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Reviews for Boldly Going (where many have gone before)

By : persiminous
  • From ANON - Cutie Pie Hentai *am I ever logged in?* on March 29, 2005
    Well, I wasn't to sure if this would sink or swim at the get go, but after a rather short prologue and waiting to see where you would go with things after the second chapter, I have to say that I am looking forward to more. You managed to pull off a good build up, and it looks like the ensuing chapters will be both humorous and filled with sexual tension- a great combination. You also did an even job of justifying Kagome's desire and forwardness. Too many authors just have them jump into bed, or have her be a sex kitten/ siren, right off the bat, totally throwing her out of character. You've done a believable job of creating motivation so that she doesn't seem "off." Also, good characterization on Inuyasha, Sango, and Miroku. Believable and true to form. I was especially impressed with your writing of Inuyasha and his slight romantic tendencies- he's not the overbearing, animalistic aggressor so many portray him as. Instead he seems more like the sexually innocent anime version of himself that has been molded by the era and his ostrasization from society. Keep up the good work. If the third chapter is any indication, you have the beginnings of what could be a well developed, interesting, and enjoyable fic.
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  • From ANON - turtlerad on March 29, 2005
    pretty tame, but from what I read in the prolog things will be heating up very soon, I can't wait
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  • From ANON - Alice M. on March 29, 2005
    Up-date, plzzzzzz! :I
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  • From ANON - deep serenity on March 29, 2005
    good job, i like the tone of the story with it humor it's meant to be silly and I like that you give Kagome a sex drive like a normal person would have S/M are so cute!
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  • From ANON - inu hanyou Nikkie on March 29, 2005
    very good story... I like it... Seducing the un-initiated hanyou... LOVE IT!!!!! Poor hanyou doesnt know what in Kamis name to do... Prephaps Kagome could maybe "accidentally" drop or leave behind in the open, well, partially hidden the sex-ed text book that is handed out in Japanese schools ( next to some ramen of course) .... Hint hint... giggles evilly... Also a quick language definition for you that you could use later on maybe.... Mokkori: the tent that is formed in clothing or bed sheets when a male is aroused ... snickers... Keep up the good work....
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  • From on March 29, 2005
    Well, if you are going to do the cliche plans first, the next should involve bathing.
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  • From Kittycat69 on March 29, 2005
    hi! aawww poor inu!!! I hope he gets some before he explodes lol!! i really love your story!!!! i hope u update soon, i can't wait to see what kagome does next for plan B!! bye bye!!
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  • From on March 27, 2005
    I agree that Inuyasha is never going to make the first move but 8 years! What was Kagome waiting for? Divine intervention?
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  • From ANON - turtlerad on March 25, 2005
    funny and hot, I want more
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  • From ANON - GV on March 25, 2005
    ohhhhh UPDATE!!!UPDATE THAT BITCH!
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  • From ANON - snowfall on March 25, 2005
    This is very very funny. However, the sentence structure or punctuation can be confusing at times. I am enjoying it though and look forward to your next chapter.

    Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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  • From JebusOfNazareth on March 25, 2005
    Yeah, Imma need you to come in on saturday.


    Or more chapters. Some sentence structure is awkward, but over all a solid story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 25, 2005
    ohhhhh i really like it!! update!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - fallenangel7583 on March 16, 2005
    wow...i have to agree with Kagome in wondering over inu's perference ...or lack there of. how long were they living together and just why did he build her a hut if he did not intend to populate it? the two times they had contact, in which you have stated, were in times of drunken stupors and in light of a grandfather's proposal? HMM. makes me think.... eep!!! talk about things that make you go bleh. ":-X great story so far though, you keyed my intrest on it. go Kagome...get what you want. LOL. keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Ka-chan23 on March 15, 2005
    Wow. This is great. I love it. It's so hilarious and you definitely have a way with words that is very hard to come by in the fanfiction universe, so kudos to you. I really love how you put a sort of humor into your story and even though your prologue was disappointingly short, I was really looking forward to more after I'd read it. First chapter was great as well and it gave me a sort of background before going onto the real story. You did a GREAT job so far and I'm very much looking forward to your next chapter. And that chapter will be coming out soon... right? *wink wink* I hope for my sake and your other readers' that writer's block finds a home in some other writer.
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