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Reviews for The Journey to the City of Endless Night

By : FarAwayEyes
  • From ANON - Gem on July 22, 2005
    Dare I say the plot thickens? So it seems a few of them have figured out Rin has abilities, though I think Kagome has some idea as well that she is also powerful. At this point if Naraku had any sense of self preservation he would run and never stop (well maybe for a change of clothes, after all he would most likely need it). That is going to be a terrible amount of power arrayed against him. Seems like you are full of surprises with the subplots, never a dull moment. Off on a tangent, I love how Inuyasha and Kagome revert to their old patterns and habits at times. Not only is it fun, but it is much more realistic than them coming to a sudden understanding and maturity, life never works like that, and neither does good fiction. My opinion, all fantasy should have a link to reality no matter how faint. It's what makes the unbelievable believed.

    P.S. regarding fanart for the story, you should ask if anyone on the adult fan art site is interested in doing a piece or two. There's no shortage of talent there. http://groups.yahoo.com/group/AdultFanFictionFanArt/
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  • From ANON - Meres on July 22, 2005
    And also, did I read right in that you've made that Ce'Nedra's second near-drowning? Was she not pregnant in the book, the first time? My recall is fuzzy as always, and I'm wondering if you've accounted for Geran and Beldaran or are they being left out like Pol and Durnik's twins? Sorry, canon diversions make my brain cramp . . .
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  • From ANON - Meres on July 22, 2005
    Awesome, awesome. I'm very curious to find out what Rin's first act of Will will be . . . nothing too traumatic, I hope, though I doubt there's very much that would move her to violence. Sesshoumaru's got that angle covered, so barring her being Disappeared™ by Naraku and forced to defend herself . . . it'll probably be something unbearably sweet and/or cute.


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  • From ANON - CollegGirl on July 22, 2005
    Oh that was too good (wipes eyes from laughing too hard). I so wish someone could draw the flower crowns on their heads. That was just the funniets thing. And i'm glad Inu got sat so many times. He deserved it for making Rin feel bad about her flower crowns. I'm glad you made him wear one too. Now the big question is, what will Garion do? Will the talk to Rin about it or will they let her be and see what happens. And poor Sess, he's in such denial. He has to realise his little girl sin't so little anymore. Can't wait for the next chappie.
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  • From ANON - Belldandychan on July 22, 2005
    Awesome chapter again ^^ Thanks for the info. If I can find a decent american book store out here I'll grab a copy ^^ Thanks bunchies and crunchies!
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  • From ANON - New Fan on July 22, 2005
    This was a very funny chapter. I pretty much laugh my way through the chapter. Poor Sess. He can not
    get any peace with his Rin and the strange things he is witnessing about Rin must be distrubing him greatly.
    I hope Pol tells Sess and Rin about her powers or Rin might accidently will herself out of existence. That will
    really make Sesshoumaru go mad!! Did Inuyasha wanted to have a child with Kagome that night that she went
    into heat? I would have thought that he would want to wait until they defeat Naraku. When will I see that crafty
    demon and his followers? Great chapter update soon.
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  • From ANON - CollegeGirl on July 22, 2005
    You are evil, I wanted more in that chapter. Whaaaaaa. Oh well i'm over it now. I loved the whole reaction to Myoga's wanting to talk to them. I really, really, wanted to smack INu for bringing up Kiyko. Really that boy needs to learns some tact. I loved the twist of having Kagome's and Inu-Yasha life span being the same. That wa really wll done. I went awwww when Rin was all cuddled up with her Sessy. I loved the bit with ther birds and her talking, and them helping make her a crown for Sessy. That was really well done. But i'm dying here, When is she going to talk to Polgara and find out she has the Will and The Word? I really hope we can get some fanart, there are several good part in the story that would make great pics. Can;t wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Belldandychan on July 21, 2005
    Hey! I love this story! I don't usually like crossovers but you got me hooked on this one. What was the name of the series you crossed over with? I'd like to read it ^^ Thanks!!

    ~~Sami-chan
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  • From ANON - Meres on July 20, 2005
    Just popping by to say that you? Rock. Keep the awesome coming.
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  • From ANON - heather on July 20, 2005
    loven it as always!! anyway i have a question. 1. how old is rin in this story? and 2. please dont think i'm a hentai for asking this but is rin and sessy going to be getting it on because she is a "woman" now?

    i mean i know back in the day as soon as women got there first period they were married off. anyway i'm just curious nothing more.
    i hope your not offended by this type of question i just wanted to know.

    anyway love your story update again soon.
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  • From ANON - alize on July 20, 2005
    lovely just lovely. you always bring something new to each chapter and this new development with rin is something i would have never thought of. you are truly gifted and that imagination of yours is out of this world. as always great update.
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on July 20, 2005
    wonderful chapters, so rin has a gift? that is a very interesting twist you have added. can't wait to see how sesshoumaru is going to react to this. loved how the birds were helping her with her crown. poor inuyasha still worrying about if he is good enough. i really enjoyed garion and inuyasha's talk, so garion feels like he is a monster? those two just go good together. like how you came back to explain the light when kagome and inuyasha mated, great pick up! like how myouga has made his appearance, slept the whole time lol! can't wait to see what you have in mind next! keep up the good work and take care!
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  • From ANON - New Fan on July 20, 2005
    What I can get from Garion comment to Inuyasha, Rin might be very powerful. Poor Sess he just don't know what to make of it.
    When will the other socessors find out about Rin? Will Naraku find out about Rin too from his spies around the palace? It seems
    natural that Rin powers will be connect to nature. Update the story soon.
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  • From ANON - kittenclaws on July 20, 2005
    it is so awesome i love your story and i can't wait for you to update you have a great talent keep it up
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  • From ANON - anrehah on July 19, 2005
    It took me two days to read your entire story so far!!! ;D Grammatically, your chapters are perfect. Content wise, this is the first cross over I have really gotten into, and you are doing a fine job in developing all the characters. I am curious though: everyone is fighting, but Kagome has yet to kick some ass. Is it possible that she will in the future? And wonderful job developing all of the relationships! It's very steady, and I wish there were more to read! Looking forward to your next chappie, and hoping to read more "Curious Sesshoumaru" moments!


    anrehah



    btw- Has anyone done fanart for this? I would love to see the picture of Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru on the camera drawn out... :D
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