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Reviews for The Journey to the City of Endless Night

By : FarAwayEyes
  • From ANON - IamReven on August 04, 2005
    Kami!! Didn't see that coming!! I'm speechless!! Looks like Naraku has learned a few grolim tricks. Apparently someone pretty powerful is helping him because not only has he never tried possession before, but it would take some pretty significant powers to get Inuyasha to attack Kagome--just a mere suggestion wouldn't do it. Is he also trying something with Garion? He had the dreams, too. I can't wait to read the outcome--Great Cliffie!! Ya know, Garion's Alorn blood must really be kicking in. Seems like he would recognize the dreams significance since he was controlled by Asharack(sp?), taunted by Torak, and watched Zandramas possess Cenedra in much the same way. I guess the liquor was already kicking in. Poor Inuyasha, he is really gonna hate himself when he realizes what he tried to do. Thank Kami for Sessy(here I come to save the day--again)!!!


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  • From ANON - Miroku2235 on August 03, 2005
    NO! NOT A CLIFFY! Argh! I want to see how this turns out! I can't handle the wait, please update soon!
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on August 03, 2005
    wonderful chapters, amazing how much money can get you huh? wish i could make money out of air. loved garoin and inuyasha's drink time, wonderfully written. along with sesshoumaru's and inuyasha's little talk.
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  • From ANON - Mina on August 03, 2005
    What a cliffhanger??? I wonder hat possessed Inuyasha to do such a thing to Kagome. I hope Sesshomaru kick his ass. Well, I guess I just have to wait and see what happen to this amazing story!
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  • From ANON - SoutasSister on August 03, 2005
    I'm still following your wonderful story. Ooooo, I can't wait to see who is possessing Inuyasha and if he can overcome it himself or if Sesshoumaru will have to knock it out of him. Poor Inuyasha and poor Kagome! Keep the chapters coming! Thanks!
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  • From ANON - New Fan on August 03, 2005
    What spell did you put on Inuyasha and Rin? Or better yet, what is happening to Inuyasha
    and Rin when they were in that creapy forest? Was their companions effected as well? Did this
    spell only effect people who are suffering with deep issues. For an example, Rin is having troble
    ajusting to her new found power, Inuyasha always had a self-loathing attitude
    toward his self and Garion with his self-loathing as well. But apparently,Garion has not been affected
    by this power. Great chatper, update soon.
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  • From ANON - Nightclaw42 on August 03, 2005
    Excellent writing. This story is one of the best I've seen so far. Chapter before last actully made me want to cry as well written as it was. Your portrayl of the Inuyasha cast is the most in-character I have ever seen. I just found this fic and now I'm hooked. However something ocurred to me. In the scene where Kagome is putting shoes on Inuyasha I had a thought. I don't think Inuyasha wears shoes for an very specific reason. They hurt his feet. While watching an episode if Inuyasha at one close-up of Shippo; in the backround you can see 'Yashas feet and the toes had claws. It seem most human made shoes would force the claws back into his toes. Sess wears shoes but I figured that they were made to allow for this. So in reason Inuyasha would not wear shoes as they hurt and most likely make him clumsy. You find that you have better grip with bare feet and 'Yasha with his battle ridden lifestyle need any advantage he can get. Perhaps later you can put in a scene where Inuyasha explains to Kagome why he didn't want to wear the shoes. How they come that topic I leave to you. Other then that keep up the good work.

    P.S: I looooooove the scenes between Sess and Inu.
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  • From ANON - Gem on August 03, 2005
    Powerful things coming. Its getting darker out there. I think I'll just sit back and hang on. Never a dull moment with you directing the ebb and flow.
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  • From ANON - alize on August 03, 2005
    Oh my god!!! you left a cliffy! please pleae please update again soon!!! that was great but please dont leave me hangging for long.
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  • From ANON - Ed808 on August 02, 2005
    Wow Sess is really letting out his feelings! (Which is CooL!) Anyways,this is a great story, and i hope to see the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - alize on August 01, 2005
    Awsome chappy as always keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Miroku2235 on August 01, 2005
    Great chapter, this one sets a darker mood and I love it. Sesshoumaru seems to have turned the insult half-breed into kind of an endearment for Inuyasha. Can't wait until Rin learns to use the Will and the Word. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - DPM on July 31, 2005
    BRAVO !!! This is an incredible story. Technically, it's flawless. ...When will 'yasha stop whining like a dog...oohh sorry...he IS one ;-)

    Plot wise --- Fabulous !

    Firstly, this chapter shows a very courageous Sess. His confrontation with InuY hopefully will break that blinding self-degradation Inu puts himself through.
    I like the way you portrayed Sess in that he, who has always been proud of his bloodline, now seems to have enlarged that circle to include InuY and THAT must be a very humbling experience for him. He should be a greater Inuyoukai for realizing this and gaining some of that ...(may I say aloud...ok.ok..not too loud)...that familial compassion. This is great for his OWN emotional growth.

    Secondly, do you foresee that Rin will get a chance to spread her wings for just a teeny weeny bit from the "emotional sphere" of Sess ? Not too much ...just a wee bit... :-)

    I don't know how this Will and Word will play out but hope that she can mature psychologically and believe in herself and HER capabilities and not tie her entire identity solely on his definition and his existence.... But then, her "raison d'etre" started with his reviving her....(ARGHGHHGGHGh..Now you see why I am so torn about this because I am contradicting my reasoning...;0(

    You see why I'd never make it as a good writer.

    (Now, I certainly don't object having someone like him obsessing over my well-being so I am really torn about this....
    I love what you've done so far with this couple and the strengthening of their relationship but like you say about the "equal footing" bit....)

    Please continue your cool writing. I look forward to more great things from you !!!




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  • From ANON - inuyashaloverr on July 31, 2005
    That was a another good chapter. And thank you for answering my Rin question. Cant wait till you update again though. ^-^
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  • From ANON - New Fan on July 31, 2005
    Waht did that she-wolf mean to Rin when she said, 'are you ready'? Does she knows about
    Rin's powers? Now, what was Sess doing for Inuyasha beside trying to sober him up? Is he telling
    Inuyasha in his own way that he forgive him for cutting off his arm? What Inuyasha should have
    ask Sess was why did he not protect him when he was a child? That the answer I would love to here
    from Sess. By the way Inuyasha should not make Kagome fell as bad as she does telling her secret.
    Under the circumstances she had no choice. Update soon.
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