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Reviews for The Journey to the City of Endless Night

By : FarAwayEyes

From ANON - Dimepieceleo on August 26, 2005
I regret that it has taken me so long to review but i have had some thins going on in my life that were not
forseen so I am dealing with that. I am still however captivated by this story and the
amazing way you seem to write so that there is really no question as to what you mean or what the people
are thinging and feeling.
ONCE AGAIN I MUST SAY I AM SO ENJOYING READING THS STORY AND CAN NOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - an anti-sheep chesse mufin on August 25, 2005
I was kinda lost reading the fifth book but my sister is all obsessed with it so she pretty much explained the whole series to me. She's also the one that told me about this story.
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From ANON - aaaaa on August 22, 2005
love the story keep it coming!!
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From ANON - Zincpaw on August 20, 2005
Hello. This story has been on my To Read list for awhile. I must confess I have not yet read the the Edding's series as of yet. I tried but I didn't understand it. Perhaps it was that I started with a book from the middle of the series, or not, either way I haven't read it. If you could be so kind as to give me a list of what order to read the series I might be able to get through them without too much trouble. On another note, I LOVE this story. You have done a wonderful job portraying the characters. I was wondering if Sango or Miroku would come earlier, but there they are. I was wondering since you brought the majority of the main characters to the world and group, I was wondering if you you would be introducing Kouga or Kikyou into the story. They all have a fight against Naraku. Wouldn't it be fitting to have them in the 'big fight', that is if you are planning to kill Naraku at the end. Another question, who is it exactly is it that is bring all of them to the 'World' - forgive me but I have forgotten the name of the world in which they are currently travelling. If you have answered any of these questions to others I'm sorry, I don't really read the authors notes if the end of the chapter is a cliff hanger or if there is another chapter after. At the end of my reviews I like to thank the authors for taking time out of their lives to write, edit, and post each and every chapter for the world to read and enjoy. Thank you for sharing your talent. Zincpaw
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From ANON - littleolmee on August 20, 2005
what a punishment! hmmm, that might deter kagome from putting shoes on him again and it might not...if i knew that was going to be my punishment i might put them on him to because. LOL! poor miroku he was certainly having a hard time wasn't he? very good chapter. good luck at college and with work! i feel for you, i'm already up myself at that time...(littleolmee hands over a big cup of coffee-"say hello to my little friend, this will help. COFFEE!COFFEE!COFFEE! i warn you though they say this stuff will stunt your growth...well that explains what happened to me.") take care of your self!
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From ANON - connor on August 20, 2005
this was a nice chapter lol and i love how shippo ruins everything! hmm poor guy should just stay in behind an leave them alone when they arnt there .. lol anyway i love how long this story is gona be ! keep up the good writing!
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From ANON - SP777 on August 20, 2005
#12,300 [in hits] ..something about that number I like, anyway I'm just commenting a little..no need to reply.

Well I'm glad this chapter [#44] dealt with them discussing the nature of relationship as mates, hopefully it cleared some things up and will be applied to in the future.

..and I will be waiting for more Rin revelations and DEFINITELY more Inuyasha & Sesshoumaru interactions it's kinda been awhile.

