Click Here!

Reviews for Mistakes

By : fallenangel7583
  • From Alpine02 on November 20, 2008
    Love this and all of your works... I am a complete fan... (Jumps up and down and then does happy dance)
    Report Review

  • From Darknessdawns on June 18, 2008
    .....Wow...I would have never thought......just wow. You really did wonderful with this fic and I will be reading 'Curse of the dragon' soon. I don't know about everyone else, but I love how your escentually tore Inuyasha and Kagome (especially Kagome) apart and then rebuilt them. I cried through out most of the first chapter. I agree on how you portraid their reactions. I still have one question though, What happened to the Shikon no Tama? I understand that it is irrelevant to this story, but I'm still curious. Anyway this story was very well written, but I found many typos where a words such as 'it' and 'in' were switched. I figured out what you ment any way. Other than that this story was almost perfect. This story was more emotional than any other I have read. You should really label it as angst, becaus so much of it is heartbreaking. I really loved it though and the ending made my heart happy. I'm really looking forward to reading more of your works.
    Report Review

  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on December 09, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
    Report Review

  • From wicketjax on May 10, 2007
    this story is amazing. you are so awesome in your wording and all of that. i love happy endings! i was all teary eyed! gah, you rule!!!!
    Report Review

  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 03, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
    Report Review

  • From vikikibouki on March 23, 2007
    I really don't know what to say. This story captivated me right from the beginning, like a good book that you just cannot put down until you get to the very last page. I spent all of my afternoon reading it(when I should have been keeping a few appointements that I GLADLY cancelled). I had tears in my eyes from start to finish. I hope that you have a few more of these tear-jerkers up your sleeve. I'm looking forward to reading them. Please keep them coming.
    Report Review

  • From on December 31, 2006
    Heyy thanks for the review on my story THE LAST FIGHT your story was great your a good writer.
    I like how you tied the song in with what was happening in the first chapter. Keep Writing stories ;P MeGhAn
    Report Review

  • From ANON - SultryRayn on December 23, 2006
    OMG... I love this ... I mean it is sad and I cried... Im really cried... I ended up having to stop to dry my eyes because I couldnt read the screen... and again you do not disapoint me... keep up the good work... yay!!! they are together again!!!anwyays... Ja Ne!!
    Report Review

  • From butterflysuki on August 28, 2006
    How have I not read this yet??? It had me enthralled from beginning to end. Absolutely breathtaking. It's actually the only songfic I've ever read and actually liked! (the fact that you used four of my favorite Linkin Park songs had NOTHING to do with it I'm sure) You should really repost this! Well, just put it out there again at least. People need to know how it's done! lol Great darkness, without really overdoing it. Lots and lots of pain...and believe me, I felt it! At first I was slightly disappointed at the end, but the more I thought about it, I liked it better that way. Still sad that he waited 500 years and she only waited 4. Anyway...Brava! and goodbye.

    ~butterflysuki
    Report Review

  • From ANON - chanda on October 14, 2005
    Ok smack me know...LOL Why in the hell havn't I reviewed this story before, I read it once and it made me cry, I was looking for it again, however, I was new to this site and I could'nt find it, now its up again and I had the privilage to read it again, and yes I cried the second time... I just love it, I am glad that no matter what she did he still loved her unconditionally... Beautiful story, and very well written.

    Chanda
    Report Review

  • From ANON - AmberEyez on August 13, 2005
    Wow. Excellent. Dark, but really well-written. This is good... I'm looking forward to reading your other stuff!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on June 30, 2005
    I loved your story its the best i've read yet.I really loved the ending.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - ailish on May 25, 2005
    This story is absolutely wonderful. I could not stop reading. The only thing I can think to say is WOW!!! There are no other words that I can think of right now. You did beautifully. It was dark to start and then bright and wonderful at the end. Loved it and can't wait to read more of your stories:)
    Report Review

  • From ANON - mitsukanna on May 09, 2005
    i love ur story it's sooo sad!!! aww but i loved it! indeed it was heartfelt and very touching. thank u for writing it!
    Report Review

  • From CerealKiller on April 28, 2005
    Loved the fic. You have a great eye for detail and a wonderful sense of angst! Impressive to say the least....
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!