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Reviews for The Journey to the City of Endless Night

By : FarAwayEyes
  • From ANON - Collegegirl on July 18, 2005
    People are going to die. That's all there is to it. Rin is in pain and Sesss can't make it stop. Things are going to be destroyed unless someone can tell him what's going on. I feel for poor Rin, it's so painful your first time. I really enjoyed the interplay between Sess and Kagome, we know whose Alpha in this pack. I loved the possessive Inu Yasha and the nice leomon. When will these people learn that upsetting dog demons is detremntal to your health. Stupid Narkau. You are so going down. Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - Gem on July 18, 2005
    Lots of things happening since I last had a chance to check in. It looks like you have some very interesting ideas for future chapters that you are setting up for. Something for Kagome and Inuyasha that Myoga will reveal and this last chapter leaves us with the idea Rin is coming into powers as well. I think I'll just mention again how much I like the way you pay attention to the background, you give a very good picture of the places involved without over doing it. It adds so much to the depth of the story and enhances what the characters are doing. In many cases it helps us to see why they may behave in certain ways and how the interact with their surroundings gives insight into the characters, ( how everyone deals with the kittens for example). Plus it just rounds out the story, gives it yet another layer, adding to the overall depth. Your whole writing is very well balanced that way, each element given its proper weight. As always, a most pleasant read. Take care.
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  • From ANON - Miroku2235 on July 18, 2005
    Rin can use the Will and the Word? Wicked! Never saw that twist coming.
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  • From ANON - New Fan on July 18, 2005
    What is going on with Rin?? She is one of them? If she is then how powerful is she? Poor
    Sess, he has not a clue what female women goes through? What will the other people in the
    group think of Rin's new power?? Update soon.
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  • From ANON - CLAUDINE on July 18, 2005
    & I FORGOT TO0 SAY THANKYOU FOR WRITTING BACK TO ME AT THE END OF YOUR STORY THANKYOU .;)

    TSCHUSS CLAUDINE
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  • From ANON - CLAUDINE on July 18, 2005
    I MUST SAY AGIAN YOU DID A GREAT JOB I LOVE YOUR STORY . ITS GREAT THAT YOU HAVE MODE IT LIKE THEY HAVE ALL BECOME LIKE A FAMILY ITS FUN TO SEE HOW INU YASHA & HIS BROTHER ACTING THAT IN THAT WAY . I KNOW IN THE THIRD MOVIE & A COUPLE OF EP OF INU YASHA AT THE END THEY HAD DONE SOME STIFF TOGEATHER BUT NOT AT LIKE THE WAY YOU HAVE PUT IT IN YOUR STORY . SO AGIAN I MUST SAY KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK & THANKS FOR THE UP DATE . I JUST CANT GET ENOUGH OF THIS STORY .

    TSCHUSS

    CLAUDINE
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  • From ANON - lee on July 18, 2005
    What a great chapter! Not only was it a tender and sweet scene with Kagome explaining on becoming a woman to Rin, but the idea that Rin has the Will and the Word talent like Polgara and the others is awesome. I wonder if her blossoming talent brought on her first menstrual cycle? And will her talent somehow help the group in their quest against Naraku?

    Thumbs up on spanking Rin's bully. Little jerk deserved it.

    Keep posting. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on July 17, 2005
    wow! i'm gone a week and come back and look at all the chapters! loved how the party went. the interaction between kagome and sesshoumaru was a wonderful to read. liked sango and miroku's little moments as well. it is really interesting on how sesshoumaru and inuyasha's relationship is changing, like how you pointed out how inuyasha noticed how similar he and his brother's looks are when he saw the picture. still loving your story! keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - andross on July 17, 2005
    lol you need more nifty future items too show sesshomaru lol his reactions are priceless. the tai-youkai looking like a curios inuyasha LOL.
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  • From ANON - lee on July 17, 2005
    I am glad that Inuyasha gets a chance to do some damage to the bad guys. Hah! like daggers can kill him. I was giggling at your scene with the picture phone. I can see Sessy with a curious child-like wonder on some of Kagome's items. It is great.

    I do hope you get to show off Sango and Miroku fighting technigues to the Eddings characters.

    Great story so far. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - New Fan on July 17, 2005
    Great chapter. When will the real fight going to begin involving everyone? When will they
    reach Naraku? What traps are in story for our heros? Update soon.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on July 16, 2005
    Last review, then I'll just SIT back and enjoy the show...

    Big smile....B-I-G smile! I'm glad that situation was dealt with Sesshoumaru-style....and actually the fact Inuyasha respected his mate's wishes shows his deep love for her more than growth. Shoot! Any demon that goes through a hissy-fit over some damn shoes NEEDS to grow up, after all it was JUST one night.

    That's another thing, you hadn't run across any pictures of an older Inuyasha, that's something I've yet seen people do.
    Now, I've seen someone do a professional drawing of a half-naked Sesshoumaru wearing nothing but his fur pelt and yellow sash [*blush*] but that's a different subject.

    Oh and speaking of His Sexiness...I see he has noticed that Rin is developing into a young lady, question is how will he approach it? Will he distance himself or allow the females in the pack to handle the situation? Because Rin hasn't had a female role model to emulate.
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  • From ANON - Lee on July 16, 2005
    I am really enjoying your story. I usually don't read crossovers but I think it was a great idea to link Eddings' world with Inuyasha. I was wondering if you are gonna make Zakath single or married to Cyradis as in the Malloreon series? And if you did use Cyradis would you have her use powers? I think that would throw Sessy into a loop.

    I like the brother bonding relationship between the two demons. I always figure they were more bark than bite. (Although, I wouldn't mind getting a few bites from either one of them.) I definitly believe their growing respect for each other would only make them stronger and one tough team to defeat. Naraku will sure have his hands full.

    I love the love scenes with Kagome and Inuyasha. I enjoy the dance with Miroku and Sango and that kiss was magical. Will there be love scenes with them?

    And will we see Kikyo? I think she will keep Polgara on her toes, not beat her just enough to raise her eyebrow.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 15, 2005
    This story is THE BEST plain and simple a perfect mix between the two stories. I hope to see new chapters out soon, but theres no rush.
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  • From ANON - DPM on July 15, 2005
    Sess is such a single-tracked, focused dude when it comes to protecting his honor, his family, and his name. So COOL ! He's such a machine.

    Thank you also for writing in a little more interaction between Rin and him and the clarification of the pairings.

    Where do you get your inspiration ?!??!?! It's been an amazing story.

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