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Reviews for Mistakes

By : fallenangel7583
  • From ANON - morlana on February 15, 2005
    I love this story, something strange to say when it made me cry from start to finish. If that's the emotion you were shooting for then my tears, something I rarely let fall, is great accolades for your writing. I can't wait to follow how this stories continues.
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  • From ANON - Mandy on February 15, 2005
    I really love this. It's nice to see things turning around a bit after seeing the hell that they both went through. I sincerely hope that they can mend each other. I love that this is different. The plotline isn't all shit and roses. It makes the happiness at the end that much better when they have to go through hell to get there. More updates! :) pweeeaazzee
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  • From ANON - Kaleigh on February 14, 2005
    I said it before, and I will say it again- beautiful story. I love that you made Koga still alive so that Kagome could find out what truely happened. It's still very sad and seems as though she won't ever have any good luck... Don't you hate it when that happens to ya?
    Please update soon! I'm your #1 fan ^-^


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  • From ANON - Jordy on February 14, 2005
    that was soooo sad! I was just about in tears! You are evil for leaving us with a cliffy! YOU MUST UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!! oh ...pretty please, with sugar on top ;)
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  • From ANON - General Ivan: 03rd SID-EDF on February 14, 2005
    Good, good, excellent.

    Long chapters, coherent, fluid text and dialogue, sh*tloads of emotion and feeling, the whole "paths diverge and reconverge" thing, and plot development, hoo yeah.

    We may have a "Fugue" killer here.

    ~S!~
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  • From ANON - Kaleigh on February 13, 2005
    A very beautifully written story. Very sad as well- I was almost crying.
    I give you a 10 out of 10! How will you make another chapter though? I'm interested in finding out...
    Great job!
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