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Reviews for The Journey to the City of Endless Night

By : FarAwayEyes

From ANON - New Fan on August 17, 2005
Its good to know that Sess can be humerous to the point that he is scary. ^_^
I love how you express Inuyasha deep concern for Kagome and for her to tell Belgarth
about her time. Miroku and Sango are getting closer. Its about time!! I was wondering
when it will be there turn instead of Inuyasha and Kagome. To bad Rin is not old enough.
But I guess that will happen when she and Sess confesses their love (when she older).
This story is getting better and better. I just can not wait to read
what happens next. You tell this story so well in such a short period of time that
you are amazing. Update soon.
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From ANON - littleolmee on August 17, 2005
wow! i'm gone for a while and look at all the wonderful chappies i come back too! very good work tieing rin into the crossover, her first time at using her gift was a great idea on your part. inuyasha and sesshoumaru just keep getting closer as brothers, i personally enjoy seeing that in a story with those two. the developing relationship betweeen sango and miroku is very nice touch as well, nice to see you didn't leave them out. your story just keeps getting better the farther you take us, can't wait to see where you take us from here.

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From ANON - Miroku2235 on August 17, 2005
New Chapter! Man, that history book will keep Belgarath busy if he can get his hands on it again. I loved how Miroku is actually getting closer to Sango, and all because he quit groping her. He's probably wishing he had tried this sooner. Man, I don't know if my brain would be awake enough for me to be typing a story this good at 4 in the morning. I love this story and can't wait to see where you take it. Keep up the great work.
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From ANON - KJ on August 17, 2005
another brilliant chapter, if I do say so myself
you had be on edge with the scene with miroku and sango, very apt portrayal of the monk if I do say so, just can't wait to see if anything more does come of his innocent routine
I can't wait for more with sessy, even from his "deathbed" he's still able to scare the daylights outta most guys
keep up the great work! and update more ^.^
my only other request is.... koga! I'm dieing to see their confrontation
anyways, update! soon!

and for everyone else remember to vote for this story for best crossover at
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/iyfanguild/surveys?id=1293338

*hopes posting links is ok*
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From ANON - inufan625 on August 17, 2005
I just wanted to say I have been following this story all along and while I'm not familiar witht eh cross over element of the story I am still able to follow it and an thouroughly taken in by your story so far. I think you are portraying Sessh brilliantly and I love the fact that you are giving Rin power of her own. I also thought I should mention that I am so looking forward to Inu getting his alone time with his mate.
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From ANON - Gem on August 17, 2005
That was a lot happening in these last chapters. We get to see a glimpse of just how much Sess cares for Rin, how she may play a large role in everyones future. We also get an idea just what, and why the native members of the group have invested in this quest. Everyone has a very good reason to see Naraku destroyed. (It'll just take Inu a little while to let that filter through his protective pig headedness) And Sess laying down the law to Miroku while enjoying it was a great touch, just keeps the monk off balance nicely, Kami knows that couldn't hurt! So loved the Sango/Miroku scene at the end. She was protrayed perfectly again, changing from strong and defensive to shy in an instant and back to take charge agian. Glad to see Miroku's monk training in contol finaly being put to good use! GASP No groping! About time! Can't wait till Rin starts her training, so much potential there for all kinds of things to happen.It also makes me wonder just what poor Kouga is in for if and when he shows up. I'm sure Our Lady Wolf will make her displeasure known if she finds out it was his pack that traumatized Rin. Ouch >
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From ANON - an anti_sheep chesse muffin on August 16, 2005
this sounds like an interesting story, i like the way u write
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From ANON - Mina on August 15, 2005
Inuyasha so sweet for looking after his brother ^_^
Rin's amulet so cool, the image of Sesshomaru true form. Can't wait for the next chapter so update soon.
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From ANON - Miroku2235 on August 14, 2005
Great chapter. Nice job on Rin's amulet, love the design you put on it. Belgarath is right though, if an imp was that powered up from a single shard, imagine a Demon Lord with a shard, or maybe multiple shards. Can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!!!
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From ANON - New Fan on August 14, 2005
Wonderful chapter. The amulet that Rin wears with the image of Sessy true form,
does it have any great significates beside the fact that Sess would accept it more because
it shown his true form? Kouga appearance in the story will not be pretty? What does
that mean? Will it happen soon (like in the next couple of chapters)? Forming one huge
pack. OOoooh boy! Like to see how everyone is going to get along now that Belgarth 'spelling'
had suggested that. Does that means that Sess can not harm Miroku because they are now
'brothers'??!! LOL!! ^_^

How do you come up typing 10+ pages and releasing them in two days? Do you have
an outline that you follow? Did you wrote the story already and you just post them every
two day? I find it amazing that you can write this story with such great detail and the plot is
just so easy to follow, it can only be a gift from GOD. Because I could not accomplished
writing a chapter with so much detail that flows so well as you have throughout this story.
Can not wait until you update soon.
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From ANON - Maggie on August 14, 2005
I don't usually read stories where some of the main characters include Shessy and Rin, but I think I should! You make their interaction so touching but still believe for their character. Shessy is so cute when it somes to protecting Rin; willing to tear anyone apart who even makes the slightest bit of sound. And I'm forever and Inu/Kag fan so I'm happy to see some of them in here as well! I thought it was really cute when she went up behind him and covered him eyes, saying "Guess who?" Lol. The part sticks out for m and its just cute ^^ I only got to read three chapters but I alread love your story--its soooo late here so I'll continue tomorrow ^^ And I think I may just wanna check out this story that the other characters are from, that sword interests me! Thanks for the good reading at four o'clock in the morning ((always a joy ^^)) Much love!!
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From ANON - Dimepieceleo on August 14, 2005
Yet another excellent chapter I am puzzled by something but will remain silent about them for now
I am going to say that I was shocked by Sesshy 's easy acceptance of Pol's gift and explaination
I am definitly happy with the way inuyasha and kagome behaved. itreally shows their bond with one another
AGAIN CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CAHPTER AND IS DYING TO KNOW THE RANGE OF RIN'S POWER
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From ANON - SP777 on August 13, 2005
Must comment on chapter 41...

Finally..FINALLY...we have some ACTION!!! I didn't realize how much I missed the fight scenes until I read it, I glad you explained where everyone else went because I was like 'just where DID they go???'

Oh, I'm glad we have a lil' extra glimpse of a 'small something' that Rin can do.

...and for a second I thought you had snapped Sesshoumaru's vertabrae...I was like 'what tha' hell!?! She can't have our Demon Lord disabled!!!' But it's ALL good! :-]

..you came with it.
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From ANON - Mina on August 13, 2005
This story getting better and better...so much action. I hate Rin...well not really. I'm just jealous of her...she has everything. She has new powers and she has the hottest demon lord taking care of her! So jealous ^_~ I love how Sesshomaru, even injured will not rest till Rin was found...I just love them.
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From ANON - Dimepieceleo on August 12, 2005
Wow I reread the last chapter and realized you gave
RIN the SAME POWER as SESSHY to TELEPORT
how cool is that !!!!!! so I guess he is going to be pissed off for awhile
as he tries to come to grips with this
go easy on Rin she is really going to blame herself for his injures
and so is inuyasha
CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER * wipes eyes of tears*
*sighs* must wait patiently
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