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Reviews for Forbidden Heart

By : sesshomarusgirl56
  • From ANON - Sareanna on June 16, 2005
    Please write more, this is interesting.
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  • From ANON - rachi on April 19, 2005
    no time to write a long review, so just, good job and please continue veryveryveryvery soon, k??? K!! tank u n ja ne!! ^-^
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  • From ANON - Ookami K. on April 18, 2005
    Hey Sesshomarusgirl, I love the story I even looked for chapter 3 on mediaminor.org but no luck thus far. So do you think you could e-mail it to me? I just have to know what happens it sucks not knowing beforehand love the angst.... Keep up the good work....
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on April 02, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From on April 02, 2005
    Wow. Great story, can't wait to read the next chapter. InuYasha really is a baka. Oh well, Update soon please!
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  • From ANON - mizu inu on April 01, 2005
    WOW!! Your story is very good! I loved reading it...so cool! I have to say that your writing is very thorough, not at all sporadic or incohesive, really very complex!
    I feel so bad for Kagome in this story, Sesshomaru had no right to do that to her after all she did was help him...but you made her character very strong, (like you said in the chapter...), and that helped the reader out believing more of the plot, (just so you know...yeah).
    Sesshomaru is more evil in this story than he usually is, I guess, but this vindictive character you gave him fits too...*thinks about cruel Sesshy*...was that immature? Hmm...oh well...
    GAAH!! Curse typos...the bane on all stories...they are such a pain....
    Anyway, this story is WONDERFULLY written and I hope you update soon....oh and Spring Break is one of the five greatest things in life. Besides Winter Break, Summer Break, weekends, and Christmas Break. ^-^
    Thanks for writing, and for listening to my inane review...bai bai!!
    (PS: It is spelled "Tetsusaiga", in case you were wondering...and Sango's boomerang is called Boomerang Blade in the anime I think...not too sure, but the way you did it was fine.)
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  • From ANON - Feminafures on April 01, 2005
    I like it so far, but ch. 3 is still missing... You can probably just post the real chapter 3 instead of the A/N you have in it's place and delete the A/n that holds the fifth chapter. (In both cases, the chapter didn't show up!)
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  • From ANON - andross on April 01, 2005
    i stil cant see numbers 3 and 5 yet
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  • From ANON - Katzztar on April 01, 2005
    Ahh There is one slight problem. You have Seshoumaru thinking that her scent is nauseating then wanting revish her.... Nauseating- feeling sick, if a person finds a scent nauseating, they find the scen sickening.

    So was Seshoumaru sickened by by her scent? Or hid he find her scent inticing or intoxicating even?
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  • From ANON - LadyTigresa on April 01, 2005
    I love this so far! Poor Kagome though, having to be forced into being his mate. Hopefully in the end it will be better. Please update soon!!! ^-^
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  • From ANON - BlueBayou on March 15, 2005
    this story is great...keep up the good work...update soon ^.^
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