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By : Sesshysfavhuman
  • From ANON - Forgotten sunrise on March 14, 2005
    Wow~! That was soo good! I loved the part where Kouga was in his wolf form...it was such a cute and tender moment together. ^///^ *awwww* I actually read every word...well except for the dribble by Kagome...>.
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  • From ANON - Minako on March 14, 2005
    Ahhhhhhh i love the other chapters u've added. Please update soon!
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  • From on March 13, 2005
    i have one request!!! make inuyasha the seme at least once cuz lately all i've seen him as is t he uke. Good stuff by the way
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  • From miyu557 on March 13, 2005
    hey that was a great chapter even if inuyasha and kouga was not there, it clearly explains why kagome was acting so weird. i find it really good and yay for tenseiga. hope sesshy and his sword reaches them soon. you really did a great job with the chapter. i love it.

    as for my story well the pups will be born in the 15th chapter i think and i would like to give a very very big chocolate chip imaginery cookie for being the 100th reviewer. oh thank you thank you so much *does a little happy dance*.

    now please please hurry with the next chapter i can't wait to find out what happens next.

    bye for now!
    ^_~
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  • From ANON - kougas&inuyasha\'s girl on March 13, 2005
    This is sooooooooo good when are you going to update. I cant wait to see what happens with evryone
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  • From ANON - abha-chan on March 12, 2005
    Ok there are a few mistakes in the chapter I would like to point out

    1. “the monk just blank” okay…. I didn’t understand the meaning of this. It is either “the monk went blank” or “the monk just blinked”

    2. a few comma and question marks are messed up. Even inverted comma signs are a bit messed up.

    3. “echos” should be spelts as “echoes”

    4. “you’re” is mispelt as “your”

    5. “Tenseiga” s mispelt “Tensegia”

    Anyway although these mistakes are minor they destroy the beauty of the chapter. Plz don’t think I am being rude, just tell your beta to check it out. Anyway the chapter was great even if inu-chan and Kouga was not present and I am eagerly looking forward to read the next.

    So please please update soon,

    Ja ne! ^_^

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  • From ANON - justainufan on March 12, 2005
    This was an awsome chapter i hope sess makes it in time to save inu. cant wait for the next chapter this is such a good story
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  • From ANON - joy on March 12, 2005
    that was very interesting plz finish this i give this a 1000000000000000000000000000/10 so far!!! lol. u r an excellent writer
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  • From ANON - lolo on March 12, 2005
    thie was wonderful, exellent, and great!!!!
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  • From ANON - Polka dot on March 12, 2005
    I just knew that Sessy would come through after all they are kin, and besides if Inuyasha has 3/4 demon kids, it takes some of the pressure off of Sess to continue the bloodline.
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  • From ANON - yukiko on March 12, 2005
    Will Sesshoumaru-sama will resurect Inu-yasha ? please ...
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  • From ANON - Shivawn(not signed in) on March 12, 2005
    Wow! This is really kewl! When InuYasha died, I somehow knew SesshoMaru would be in this! Cause InuYasha canNOT stay dead! Please update soon! Really good story!

    The last chapter...7 or whatever is titled 'The Deal and the Vibrating Sword' and I thought it was a perverted sword of thing lol when I first looked to see how many chapters there were...'vibrating' sword...lol

    Good story! Please UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - Shinna on March 11, 2005
    I was wondering if Sess would have some part in this. I hope he decides to help Inuyasha. update soon please
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  • From ANON - Dominic Shade on March 11, 2005
    Dude....I will give you the biggest imaginary cookie in the world if you don't kill/harm Sesshoumaru! *big puppy dog eyes*
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 11, 2005
    I want kagome to die.


    -schwarzwald
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