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By : Sesshysfavhuman
  • From ANON - MeLaiya on March 22, 2005
    This was good but I dont think it was as well written as the other chapters, but i still loved it none the less. Um, you quite a few grammar errors in nearly every chapter but nothing a little spell check cant fix. So all in all this is an excellent fic and it keeps me coming back for more, just needs to be tweaked a bit. Anyhoo, keep up the good work.

    TaTa
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 22, 2005
    I was not expecting the whole Rin thing...but I found it quite an interesting twist! Keep up the good work!!
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  • From ANON - Nijo on March 22, 2005
    This is an awesome story. ^_^ I love how you crafted the story, how the characters develop, the sex scenes. I guess it would be simpler to say I like everything about this story!
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  • From ANON - nea on March 21, 2005
    I love this fic!!! What will be the length of inu's pregnancy? Is Rin a miko, or was what she did just a one time thing? Could Kouga become pregnant? It would be hilarious for him to become pregnant after their little session, and also he and inu could share the joys of pregnancy together. Looking forward to reading more. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - inu-chan puppy (too lazy to sign in) on March 21, 2005
    omg omg OMG!!! this chapter is so good, it so so so cute, i just love it. i mean kouga is so cute with all his songs and cutting of his hair? that was brilliant idea. it was so heart warming and touching i need to sit with a box of kleenex. and later that lemon y god that was so steamy and inuyasha is seme too yay!!! a superb chapter....

    and 3 pups wow! i hope they'll be born soon!!

    you are doing a great job... keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 21, 2005
    I'm so happy and very proud of Sess. He did a great deed! Can't wait to see the ceremony and was Rin a surprise. Who would have thought she was a miko?! Keep the great work!!!
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  • From ANON - joy on March 21, 2005
    that was PERFECT!!!! It was so romantic, passionate, cute, sad, funny, enchanting, and heart warming!!! i need a kleenex
    plz continue u r excellent.. i liked how u described all the things plz keep up with that
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on March 21, 2005
    I'm really liking this! Keep going because I was about to re-read it and...well it's kind of embarrassing to admit so at least finish this story and never kill Inu Yasha again! C ya!
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  • From ANON - Zombie Hamster on March 21, 2005
    Yet another beautiful chapter! And I may be wrong, (or you could've chosen to do this on purpose) but I was under the impression that there's no difference between a priestess and a miko. Just something I caught that I wondered about. Please don't be offended if I don't know what I'm talking about!

    Keep up the good work. ^.^--ZH
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  • From ANON - Zombie Hamster on March 21, 2005
    Yet another beautiful chapter! And I may be wrong, (or you could've chosen to do this on purpose) but I was under the impression that there's no difference between a priestess and a miko. Just something I caught that I wondered about. Please don't be offended if I don't know what I'm talking about!

    Keep up the good work. ^.^--ZH
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  • From ANON - My Sweet Koinu on March 21, 2005
    Beautiful story. You are an excellent writer, and I hope you keep up the good work. *smirk* I love Kagome bashing. ;)
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  • From ANON - update soon on March 21, 2005
    awesome
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  • From ANON - Kyra wilson on March 21, 2005
    I think your story is great, love the plot . I like how you made Kagome evil you brought stuff that nobody as far I have seen nobody has. Keep up the good work
    it's really cool.
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  • From ANON - yukiko on March 21, 2005
    Finally some good news !! and a nice lemon ....

    I have only one thing to say .... you .... CUT .... kouga ...... ponytail ?
    this ...... they better strangely grow really fast soon !!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - miyu-chan on March 21, 2005
    i am reading this again. i can't seem to get enough of this chapter.... it's so kawaii!!!!!!
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