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Reviews for Mistakes

By : fallenangel7583
  • From ANON - Liberatedmysterygirl on April 28, 2005
    OMG !! words cant express the extreme amount of happiness i am feeling at this moment. Never have i read a story that meets all of my desires. never has an auther made the story so complete. You have to be the best author here at thsi site. I just cant praise you enough. Please Please dont you dare make a sequal to this. It would simply ruin the story . but you could make a sort of prequal about sesshomarus and rins relation ship . That woudl be nice. But seriousely i have spent 4 hours reading this none stop not even able to hold a conversation on the phone wiht my boyfriend because i couldnt pry myself from reading this. Nothing was over blown or left to question. you didnt give short ass chpaters that annoy more then satisfy. i dont knwo if you are a girl or a boy but what ever you are, i am turned on by the meere display of talent. I LOVE YOU , please make a sesshomaru and rin story.
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  • From on April 12, 2005
    OH SHIT DUDE DAT ISSO DARK!!!! heres some reviews from my hippy and commi (communist) sides. Good job lass i be needn some weed to get my mind off of things. OI THIS MAKES ME WANNA KILL PEOPLE MATTEROF FACT I THNK ILL DO IT
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  • From ANON - nancey on March 12, 2005
    Wow!!!!! I sat at the comuter this evening to read for a few min. & started reading this story. I can't even tell you how imprest I was by your writing abilities. I almost stop reading it after the first chapter cause I don't usally read angst, but Kept reading anyways. This Is one of the BEST stories I have read. I felt everything along with them, I even cried, which only Sueric has been able to make me do in the past. When Inuyasha first revealed himself to her and the romantic sceens following were so well written. I had butterflies in my tummy and I was actually turned on. I LOVED this story to say the least and I hope to read more of your work in the future. Thank you for allowing me to read your writting!
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  • From ANON - Lisa-chan on February 24, 2005
    ~wiping my eyes and blowing my nose~ Oh my God!! That had to be the best story that I have ever read. I am crying here. Awesome job!! I am now going to read your other fic that you suggested. ~sniffles~
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  • From VampireWitch on February 23, 2005
    I like it, and it was still as well-written as before, but you did sort of rush the whole getting-to-know-each-other-again thing...after all, with that past, and then the time in between...people change. still, I liked it alot.
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  • From ANON - Dunbarbalooie2 on February 19, 2005
    That was an amazing story! I have read hundreds upon hunderds of fics, and this one is by far one of the absolute very best. Just about everything about it was good; the grammar was eccelent, the plot flowed very well, the characters were not way OOC, you filled out the information about the other characters well, you also made the songs fit into the story well. I definatly enjoyed reading it, and I will look into yuor other story. It was very well written for how quickly you posted it.
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  • From ANON - Mija on February 19, 2005
    omg I have to tell you I cried through the entire 4 chapters, I mean I started reading and the tears fell and my son walks in and looks at me then shakes his head, since he knows when I am at the comp NOT typing im reading Inu fan fics and hes seen me cry before, but omg all 4 chapters were soo intense it blew me away, I was like omg poor Inu and Kagome was sooooo wrong and then Inu was and I was crying cause he was dead then I find out hes alive and think yay hope but hes so cold and shes so slutty and killing herself slowly, her mind unable to cope......very intense, I loved it all and loved the ending as well...happy ending which had me crying even more...this story totally rocked you write so well and it was so well done, totally love it, going to have to find the time to read the Dragon one with the Inu bros, btw I loved the whole Sess and Inu relationship, still cool but yet openings happening and emotions showing slowly and all, very good, loved it...well Im done rambling again loved it, great work, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From ANON - stacerue on February 18, 2005
    Just wanted to let ya know how much I really enjoyed this story. I don't usually read too many I/K stories but the summary caught my interest. I'm glad it did. I also liked your Kagome is Rin's reincarnation theory. I always have thought they look like each other and act alike. Even in that one episode Jinengi makes the comparison beteween them. I also liked Kagura and Sess ending up together. I still can't believe she got killed off in the manga. I wanted to see her be free from Naraku. At least she died happy. I look forward to reading more of your work. Take care.
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  • From ANON - General Ivan: 03rd SID-EDF on February 18, 2005
    YOU SUCK!

    Only in the sense that you made me cry with your excellent, well-written tear-jerker of a story.

    Good job!!!
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  • From ANON - Kiki Ortega on February 16, 2005
    I love this. It's so sad, yet I know there's going to be a happy ending... right? I actually cried when Koga told Kagome what had truly happened... and I have one comment on something that made me laugh because of its... irony? Whatever the word for it. Oh well... it was when Koga gave InuYasha the so-called advice and the hanyou said something like... 'I thought the time I'd take advice from you would be the time I'd decide to rot in hell' or somewhere along those lines. I found it funny because... didn't he actually think about it once or twice because of Kikyo? Yeah... I believe he did confess (to Kaede) that he'd gladly follow her to hell if that was what she wanted. I can't believe I actually laughed... it wasn't meant to be funny, was it? Anyway, please continue.
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  • From ANON - Midnight_Sparrow on February 16, 2005
    sad. Very sad. Nice work. :)
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  • From ANON - colin on February 15, 2005
    This story is very written and is a very good idea. The idea is dark but it works and it will be interesting to see where you go with with because there is a lot of things that need to be worked out. So hopefully you will continue with the story and soon so I can find out.
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  • From ANON - a REAL linkin park fan on February 15, 2005
    it's LINKIN PARK

    you're spelling it wrong


    look here: http://www.linkinpark.com/index.php
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  • From ANON - billl on February 15, 2005
    Ok usually i dont review here but i want you to keep writing and this is the only way to try and spure you on. Its a good story dont live it unfinished. That would be mean.
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  • From ANON - mars on February 15, 2005
    Awsome story!! Please update soon!
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