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By : Sesshysfavhuman
  • From on May 27, 2005
    this was a great chapter!!! i love how you put sesshoumaru and shinjo together, they are HOT together...i love the sex scenes in this chapter and the scene during dinner was funny... i would've been like kouga and inuyasha and start laughing. i don't know any names for the pups, but i recommend looking in any manga books that you have that are not popular here or give them names that mean sometime in japanese...update when you can

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  • From ANON - jasmine on May 27, 2005
    great chpater. loved it, but there's onething. There are a lot of spelling and gammatical mistakes and even the words are wrong in some place. if your beta has checked the chapter, i don't think she had done a very good job. you should ask her/him to check this chapter again. don't mind but i hate to see such a nice chapter ruined by so many mistakes. So next time before you post tell your beta to check the chapter nicely or ask for another betas help.

    AND THIS IS NOT A FLAME. I would never do that. i love your stories. it's just the misakes i hate to see a good chapter posted with so many mistakes in them.

    hope you understand what i am trying to say.


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  • From on May 27, 2005
    Maybe Risa or Usagi for the girl, Ryusuke or Hiroshi for one of the boys! This chapter was really good, about time you updated! Well update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - inu-chan puppy (too lazy to sign in) on May 27, 2005
    Those were reall great chapter and you did show the Sango and shinjo's separation pretty well. poor shinjo i feel so soory for him. hope he finds peace in sesshy, is he gonna get pregnant too? Now that eould be something, ne?


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  • From ANON - sessrocks on May 27, 2005
    Just what I need to make my day. This was so wonderful. Sesshoumaru and Shijo make the perfect couple! And Inuyasha is being so kind, offering to have Sessy's and Shinjo's babes for them. Very unique I must say. As for the names, you can ask Miyu-chan right? I had to search the web to come up with the name for my character. You can also search, just type Japanese names *Hehe* I would love to see how this proceedes. Update as soon as you can.
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  • From ANON - Atropa on May 27, 2005
    *sniffles* Just what I needed to get my day started...
    What can I say... cute, beautiful, hot, just perfect...!!
    *blows nose a bit and goes of to fetch herself another cup of coffee*
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  • From ANON - joy on May 13, 2005
    yaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy... good job.. loved how long the chapter was ty i love u
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 11, 2005
    awww so cute...we need a sess lemon now!!!!!
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  • From ANON - no name for now on May 11, 2005
    Oh my... that's so very...interesting and hot
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  • From ANON - maria on May 10, 2005
    hey ya updated. great chapter. update next chapter soon.
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  • From Atropa on May 10, 2005
    Now that was a twist if I ever saw one... Good chapter - as always.
    Sess gets a wolf...???
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  • From ANON - Rawben on May 10, 2005
    muhahaha!!! that is so freakin funny! but so dang sad for sango!!!! guh!! but i like the pairing anyhow... ;) update soon! it's been awhile...
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  • From ANON - Sessrocks on May 10, 2005
    Good work explaining Sesshoumaru's thoughts! It was a great chapter, update soon!
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  • From ANON - ~Fluffy~ on May 09, 2005
    OMG! OMG OMG! Pooor Shinjo......Althought i was crackign up throught the whole thing......Teaches then not to drink Sake.....Update soon please!!!! i can't wait to see what happenes next.
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  • From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver (not signed in) on May 09, 2005
    I love the idea of Sess and Shinjo being mates. I hope that they can stay that way. It just wouldn't make sense for a demon slayer to be mated to a demon. I'm really curious to see how you have all of this play out. Thanks for the really long chapter. I love long chapters. ^_^
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