Oh, and take your time writing while in school [funny I had the impression you had finished college the way you write like you have an English Major], there are other stories to pass the time even though we'll miss your frequent updates.
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From ANON - alize on August 19, 2005
It's been a while since i have checked up on this story but i have to say it was good to read 4 chapters back to back. anyway your story is awsome as always the updates are great and that wonderful mind of yours is off the hook. so with that said keep up the good work and update again soon.
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From ANON - New Fan on August 19, 2005
Why all of the sudden Miroku is being 'scared' when he is around Sango. He is confusing
the poor girl. He been wanting her for so long, now that the door has open he is shying away.
I do not get him. Its about time that Kagome understands Inuyasha's feelings when it comes
to protecting his mate. She grows up in a world that makes women independent from men, that
we as women does not realize that its ok to have a man wanting to protect us, not because we are
weak, but that we are precious to them and they do not want to lose us or want us to get hurt.
I think Kagome finally gets it. I wonder what Rin's training will bring out of Rin? Will Sess be threaten
by Rin's new powers? Powerful and wonderful chapter. I will be starting school new Friday, I hope that
I will be able to find the time to read fanfics. I will make the special effort to read your fic. Update soon.
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From ANON - Miroku2235 on August 19, 2005
Woot! Citrus chapter! Miroku almost went ape-shit on Shippo. Poor kid. Oh well, maybe now he wont go wandering around the forest. I loved Inuyasha's revenge, what a way to get her to promise she wont put shoes on him. Oh and don't worry about being a vampire, vampires ROCK! Just dont go sun-bathing anytime soon. Update Soon!
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From ANON - inufan625 on August 19, 2005
Well let me start by saying that I did find InuYasha and Kagome's alone time satisfying, bot the lemon and the conversation they had. It makes perfect sense that Kagome would need to make some udjustments in her thinking as does InuYasha. It was very sweet the way that played out. The Sango and Miroku portions were very well done also. I especially like the scene in the tent. I am a little disappointed that the updates may take longer due to the start of you classes, but since you can't write fanfiction for a living I can understand and will be waiting patiently for your next update.
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From ANON - An anti-sheep chesse mufin on August 18, 2005
Thanks. i think my names quiet funny. I usually never read fanfics, or read at all for that matter, but this storys great. I've never actually read the belgariad series, but i've read like five chapters of the fifth book, and i must say silk was my favorite character in it. I can't wait to read the next chapter, keep it coming.
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From ANON - connor on August 18, 2005
i love the new chapters! keep them coming and i must say this story can become huge i mean its 47 chapters LONG ONES at that an they havnt even got to naraku yet! ur sooo me hero lol btw i cant wait to see kouga get all mad inyuasha got kagome but hey maybe he will relize amaya or how ever u spell her name :P
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From ANON - SP777 on August 17, 2005
Okay, I can officially say I was lost, during the explanation Belgarath gave to Kagome & Inuyasha about Nahaz and Morjda...*sigh* that happens when you're not familiar with a particular book series, but I got the jest of it.

I liked the 'sweetness of Miroku and Sango', if he would be less of a lecher and more of a gentleman, she would have been his girl by now. Hmm...Miroku+gentleman= not in this lifetime. Well maybe...

I, also, liked the downtime between Shippou and Kagome....

You know I was thinking WHEN is Kagome going to get a clue about 'the ways' of what it means to be a mate? In other words, does she NOT understand that her mate, as the male, is RESPONSIBLE for her well being??? Will she ever learn to defer to Inuyasha and not 'buck up to him' so to speak when they argue [in general] or just respect his wishes when he feels strongly about something.

I understand she is a 20th century girl, but with her being in the Feudal Era I'd think she would have a clue by now. Because twice she has 'blurted out' about her connection with the future WITHOUT consulting her mate about what to say and how much to say.

If it was me, I would respect my mate's role in the relationship and talked to him first...and came to some agreement. Does any of this make sense?

Oh, another thing, I meant to mention this 2 chapters ago since you mentioned 'Heat'...I don't know how long you've been around AAF.net to see this but I have a story for you. I normally don't do this...but there is an AU Sesshoumaru/Rin story called 'Heart of Pain, Heart of Ice'. Now, I'm not one for sexual abuse of any kind..and this one gets deep AND it's dark, but it was SOOO well written [plus I was curious about why it had so many hits] that you couldn't help but keep reading it to the end. Plus I never in my life wanted to reach in a computer screen and actually WANT to beat a character to death...literally. But check it out, you won't be sorry and if the 'Infamous AFF.net crash' didn't mess up the text too much, it shouldn't be hard to read.

*whew* nuff said...
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From ANON - Dimepieceleo on August 17, 2005
Wow ans interesting chapter, I guess you could be right about that, his love and sense of protect for Rin would overrule his anger.
I was surprised by the way the father and daughter reacted to Kagome's time. I love the interaction with Sesshy and Miroku PRICELESS
NOW TO THE SANGO AND MIROKU moments at the end, UNBELIEVEABLE, EXCELLENTLY DONE, I AM AMAZED AND SHOCKED BUT AM SO LOVING IT
I think you are right if you ignore someone long enough they will be more incline to let you have your way later if it mean you will at least pay them some attention
CAN'T WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER AND RINS' FIRST LESSON NOW THAT SESSHY IS HEALTH AGAIN, ALL SHIT IS GOING TO HIT THE FAN
* SNICKERS AND GRINS BEHIND HANDS*
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