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Reviews for The Journey to the City of Endless Night

By : FarAwayEyes
  • From ANON - Bookreader9999 on November 17, 2005
    The chapter with the pillow fight was cute. It's nice to see Sesshomaru "relax" when he's with Rin.
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  • From ANON - Gem on November 17, 2005
    I'm beginig to think you have a thing for toying with Sesshomaru! (not that it's a bad thing) Much more of Rin showing off her powers and the poor thing will be totaly lost. Good thing you've laid the ground work so well getting him to ease up a bit already, it lets this last playful interaction, and Rin's growing confidience work well. Nice to see another side of the demon lord be let out to play. Mind you I'm guessing you have a major reality check in the works for him, judging by that bit of prophecy quoted last chapter. Play time may be over far to soon, so as they say, let us enjoy it while it lasts.
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  • From ANON - Gem on November 13, 2005
    Wow, can't believe how much I missed. I didn't think anyone could pull off Sess being worried and even a bit not in control. That fight with Inuyasha was brilliant. It let him work off the feellings and stress without being weirdly out of character. The next chapter with Kagome working through some of her concerns, and seeing things in a different light was a great display of how her character is growing. Love the running teasing with Miroku and the pig, that is so something I can see the characters doing. Oh and the second mud fight was a great pack bonding moment, and it just goes to show how they are becoming closer. If not, Sess would have attempted to slice and dice them for even THINKING of doing that to his person. Looks like you are managing to teach an old dog new tricks. Nice touch with the revealing of the next bit of the prophesy, make for a nice change in tempo. I know this is short given the chapters since I reviewed last, but hey, we all know you do good work and there's not much I can say beyond that. Well except i can hardly wait to see what you have planned for Sess and Rin to fight through. Take care, hope to see the next update soon!
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  • From ANON - SP777 on November 13, 2005
    FINALLY!!! I get to read a new chapter of 'Journey' [not the Pop/Rock group] on the DAY it was posted...
    *************
    You know what, I almost keep forgetting about Jaken [not like he was really missed] but it was good to know what became of him. It kinda makes me wonder if you have 'plans' for him soon. *wink* ;-) *wink*..*wink*..*wink*..sorry something got in my eye [..ignore that silly attempt at a joke couldn't resist..]

    ANYway, as I was reading this latest passage #51[?] I couldn't help notice how as time goes by, this DOES read like a fantasy novel. If you EVER decide to write professional I think you could pull it off, with the determination, imagination and of course, drive...and I'll be one of the people to definitely check it out. :-)

    nuff' said...
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  • From ANON - New Fan on November 12, 2005
    I thought that Jaken was dead??!! Just joking. I am glad he was not totally forgotten.
    So my girl Rin will save Sesshoumaru??!!! I can not wait to read that when you release it.
    I hope that she does not have to lose her life to save him. Knowing Rin she will be
    honor and won't hesitate to die for her lord. Update this great story really soon.
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  • From ANON - vbollman(nsi) on November 12, 2005
    My Dear, thank you for another wonderfull chapter. I just wish I could read your mind to figure out what the hell your planning for our lovable demon lord. but then if I could read your mind I wouldn't have so much fun reading your story. I just love the relationship you have going between the monk and the thief. And now that Velvet has joined the party I can't wait to see the fun start. In my opionon(spelling ?) she will make a perfect female compainon for Sango. And could probably teach her a thing or two about hand to hand fighting. Take care and half fun. don't strain your self to much with your writing and school work. I would hate to lose your wonderful chapters (lol)

    Luvs ya
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  • From ANON - SP777 on November 06, 2005
    Hmm...Chapter 50 should be dubbed 'The Night Insanity Reigned Supreme between a Hanyou, the Pompous Ass and Drama Queen', of course to call Sesshoumaru a pompous ass is an uncalled-for-insult. :=] Even though the boys didn't tell Kagome the WHOLE story [it was cute, by the way, the way you wrote it] I was glad they got some of that frustration out in the open and that Kagome was able to put a little light on the situation about Rin.

    Above all, I like a little comedy to lighten a story, one can only be so deep so long...

    50 chapters??? I'm glad for once in my life I'm able to enjoy the ride at the beginning of a story instead of coming in at #25 or #38, it's disappointing being left out from an Epic story [YES, epic] and everyone's ahead of you in the game. :-(

    But I must say, you def'nah'lee have a gift for writing, I would have stopped at #30.

    Oh, and how FAR are we from the City again??? :-)

    nuff' said...
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  • From ANON - SoutasSister on November 02, 2005
    Just caught up with the story and I'm eagerly awaiting more chapters! You are doing a great job and I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - New Fan on October 31, 2005
    I just want to tell you that I enjoyed this chapter so much that I almost choked. I was laughing
    so hard (I am getting over a very bad chest cold) that I had a hard time breathing. I just love it.
    I love how Sess got Rin into the fun as well as showing a side of him I know she did not think exist.
    I know Kagome as well as Inuyasha enjoyed it as well. I hope that you update really soon.
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  • From ANON - Bookreader9999 on October 30, 2005
    I think it's a great series. Even though I'm not familiar with the Eddings' stories, I'm very tempted to read them and see what I'm missing!!!

    Oh, if you have an update list, I'd like to be on it. I can't wait for your next update!!!


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  • From ANON - chanda on October 29, 2005
    Chapter 50 was excellent, to see them all in a mud fight was truly amusing, I would think that their little play episode, would strengthen the bond, they have slowly built up throughout the chapters. Congratulations, I could see why you were nominated, wonderful story, I have truly enjoyed it immensely.

    I look forward towards your next update until then,
    Chanda
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  • From ANON - vbollman(nsi) on October 29, 2005
    That was great. I always thought Kags could take on Lord Fluffy. this in my eyes just proved it. I loved the mud fight again. Much better this time around with the girls are involved. just makes it seem that they really are a pack. And if these four are a pack. what happens with the others in the group. And just what is Jaken doing. Not hearing from him, and with him in the vale with the twins makes for a scary combo.

    It was great hearing from you again. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - KJ on October 24, 2005
    *down on hands and knees begging*
    pleaaase please please update!
    the withdrawl is something fierce
    on a more serious note, please put in more sessy inu bonding that doesn't involve knock down drag out brawling. I have to admit I would love to see Jakin for some comic relief, and koga for the fight it would cause with inu *hint**hint*

    And as a bit of a kudos to you, and shameless promoting... I want you to win! ;)
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  • From ANON - SP777 on October 15, 2005
    Welcome back!!!

    Even though I don't know WHEN you came, seeing I had to find your story through 'different channels'....and may I ask WHEN did the site change???

    Anyway I must say...Sango has to be the NOSIEST b%$# ever!!! My God! Do the words 'I don't want to talk about it' EVER register??? Concern is one thing, but damn..!!! Oh, and just to comment, I think the words 'dog-boy' became a wee bit excessive if you read that passage in the chapter.

    ANYWAY, you should know I am especially waiting to see the folks reaction when they see 2 VERY muddy Inuyoukais coming out of the storm. :-]

    nuff said...for now.
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  • From ANON - New Fan on October 14, 2005
    Oooh goodie you updated. This chapter was a relaxing chapter. No drama or excitment.
    That's ok because you must have the calm before the storm. Great chapter overall. Update soon.
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