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By : michelle5137
  • From ANON - Tyler on March 06, 2005
    *sob sob sob, wipes tear from eye* that was beautiful!!!!!! Please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - DarkChimera on March 04, 2005
    Yes!! Please update!! I want more chapters.
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  • From ANON - Jasmine Fields on March 03, 2005
    What?! Over with so soon? You need more chapters!!! I need more chapters!!! Errrr. All
    your readers need more!!!!

    Don't abandon this, got it???!!!!
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  • From ANON - Benzaiten on March 03, 2005
    This story so great....you are so evil, you made me cry...its so sad ;.; ...anyway please udate soon...i am dying to read when kagome and kurama get together....Ja ne
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  • From ANON - myrrdinowl on March 03, 2005
    no worries and i really liked how you handled the great farewell scene. if you think your mistake was funny then listen to this. a friend of mine was at work and she and a few of her co-workers were talking. Somehow they got on the topic of Japan and my friend said the holiday she would miss the most when she was living would be thanksgiving. Her one co-worker replied with "don't they celebrate thanksgiving?" i would normallly say america-centric, but i think in her case it was all out ignorance. keep up the great work and update soon! :)
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  • From ryukotsusei on March 03, 2005
    To be honest I much prefer Youko when he is intense. I'd love to see him portrayed that way in your story. I'll tell you, you are one of my favorite writers, you were the one who got me hooked on reading stories with Kuronue and Youko in them. :-) Another great chapter, everyone reacted exactly as I would hope to see and you could feel how badly Sango was hurting. I bet Inu could have gone without that last sit if we were to ask him but we're not. It always amuses me to see him eat dirt mwahaha. For your pillow and blanket theif, tell him to watch it. Kuronosuke has found out the hard way. He takes my pillow and blanket I do the only thing a girl can do in a situation like that. Sprawl out on top of him using him as a warm, comfy pillow and share the blanket. Kuronosuke complained the first time when I did that and went to sleep, I think he was expecting something else lol Looking forward to the next chapter and Kurama's appearance. Can't wait to read more but for now my guy is insisiting that we get the entire marking/bedding thing completed, then we can worry about the wedding. Hmm he's impatient, but so much fun ;-)
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 02, 2005
    I just read in the closet and then the beginning of this story. WOW WOW WOW
    I really really like it. I do have a suggestion. Since everyone in their lives is in the dark about their upcoming mating; maybe it should be discovered by Kagome's very protective demon brother Sessohumuru. I bet that would send some shockwaves through the group!
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  • From ANON - myrrdinowl on March 02, 2005
    excellent except for one little thing. July 4 is only the US's independence day. As far as i know, japan has never had one since they have never overthrown a tyrannical foreign government.
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  • From ANON - Ookami K. on March 02, 2005
    I found it.... cool. I love it.... Yes, a bit boring but hey you gotta give detail before the fun begins.... I loved the part about Sesshoumaru finding Kagome in her time...... That's so cool.... I wonder if Shippou, Inu Yasha or Kouga will live till Kagome's time? Gotta love Kouga, he so gullible and naive.... Well that's all for now until next the chapters.... Peace.
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  • From ANON - Sentinel_of_Ganymede on March 02, 2005
    WAAAAHHHHH!!!! This Sentinel is soooo sad! Kagome's adventure is over!!!!!! But this Sentinel can't help but look forward to seeing what is coming up next! Please don't keep us waiting!!!

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  • From ryukotsusei on March 02, 2005
    Have I told you before how much I love your style of writing? If I haven't, I'll say it now. I love the way you write! Very good first chapter, you bring through her emotions over making such an agonizing decission extremely well. We can't wait for you to update!
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