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Reviews for Beautiful Souls

By : BrethlessM
  • From ANON - CO85 on November 18, 2013
    Well I know it's been a long time since you wrote this, but I'm still enjoying it all the same. All the characters are perfectly depicted just as they are in the series. The only thing I could do without is all the definitions and explanations. I already know them all seeing as I've seen the whole series and read the manga (as will likely most who read this), but i'm sure they will go away eventually.
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  • From TaintedHeartPureDreams on August 13, 2008
    Oi! i jus found this story on the web & i have 2 say i absolutely loved it! you have alot of talent!
    Please right the sequel soon! it is a great plot. && it kept me wanting to read more!
    I loved the story very much great work!!
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  • From ANON - AnimeFanInuYasha on January 04, 2007
    YOU ROCK!!!! Oh and nice writing on chaps. 15 and 16 *wink* *wink* wow that sounded something Miroku would say......EWWWWWWWW I MIGHT BE TURNING INTO MIROKU!!!!! AHHHHHHH!!!! No not really i will nevr be him thank Kami. Anyway, you rock and I'm A HUGE INUKAG FAN!!! Also you write Really long chaps, but that's a REALLY good thing!!!!
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  • From ANON - TAJE on January 26, 2006
    I've read the entire story. I finally got a chance to finish this Wonderful! Beautifully Written Story! Like I said before, I can see why you were nominated in the guild! I just can't say enough. I am so looking forward to your sequel if one comes about.
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  • From ANON - TAJE on January 13, 2006
    Ch. 6-10) Whoa! I said this before, I can see why you were nominated. Good show! The battle scene was absolutely striking! Kouga getting some beads to be "Sat" cracked me up! So happy for Sango and Miroku. You're just awesome!
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  • From ANON - TAJE on January 08, 2006
    Ch. 1-5) WOW! I love what I've just read. What touched my heart with in these five chapters, is when Inuyasha gave Kagome a gift for her birthday. I mean my heart swelled up like a sponge soaking my life's blood which forced tears to my eyes. As well the gifts she received from the others in the gang. As always I love the authors creativity when it comes to using the characters as their (author's ) minds-eye portrayal of the characters. I shall read on. I have to read in parts due to 1 computer and 4 children, oh and a husband. I also love anyone who is willing to educate their readers which I feel you've done well. I am inspired by the talents of you and many creative souls. Count yourself among the (pardon) "Beautiful Souls" for sharing your talents. No wonder you were nominated! Peace!
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  • From ANON - anon2323 on January 06, 2006
    Hey, amazing story! It was truly, truly beautiful. Was I started reading, I couldn't stop.

    I hope you get around to the sequel soon! ^^
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  • From ANON - Akdreamer on August 18, 2005
    A Totally Awesome Story!!!! I will look forward to your sequal greatly!!! Keep up the great work and I'll be reading you again soon.....Thanks for sharing your talent......
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  • From ANON - Chelle82 on July 26, 2005
    I usually don't give feedback to sotries, but I had to comment on this one. It was so, I guess for a lack of better words: beautiful. It made me laugh, cry and anticipate the characters next move. The talent that u show in this story is remarkable. Thank you for granting us readers with a cance to get a glimpse of your soul and creativity.
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  • From ANON - Ofir on July 03, 2005
    i can't belive it ended!! 0_0
    it was the last chapter so i had to review, ^0^
    it was a great story! i really love your writing style ^_^ i can't wait for the squels and one-shots!! ^_^
    anyway, i lubed the ending ^_^ and the the chapter before for a moment i was sure miroku will die or kag&inu >
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  • From skywolf on June 09, 2005
    wow I really loved the last chapter! Good set up for the sequel :D
    Yes I do really love your friends artwork. She is very talented :D
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  • From ANON - Vikki on June 08, 2005
    One more thing...this chapter is the best one of all....it didn't need lemons or anything...retelling the story and ending it just like that made me cry with happiness. I'm so glad you became a part of this site and my life. You have made my day...weeks...months...i was happy to have be the first to read your story and to review. I am honored to be your friend and fan. I hope that you will not ever stop writing. One day i'll get to meet you and see with my own eyes the goddess that writes with an heavenly hand and emotional, loving, imagitive mind. I'm happy to have read and met you. Forever with you. Vikki

    PS. i love the whole story replaied...it made it that much more emotional...i love you...GREAT JOB KIM...i'm so proud
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  • From ANON - VIKKI on June 08, 2005
    HERE I AM...i'm never leaving you girl. You think i'll just jump off a building and forget that i LOVE YOUR STORIES...hell no. Ok as for the passion thing...no it's not dying and you SO DO NOT suck...it's great. I love it...it was just i hadn't read a lemon in a long time and then it came...YAY. i feel so loved.. I'm happy i help you through this story. I was more then happy to here that. I can't wait to read your new stories, that i hope are coming... *jumping around waiting*...i'll still write...i'll be reading everything you ever write. I'll always be there with you through it all. THIS IS THE BEST STORY I READ....and i have feeling your next one is going to be even better. YOu have many fans...so don't forget YOUR GREAT. SO until your next story...or just when i wish to talk with you...i'll be there. I feel happy so happy...lol...I LOVE YOU GIRL...i hope that was enough for my emotional side...i feel loved and you are loved to...YOUR BIGGEST FAN* yes i am the biggest i know it*....FOREVER THERE...VIKKI
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  • From ANON - Diane on June 08, 2005
    I posted the Amara pic on Deviant art. And I cant begin to thank you for all the lovely and incourageing words your write about my work! Any way, as for your one shot...........I am beond impressed. I want to read more, but its so god damned short!! When I read through your chapters, they arent just the silly, quirkey characters from the show anymore. They become living, and I can feel there blood pumping. Maybe I see all this because Im an artist, maybe I see the world and "our" world's differently because of that. And yes Kim, no scoffing in this chapter! You did good my dear! Im sorry your almost threw, but I happy at the same time 'cause I wan't our story to be writtin ;). And please, always remember your work has to abailty to move people! That it is as beautiful as the person who created it ! Im happy to be your adopted sister! Love Ya!!
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  • From ANON - cjflutterbye on June 07, 2005
    This was fun!
    Yup, I need to be on the list. I'm looking forward to their future!
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