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By : VeryViciousVixen
  • From ANON - Shadowknight on April 25, 2005
    Well done! Spelling and grammar above par, and better than many who have English as their primary language. I look forward to reading many more fine stories from you. In lesser hands this would have been just another PWP stroke story, but the emotional context is quite well done and moves this to a whole other level.
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  • From ANON - Midnight_Sparrow on March 09, 2005
    It doesn't suck! It's well done, I like it.
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  • From ANON - Nick F. on March 03, 2005
    Hey just want to tell you good story and very nice, long lemon. Especially like the Buyo scratching his butt comment! He didn't do tthat while they were doing "it" did he?
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  • From fallenangel7583 on March 03, 2005
    i think you did great. you had an amazing lemon here, absoultly wonderful, and i got to say, the Kohaku thing was a great twist. really, i honestly did not expect that. i figured the average peping Miroku routine, so i was pleasenty suprised. GREAT story.
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  • From ANON - Coffee Gyrl on March 03, 2005
    I just reread your story and my review (yes I can't spell worth sh*t) and I realized that I forgot a few things. I liked the 'cheek to cheek' line very cute, and how she *transformed* his sword very funny. ^_^ and the cat scraching his butt thing (do cats do that?) I liked that you put the emotional as well as physcial discriptions in there it made the picture in my mind very clear of the story. I also liked that you had humorous bits in with the love scene I think that's very sexy. This really was very good espically for a first timer. I would love to see what else you could write about. I think that you did Kohaku's charater so well that I could see you doing a longer story with him or a string of one shots. Please keep going ^_^ Oh and could you please fill out your favorits list on your title page? I find this to be the best way to see new (or older) fanficts that I havn't read before. Usually if I like a person's writting then I'll like what they like to read as well. I always check the favorits list of good authors.....just like you! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Coffee Gyrl on March 02, 2005
    I gotta admit the intro didn't really appeal to me and it lacked capatial letters but I thought I'd give this a shot and see how I liked it and now that I've read it I must say you did an excelent job. I wouldn't have guessed that english is your second language this was very well written. I really liked that you showed a charater that we really don't see all that often but you're right on target with his inner thoughts. He is a teenage boy after all and a lot of people forget what that usually intales for him. I really liked this a lot but please try to do something about the introduction, this fic is more worthy than this.
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  • From ANON - keiko on March 02, 2005
    i loved this fanfic. its the best I have ever read. great job
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  • From ANON - Bookreader9999 on March 02, 2005
    Your story was great!!! I especially like him smiling "cheek to cheek"! Hope you get to write another story soon!!!
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  • From ChocolateHentai on March 02, 2005

    Hey.....Thats a great story, especially for your first fic. Your english is very good as well....keep writing!!
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