I absolutely adore the resolution of Inuyasha's feelings between Kikyou and Kagome, it was an original way for him to come to terms with the dilemma and I LOVED it! Shock of all shocks, I had no idea what happened to Kagura in the manga (and I completely teared when I read that... I always knew Sess had a thing for the wind sorceress!) and I totally appreciate the footnote and can live my days happily knowing she got her heart back! Amazing AMAZING battle scene that was innovative and new! I've read so many fanfics where the last blow is dealt by Inuyasha and Kikyou or Inuyasha and Sess when Kagome has obviously kicked some youkai ass in the past! KUDOS for allowing Kagome to have a final role! And, I will admit I was worried that she wasn't going to make it through! Aside from being the regular run of the mill geek I'm also a big big Disney freak so thanks for the fanfic tour of DisneySea! I'll probably never get to go there, but I can tell people about the attractions now! Haha! I thoroughly support the idea of a sequel in case you haven't gotten that vibe yet. I can't wait to continue reading but unfortunately being a crisis responder requires you to have at least a FEW hours of sleep! Great work! Can't wait to see if there'll be a sequel! Thanks for writing! ~B.I.G.
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