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Reviews for Fumbling Toward Ecstacy

By : flowers
  • From KakashiTenshi on June 25, 2007
    Please continue the story.. its great.

    I hope Fluffy learns that everything he sees is not his for the taking.. and must wait.. I know he has waited nearly 500 yrs.. but Kagome is a strong woman and will fight him every step of the way. Especially, if fluffy dont tell her whats up. SHe hates secrets and cheaters.

    KT/STT/STS
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  • From ANON - Feather on August 17, 2006
    Oh this is such agood story. I hope you add another chapter soon. I'm a wee bit confused though as to why Kagome left Fluffy but I guess in later chapters it'll be more clear. Welp I hope you keep writing your story is simply wonderful.
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on December 10, 2005
    Geeze, I got interrupted on my IM and kinda screwed that up! LOL Anyhow, I can help with the details if you like.

    Snowfall
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on December 10, 2005
    This is an excellent fic. You immerse the reader in the minds of your characters. Feelings and actions are so intense. (I am also speaking of Elsewhere). As far as ideas go, if you want to go popular cannon, Sesshoumaru would know if Kagome were pregnant and I do believe that his animal nature may be a bit rough.

    I'm not certain when you posted the last chappie, but you were in need of a little help in the muse department. Using a pregnant Kagome against Sesshoumaru would be cliche and Sesshoumaru would have smelled it, if you go by popular myth. I would save a child as a reward for Sesshoumaru after he have him approach regaining Kagome's favor as a mission to be investigated and planned in every detail. He must study the human mind, learn everything that he can about what makes Kagome happy, etc. He must woo her without suffocating her. I know how that can be done if you wish to email me.

    sparkling_snowfall@hotmail.com

    Snowfall


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  • From ANON - RainStorm on December 07, 2005
    Dear flower,
    How are you? I hope your well. I'm not sure if my grammer is a lot better, if better at all, but if you want my help it is your. I'm a little lost because with "Elsewhere" I only got as far as chapter 21, so there's a whole lot I"m missing. But from what I have read, I like. Of course I would love for Kagome to be pregnant, and I do hope that you have plans for her pregnancy somewhere in the plot. Sesshoumaru being emotional and him being dependent while Kagome is trying to be independent is quite unusual and I can't wait to see where you are going with all of this. I love you're work, and I know that whatever you do, I'll love it. Oh yeah, where is Shippo and Kouga? Could you please have Kagome ask Sesshoumaru that question are for them to explore what happened to them? Please Please Please!!! Thank You and PEACE!!!
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  • From ANON - Fuchsia on November 05, 2005
    You really got it, congratulations!! I've never read a fic with this pairing before where I found nothing lacking.
    I started reading "Elsewhere" and I was not able to stop until I had finished the hole story including this
    sequel (I am utterly grateful for). Now as for your grammar, I advise you to roam AFF and read other
    peoples fics while especially paying attention to the grammar. I promise: THERE you'll find terrible spelling!
    "Elsewhere" (and its sequel) is the only story I thought well enough to be reread, so praise to you.
    Try to finish "Fumbling towards ecstasy" as soon as possible
    Greetings Fuchsia
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  • From ANON - Emily on October 30, 2005
    well it took me a while to find Elsewhere and this story but i did manage to do it! ever since a single spark went haywire, i've been trying to find the fics that i used to read on either this site or ff.net. well i found you. and it's made me incredibly happy. now to review the story. i loved the end of Elsewhere. it was great. this story is good too, but as you said, it could definately be more. i don't know how you could do it or what you could use, all i know is that it's missing that something that Elsewhere had, that made it great. wow i think this is the most critical review i've ever written, and it's really not that critical. well update soon.~Emily
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  • From ANON - very pissed raine on October 29, 2005

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  • From ANON - raine on October 29, 2005
    A sequel o^_____________^o....
    YAY!!!

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  • From ANON - Tori on August 29, 2005
    I love this story. The dark imagery creates a very strong statement in my mind. I'm hoping that you're still going to continue at some point?
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  • From ANON - lost child on August 22, 2005
    when are you going to update. It's been months. Please update, I want to know what happens. I loved Elsewhere and now I want to read the sequel, but I had yet to see an update. Please write.
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  • From ANON - Kjinuyasha on August 12, 2005
    Elslewhere isnt finished yet is it?????

    tell me because Im kinda like ooookaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyy. What happened after she was like, Im not mad or whatever you wrote. You know what Im talkin bout right? Email me so I can know whats up.
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  • From ANON - Julie on June 21, 2005
    I am so glad to see that you are writing again. I had all but given up on Elsewhere, and now another story?! These first two chapters are great and I look forward to reading more in the future!
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  • From ANON - catseye on April 17, 2005
    Oh, and by the way, Why should they not have a child sometime in the future? HMMMM??????? hehehehe!
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  • From ANON - catseye on April 17, 2005
    I wondered if there was going to be anything from " Elsewhere". Why did she want to leave in the first place. That lost me.I know she has a real thing for her "studies". but damn, that was like jr. high. Can she not reside herself to have the best of both worlds as it were. "Him" being the formost. She tamed the full blooded youkai, part becuz shes a miko, but most becuz of her spirt I think. she should not falter him now. To him, in his mind, his heart and his very being, she is in his life now. She needs to maybe rethink her actions yet again.

    I do like what I have read thus far. But you did say you wanted some feedback. Did it help any? I hope so.
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