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Reviews for The Journey to the City of Endless Night

By : FarAwayEyes
  • From ANON - New Fan on July 13, 2005
    Great chapter. I wonder who is the lucky lady Sess would make happy. Does Kagome have a clue on who
    she might be? Is Sess waiting for her until she is ready? Sango and Miroku finally got there dance.
    I thought that would pass them by. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - cd on July 12, 2005
    damn i love this story. The development of the characters personalities and relations is quite impressive. Keep it up. Hope to see more!

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  • From ANON - Collegegirl on July 12, 2005
    Oh dear, things are going to be interesting for poor Kagome. When Inu-Yasha finds out what happened to her heads are going to roll. And if Sess ever finds out that thos children hurt Rin's feelings even more heads are going to roll. I loved the scene where Inu made a fool out of himself with the spicey food. Poor Kagome and Sess. I guess dog demons don't like spicy food. I almost bust a gut laughing when you had the two guys go and meet the different royalty and how bad they smelled. You did a great job sneaking in the Monk's point of view. It didn't seem akward or disjointed at all. I can't wait for the next chapter. Things are definatly starting to get interesting here. Congratulations on being nominated for the IY Fan Guild contest. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - claudine on July 12, 2005
    well first of wanted to say thankyou for bringing a great story to read . i have to say thye way you have made the alternitve world & the people in the story is very powerful writting you cant find people that write like you very often so thankyou for shareing it with everyone on adult fanfic i will look forward to reading more of this story & anymore that you put out & i also sent it to a couple of my friends . so agian thankyou . you bring a new light to some of the people in the series inu yasha .

    tschuss

    claudine d. hibbard
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  • From ANON - IamReven on July 12, 2005
    Great chappie! I liked Sessy playing the hero ("Here I Come To SAVE The Day!!!), but Inuyasha is gonna go balistic when he smells Kagome's blood on him. We both know that Inuyasha is the slash first, ask questions later type. Maybe Garion and Zaketh will be able to pull him off Sessy before things get too far out of hand, but it'll probably just take a good "SIT" from his mate. I knew putting Silk and Miroku together was gonna mean trouble, and it seems I was right. At least Silk is keeping Miroku from making the same old social faux paus (I know--my spelling sucks!). Alot of fanfic authors forget the depth in Miroku's character and just concentrate on the hentai portion. I'm glad you gave him the intelligence ( and/or wisdom) to catch something that even Silk missed. I guess they'll be okay as long as they're helping Zaketh, but once Silk trains Miroku a little in the Drasnian cottage industry, there'll be no stopping them!! Keep it coming !! Arigato!!!
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  • From ANON - Gem on July 11, 2005
    Wow quick work of late! Color me impressed. Seems the boys family protective instincts have kicked in with a vengeance. Like how you portrayed Sess's handling of the assassin. Control with deadly intent, he'll get what he needs then dispose of the villain. Can't help but wonder how the gang will react to seeing Kagome at Sesshomaru's side, talk about challenging heir concept of realty! All the political intrigue and plots, very distracting for the characters, you just have to assume everyone is out to get you, put your back against the wall and wait for it. Makes for some interest tension. Oh and I'm betting Ce'nedra is going to get a "talking to" for leaving Kagome on her own, being taken away by some strange man, silly girl. Can't wait to see what you dream up next. 'Til then take care.
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  • From ANON - alize on July 11, 2005
    yet another great chapter. i love your fic! keep up the good work and please update again soom.
    p.s.
    have i mentioned how talented i think you are?
    :-) very talented.
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  • From ANON - New Fan on July 11, 2005
    This is getting so interesting. I just love how this story is turning out. Is Miroku going to get that dance from
    Sango? Will Inuyasha going to bust up the party once he finds out about his mate? Will Rin get her revenge
    on that nasty little boy who said those mean things about Sesshoumaur? Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Gem on July 10, 2005
    Just got back and, yay, two chapters! I don't even know where to start with the bath scene and then the naked butt! Inventive way to get him in the water. tsk tsk Kagome using her womanly wiles, unfair really, its like 'shooting fish in a barrel'. That tiff over the shoes was priceless! I could literally see it, the way you described it and with the background on the suite itself. Then the finishing touch of the peanut gallery walking in, gods I laughed! The next chapter was again an interesting peek into the persoanlities present. Liked how you showed Sess in his element, or more correctly in a often neglected apect of his character. I am also thinking the developing friendship between Inu and Garion is going to prove fun, mabe not as entertaining as Miroku and his new partner in crime (hide the valuable and lock up your daughters as they say), but there is something to work with there. Have fun and keep up the great writing!
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  • From ANON - NewFan on July 09, 2005
    Too bad that Sesshoumaru was not around when that boy was saying those mean things. I can
    see the boy pissing in his pants. What mischief can Inuyasha and Rin get into at the party? Will
    Miroku show is preverted side at the party? And when will the party get ruin by Naraku and his minion???
    Update soon.
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  • From ANON - IamReven on July 09, 2005
    So far, even better than I expected. I'm glad you threw in the Gandahar rice dish escapade, it was great seeing Sessy "simmer" (but it made me miss Sadi--sniffle, sniffle). I'm also glad to see the Inuyasha won the shoe fight. He's alot like Belgarath in that he feels he shouldn't have to impress anybody. He has fought so hard his whole life to make himself a place in society and has built up all these walls to protect himself, and now placing him in this court situation has made him uncomfortable enough that he needs to have control of something, even if it is just his wardrobe (or the lack thereof). I really liked him coming to Rin's rescue, and I'll have agree with Garion about Sessy not overhearing. Can't wait for the next chappie!!!!
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  • From ANON - KJ on July 09, 2005
    another wonderful chapter, only way it could have gone better is if fluffy himself hadda heard the cracks being made about him, or if koga had shown up

    I do love this story, it's been the only one that's really stood out to me in a long while

    As a side note, in regards to your last point, you have at least one nomination *coughs and whistles innocently*

    good luck and I will be waiting with baited breath for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - alize on July 09, 2005
    another. keep up the good work. oh and i have a question : is sessy like a father fig. to rin or is waiting till she is old enough to take her? also what is this growing relationship with rin and inu? is it like a bro/sis thind or is becomeing attracted to her?

    please dont get offended by my questions i just want to know. and no matter your answer i still love your story.
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on July 09, 2005
    the whole meal scene especially sesshoumaru's reactions were hilarious! so the brothers are not so different? LOL!! i really like the character garion, the godslayer. it seems that inuyasha and he would make good friends. the scene with rin and inuyasha was very touching also. thank you for a wonderful update!
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  • From ANON - CollegeGirl on July 07, 2005
    I loved the scene with the hot bath! It had me rolling on the floor. Poor Sango getting stuck in a reveling dress. Miroku is going to be hopless to live with. You should have had Kagome cry so he would put the shoes on. That always gets to him. I think dog demons have a thing with women crying. They hate it. I can't wait until the feast happens. Rin is going to be so cute during it. I love how you keep all the characters in well character. You balance the action with getting into the characters head well. I'm getting to know Inu and Sess and the rest better then I ever thought I would. Keep up the great work and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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