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Reviews for Contracting Love

By : XGirlRed
  • From ANON - gina on March 20, 2005
    well let me start by saying i'm sorry for reading your stroy first before reviewing but i couldn't stop reading!! absolutly great!!! i love it!!! i can not wait to read more.
    and i am so sorry to hear about your hand. i wish you a quick pain free recovery!!! take care and happy spring break!!! =)
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  • From ANON - JeSsI on March 20, 2005
    ok ashes i have only one thing to say to you and your lil story
    i love it!! i think its going great and i hope that your hand gets better
    so you can update soon!!!
    its getting good so keep up the awesome work!
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  • From ANON - NOBody on March 19, 2005
    wow this story is fantastic! i love it but you're rigth the end chap1 isn't a ending when you can say "yeah, i must read this story to the end. i'm so excited about what can happen next." you know? but the other chaps are. so now i want to read this story to the end. please continue this story, soon.
    bye bye
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 15, 2005
    i like it. thats about all you need to know. cant wait for your next chapter.. soon. i hope
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  • From ANON - Nessa on March 15, 2005
    Excellent, I love this Story, so Much, Keep writing~! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Fireminx on March 14, 2005
    This is too cute! And yet electrically sexy too! Awesome! Lesson 3....hmmmmm.
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  • From ANON - hanyou slave on March 14, 2005
    Chapter Four

    I enjoyed the lunch in the park. I think with Sango having been a taijiya, her being afraid of bugs doesn't quite fit...but, it is your story. Never forget that. I liked the way you paid attention to the act of caressing the pulse point on her neck and Miroku using his thumbs. I don't see that very often. For having done this overnight, you did a great job. Not saying it's perfect, but I'm impressed.

    Hanyou Slave
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  • From ANON - hanyou slave on March 14, 2005
    Chapter Four

    Oh, I just loved the 'BOB' reference. Where did you get that one?! The inner dialogue and the conversation with Kagome was very funny and cute. Writer's block, my ass!

    Hanyou Slave
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  • From ANON - hanyou slave on March 14, 2005
    Chapter Three

    That was a nice evening. Beginning with Sango's confession putting her in a vulnerable position leading Miroku to take charge of the situation was very interesting. You make him look like a monk with his lesson to Sango and a lecher at the same time. Very good!

    Hanyou Slave
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  • From ANON - hanyou slave on March 14, 2005
    Chapter Two

    Flowers, that was so sweet. The quote on the card was just as lovely as the flowers, if not more so. For future reference (I haven't read back through your reviews), where you have placed 'defiantly', 'definitely' is the word your looking for. Just trying to help since you're already doing a near perfect job.

    Hanyou Slave
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  • From ANON - hanyou slave on March 14, 2005
    Chapter One

    Typically, I like a story that has a lot of action and mystery. This story is straight forward, yet intriguing. Your spelling and grammar are to be commended. However, for me, the asterisks are a bit annoying. That's just me, though. I don't think you need the astericks, but I do love the comments and wouldn't take them out for the world. I'm in the process of writing a fic that has comments and am not bothering with separating them out. My beta hasn't complained that she doesn't understand where the comments are coming from.

    I really do like this story and I'm off to read the second chapter.

    Hanyou Slave
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  • From ANON - drake220 on March 14, 2005
    i absolutely love this fic! the characters are so adorable togather! you should be proud! and you liked my idea! hurray! i can't wait for that! miroku is the hand down king of sexy. but that scene with the bug was terrifying! ::shudder:: i LOATHE bugs. yuck yuck yuck. update soon!
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on March 14, 2005
    I like some....Miruko and Sango are my other favorite couple on Inuyasha....and you have brought them out beautiful.....I can so see and hear Miruko saying all this wonderful things to Sango....It's really good....I have to see the Wedding date....Makes me wish I could find a guy that wonderful....update soon I really want more....
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  • From ANON - inuficcrzy on March 14, 2005
    that was amazing!! i love this story!

    this is so well done, i can hardly believe it. i mean, wow.

    i can't wiat to see more!
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  • From ANON - Nicole on March 13, 2005
    I am actually feeling this story and I tend not to go from M/S pairings. Great writing, plot and character development thus far
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