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Reviews for The Journey to the City of Endless Night

By : FarAwayEyes
  • From ANON - KJ on September 12, 2005
    WOWWEEEEE!
    you updated! I was starting to get paranoid I would never get another fix
    another two awesome chapters, I am itching impatiently for more!
    ^.^
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  • From ANON - Miroku2235 on September 12, 2005
    Yay! An update! I loved Miroku's admirer, lol a pig following a monk, that's rich. I also liked how Sango still denied anyhting happened even though the facts stated otherwise. poor Rin, I hope she cheers up soon and I enjoyed how Kagome FINALLY apologized for running off all those times and for getting the info on being a proper mate. Oh yea, I'm originally from Mississippi. Man, my little nowhere town of Gulfport is now one big lake. That's kinda depressing now that I think about it.....oh well, update soon!
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  • From ANON - shatter the sky comes quietly on September 12, 2005
    Hey, just had a thought: What's Jaken doing while in the Vale? Even he gets bored sometimes. You should have a chapter or a part of one about what's going on in the Vale. It'd be interesting to see what you come up with.
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  • From ANON - New Fan on September 11, 2005
    This chapter was enjoyable to read, but I can guess it was difficult for you to write. Poor
    Rinny-chan, she so submissive and sensitive. Sessy will have to work harder to make Rin
    feel more comfortable. Did he went away because he sense Rin submissive behavior not
    going away? Does he feel that his protectiveness duty to Rin is being threaten?? Will Sessy
    and Inuyasha be fighting again over this matter? Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Gem on September 11, 2005
    Wow, two chapters ( shouldn't you be the one getting the presents, it was your birthday after all)! Where to start, ah yes the 'Miroku and the Swine of Passion' interlude. I don't know where you come up with theses ideas but I pray they never stop. It adds so much more to what's going on to have something insane and random tossed in like that. The action was good on it's own but miss piggy added a twist that brought it to another level. It's like real life, you never know when random wierdness will strike. I think all the trouble you went through with Kagome, trying to figure out just what being mated and part of a pack, not to mention how they all fit in, paid off. Same goes with the talk Kag and Inu had. This is getting them to grow up, it had to happen sooner or latter. poor Rin there is a lot of stress on someone so young, even if she is a survivor. Good thing she will have the rest of her pack now to support her as well as Sess. Looking forward to how you are going to deal with Sango & Miroku after their little tryst. Don't think they are quite ready to commit just yet, which means more torment for the two. Anyway take care and happy studies!
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  • From ANON - New Fan on September 11, 2005
    Short chapter this time. That's ok it was great and very interesting. I felt
    sorry for Miroku and Silk; having to where those disgusting garments and
    going to that aweful place. That would give me nightmares? Great chapter
    even though it was short, you must be beyond busy. Update really soon.
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  • From ANON - inuyashaloverr on September 08, 2005
    Man, I have missed so many chapters. Going to the hospital sucks to say the least. Anyways, I love what you have the characters doing. Gotta the love the angst, then all the good stuff afterwards. Specially when InuYasha found the cave. Then whats been going on with Rin, and her new found ability. Ok, I do have a question here, I know that Kogome is on the pill in this fic, but, when do they run out ???hehehe< insert cheesy grin here>I know, stupid question, but I just had to ask. Dont know something lessen I ask. Ok, another question, whens the next chapter?
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  • From ANON - connor on September 03, 2005
    great chapter i love how rin is useing her will to do sess moves its soooo cool hehe anyway i cant wait for next chapter... hurry!! lol ^,^

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  • From ANON - shatter the sky comes quietly on September 02, 2005
    Hope you come out with the next chapter soon, this has become one of my favorite stories. Wonder how they're going to meet Kouga?
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  • From ANON - Dimepieceleo on August 29, 2005
    DAMN GOOD
    I couldn't have pictured it any better than you wrotit
    WELL DONE on RIN'S first lesson
    I wonder will he think of Rin's power as similiar to how his yukia *sp* works
    OH AND THE PART ABOUT THE WHIP WAS PRICELESS TO SAY THE LEAST
    UNTIL NEXT CHAPTER AND HANG ON WITH SCHOOL AND WORK
    I KNOW HOW STRESSFUL THAT CAN BE
    * sighs thinking of the old days*
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  • From ANON - Gem on August 29, 2005
    Fantastic chapter! So glad you can still find the time to write! This was quite the testing of new waters with both the training, and even more so with the emotional interaction. I'll leave my comments at that, it's just to well, nice, to dissect. I'd much rather just enjoy. Some things are just better that way.
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  • From ANON - Zincpaw on August 28, 2005
    Hello. Many thanks for responding to my eariler review. That is only the second time someone has actually mentioned me in the review responses. Thank you again for the list, I'm sure I will be able to read them easily, seeing as I work part time in a library. I could never figure out what order they go in, so I gave up on trying to read them. On another note I'm glad that Kouga will be making an appearance. I do dearly love those triangles they form. heheh. Rin's lesson(s) are really interesting, and making the whip was kinda funny. Seehoumaru has a green one that burns woth poison. Rin has a blue one that burns with fire. Well I think that it is fire, I mean you did say it was fire around her hand but then again it cut through the rocks. This is going to keep me up all night. A hought just hit me. If the Purpose brought everyone here but they didn't really know what was going on, then who was it that introduced Naraku to the inner workings of the World? Curses that is going to keep me up all night too. I should go before I give myself a brain overload. Thanks for taking time to write each and every chapter, and for responding to my review. Please update soon. Zincpaw
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  • From ANON - New Fan on August 28, 2005
    I had to laugh at Sess reaction to Rin forming the whip instead of throwing the flame. I notice in this
    chapter that Polgara said that once Rin masters the simple skills then she will be able to create things.
    Does this mean that Rin will reform Sess lost arm in later chapters. Will she be able to age her self
    to be a young women? Could one of the sorcessors (spelling) tanned the skins???!!Will we see more
    of Sango and Miroku? Will the group meet up with anymore of Naraku's henchmens?? Great chapter
    and update soon.
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  • From ANON - Miroku2235 on August 28, 2005
    I liked how Rin manipulated the fire into an energy whip. Is this some kind of sub-conscious inkling of deeper feelings for Sesshoumaru? I can't wait to see where else this story goes. Oh, and HAPPY BIRTHDAY from this lecherous monk.
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  • From ANON - connor on August 27, 2005
    *sobs* *crys*
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