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Reviews for The Journey to the City of Endless Night

By : FarAwayEyes

From ANON - Amy-sama on July 15, 2005
Sorry if double post!
I've read your work straight through and I have to say I'm hooked. The Edding group is unfamiliar to me but I just might have to check it out:) I think you made the right decision about Inuyasha and Sess. Inu would feel the need to kill but his half human side and Kag would stop him. (more Kag then anything else) Sess is a little talkitive to me but this is yours. Keep writing and I'll keep reading! Thanks
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From ANON - alize on July 15, 2005
great chapter!!! oh and yeah i guess i have mentioned it before. i guess i'll have to come up with a better complement :-)

how's this: (i think your a wonderfully skilled writter)

plz update again soon.
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From ANON - heather on July 15, 2005
as always your chapters are wonderful. keep up the good work and post more chapters soon.
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From ANON - New Fan on July 15, 2005
That was a great chapter. I really enjoyed it with Sess and Rin. Rin has a positve impact on him. Now if
he just show some respect to Sango and Miroku and stop scaring Shippo. Update soon.
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From ANON - SP777 on July 15, 2005
..another thing.

I was kinda hoping that once Inuyasha caught up with the 'ass', he would've insinuated that he made a promise to his mate not to kill him...but his brother made no such promise.

It would have been nice to read.
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From ANON - SP777 on July 15, 2005
New person on the block...I found your story by accident while looking for something on a search engine.

The summary made me curious, because any story that has Inuyasha & Sesshoumaru in it will draw me....that and the fact I long to see [but I don't think it will happen in the anime now that's it over & Ms. Takahashi gives no guarantees for certain] the 2 Inu brothers ACTUALLY come to some understanding and BECOME brothers.

Because I've always felt Sesshoumaru's animosity was more of jealousy & aristocratic breeding that demons, especially those who are high-class, are MORE superior than humans.

Oh and another thing...can you give a brief summary of who is who....I know NOTHING of the David Edding's series and can't get the names straight.
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From ANON - CollegeGirl on July 15, 2005
Another great two chapters. You keep updating them too fast for me to keep up! I adored the last two chapters though. You did a great job with Sango's point of view. I know you were worried about it but it was great. I loved how Polgara got to play matchmaker, we need more of that in this story. And that man is incredibly lucky that Inu Yasha dindn't fully transform and that Kagome begged for his life. Rin and Inu Yasha dancing was soooo cute. I could see it perfectly in my minds eye. The plot thickens even more. Inu is not going to let Kagome out of his sight for a while now. I bet anything that Miroku and poor Sango are going to get stuck in more embarrasing positions. I felt so sorry for Kagome when Inu Yasha geve her that big fright. He was a meany!! I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
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From ANON - IamReven on July 14, 2005
Revenge is a dish best served hot , bloody, and dripping with terror!! I knew Inuyasha would jump to the wrong conclusion when he smelled Kagome's blood on Sessy, but I'm glad their relationship has progressed enough that he actually managed to ask questions first. The hunt was outstanding, though. I just knew Kagome was gonna keep him from killing the bastard. Oh well, can't have Inuyasha killing humans in cold blood, even if they do deserve it. I like that Inuyasha noticed the lack of fear in Belgarath, can't have dog-boy getting too high and mighty (Sessy is bad enough!). I didn't get a chance to review the last couple of chapters, but I wanted to let you know that I appreciated your portrayal of Sango. She's so fierce and yet feminine at the same time. She could kick any man or demon's ass, but still gets all shy and gushy over a simple dance. The kiss between her and Miroku was perfect--spontaneous yet promising (if he doesn't blow it!). Keep the chappies coming. I can't wait to see how the other spies fit in and who they're stupid enough to mess with. After what Inuyasha did to their friend, they're gonna have a hard time talking themselves into going after the jewel shards.
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From ANON - New Fan on July 14, 2005
Another great chapter. I am trying to figure out what it this new truce that Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru
have? What it Myoga part in this story? The future wife of Sesshoumaru better not be anyone else espect
Rin (once she comes to age). How much does Sess trust Sango and Miroku with Rin? Will they prove there
'loyality' like Inuyasha did when he protected Rin from Kagura? Update soon.
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From ANON - SoutasSister on July 14, 2005
Wow! More updates! I enjoyed your new chapters and I look forward to seeing how Inuyasha comforts Kagome now that she's so upset and since 'punishment' for the 'shoe incident' (and, yes, I still would have loved it if she had smacked his bare bottom!) is out of the question for the time being.

I'm glad that Inuyasha kept his promise to Kagome but I'm disappointed in Sesshoumaru. I was hoping, after he told Inuyasha, [quasi-quote near the end of the chapter] "I see you kept your promise to your mate, little brother," and Inuyasha said, "Yeah, but barely," that Sesshoumaru would say, "Well I made no such promise," and he would take off after the bad guy. But, since I don't know what you plan for the bad guy to do now, and since I really like your story, I guess I won't complain too much or second guess about what you have planned. ~_^

I can't wait to read more. Keep the chapters coming please.
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From ANON - Gem on July 14, 2005
Bliss! I am so enjoying the fast updates ( reading is my treat to myself after work, and its been very nice to have had this waiting for me so to speak, mind you, quality is worth waiting for). I see you have Inu growing as a character as well. It's amazing how having to think of another person before yourself can bring out the best in someone. Using Kagome as his motivation works. The whole group dynamic is shifting, and I must say I like the direction your taking it. It still has the classic pairings ( I still like those the best), but I think the pack will grow stonger because of it. Til next time.
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From ANON - aliza on July 14, 2005
have i mentioned that i think you are way talented?

anyway that was some awsome writting, cant wait for the next chapter.

keep up the good work and update again soon:-)
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From ANON - DPM on July 13, 2005
STRONG, STRONG technically well-written chapter but on a more emotionally driven level (and I am an emotional creature), why do I get this feeling that this is evolving into a Sess/Kag plot (I hope that it was something I had for dinner that's upsetting my tummy). It has lost some of the original luster/appeal to me. Please tell me I am wrong...Pleeaaazzzeee...

Their characters would be so misfitted. Inu's childish temperament needs someone like Kag who can anchor him but can give as good as it takes. Likewise, Sess's wiser/more worldly temperament is a better match for Rin. Yin/yang, good/bad, left/right, etc ..these elementals are what make characters interesting.

The characters of Sess and Rin are richer in texture and depth within context of each other based on their strengths and weaknesses and dependency on each other's developmental growth. Ditto for Inu/Kag....

What are your plans on the pairings ? That will help me to know if I should pursue this story further.

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From ANON - kittenclaws on July 13, 2005
i love how it is turning out and am waiting breathlessly for when it is complete i love it
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From ANON - Gem on July 13, 2005
A lot of great character development in this last chapter. There is just to much to mention in detail. As I have stated before I love how you are filling out Sess' persona. Now we have the caring older brother and diplomat. That little mention of Rin and Inu was perfect, exactly something the charcters would do. I think you have Sango down well, unsure of herself in the social arena but very forcefull when it comes to something she knows. The dance with the two of them was good, that Miroku could charm the scales of a snake if he wanted to! You managed to find a believable way for them to kiss as well, with both of them being off balance and out of their normal comfort zone, just the time for something to happen. Gonna be fun when Inu does find out whats been going on, he is going to be mad at everyone! Take care.
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