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By : Sesshysfavhuman
  • From on March 08, 2005
    I love this story, hope for you to update soon! And I'm guessing Inuyasha's pregnant! Well can't wait till the next update!!!
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  • From ANON - Dominic Shade on March 08, 2005
    Oh please kill off Kagome. I'll give you candy....
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  • From ANON - Empress Yugi on March 08, 2005
    I love it^_^ Please write more
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  • From Atropa on March 08, 2005
    Two new chapters - loooong ones as well... You have a very good story going here...
    Thank you for sharing..
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  • From ANON - kogas hentai luver on March 07, 2005
    Another excellent chapter. Sweet, sweet Inu and Koga, really falling for each other. Kag is such a bitch in this fic and she deserves nothing least of all my pity. It was so cute having Inu cradled in Koga's lap sleeping. I just want to squeeze all the sugar out of those two. I think bringing Naraku back in will be fun. I also can't wait for Inu and Koga to figure out that Inu is pregnant. Won't Koga be soooo happy. Now he can have an heir and his puppy too. ^_^
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  • From ANON - yukiko on March 07, 2005
    need .... more .... or .... will ... die ...
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  • From ANON - miyu-chan on March 07, 2005
    miyu-chan rim557@vsnl.net 2005-03-07 id # 2035174489
    okay here you go....

    i have noticed some spelling mistakes and grammatical errors in your chapter.

    "whine" in mispelt as"wine"
    "naked" as "necked" etc etc.

    i know that you already have a beta but if you want help with the spellings and grammer let me know. it's better with two beta than one. if you need any help with the spelling ansd dtuff you can e-mail me.

    anyway the chapter the was great. i love it. ^_^

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  • From ANON - miyu-chan on March 07, 2005
    okay here you go....

    i have noticed some spellimg mistakes and grammatical erro in your chapter.

    "whine" in mispelt as"wine"
    "naked" as "necked" etc etc.

    i know that you already have a beta but if you want help with the spellings and grammer i can sure help. it's better with two beta than one. if you need any you can e-mail me.

    anyway the chapter the was great. i love it. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Zombie Hamster on March 07, 2005
    You're very welcome! >_< Anyhey, I like how the story is progressing...the love/hate relationship that Kouga and Inuyasha have is yummy! Expecially the lemons...mmmm. Just one suggestion, though--I think you could use a beta reader...someone to proof your stories for grammatical errors, typos, and the like. Even just skimming through your chapters yourself before you post them would do wonders. Don't be offended if it's aff's fault!

    Update soon so I don't suffer too much! I'm no good at waiting...~.^
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  • From ANON - YoungWind on March 07, 2005
    This is an awesome story.
    I love kouga/inuyasha yaoi fics!
    Are you going to finish the story?
    I hope so..Please finish it!!
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  • From ANON - sinheart on March 07, 2005
    this is so frikkin good u have to write another chapter and post it when u can.also u spelled naked wrong. just wanted u to know.
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  • From ANON - Yukiko on March 07, 2005
    good, now Kouga just made a emotional Inu yasha worst. Damn, he's an ass sometime.
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  • From ANON - crystalstar123 on March 07, 2005
    wow! that's your first lemon! my! that was so good. i wonder.... what will it when you go pro. yay!!! more and more kagome bashing. three cheers for sango. you rock!!!!!

    great chapter loved it loved it and loved it. oh plz plz update soon. i like where its going.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 07, 2005
    yey! naw, it was a good sex scene!
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  • From ANON - Dante on March 07, 2005
    That was your first sex scene?! (faints) If you're this good now, you'll probably kill someone when you get more experienced. Keep up the good work.
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