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Reviews for THERE IS SOMETHING IN THE WATER

By : JADEPRINCESS
  • From ANON - Kanaka on March 29, 2005
    Absolutly loved your story. It captured alot of the character's true nature and even some raw emotion (especially during the night scene).

    Hopefully there will be another chapter, cant wait to see it.
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  • From ANON - Talia on March 27, 2005
    well.... let me say that you have an interesting imagination. but the story does feel very rushed. I realize that the sex scene was the main forcus but for some people setting it up can have a huge effect on the scene it's self. If you had taken the time to flush it put a little better It would add to your story ten fold. Another thing is that some of the dialoging seemed to not quite fit. I may be analizing too much but with sango's tie to her father and how deeply it wounded her when he died, she probalbly would shout "daddy" in any sexual situation. Nor do I think Inuyasha would call any woman a tramp, concidering he was raised but his mother and one can tell he holds woman in high respect. (i do understand that their inhabitions were substanderd.) . Those were the only things I found note worthy. Keep writing. You're good

    Talia
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  • From linkthe2nd on March 26, 2005
    ok, first things first.^ up there, Kikyo Sagara or something? Just why are you upset to the point to try and stop someone from writing? I can just guess. You don't like the Inuyasha/Sango pairing or something. You think he should be with Kikyo or Kagome. In that case, don't read the fic, and go back to the never ending chain of cannon pairings. Because the more creative minds like alternatives; not just being confined to cannon.
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  • From ANON - Kikyo Sagara on March 26, 2005
    I think anyone who likes this is depraved and sick and needs mental help. This is a disgrace to the show and you are an awful writer... do us all a favor to people like me who post the TRUTH.. and dont write again..
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  • From ANON - kanaka on March 19, 2005
    This story is fn awesome, keep up the good work and cant wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Lemonhunter on March 17, 2005
    I think you should make the Kouga and Sango a long fic because there aren't any long ones of them out there. I think you would be the first person to write one. I think you should keep the sence of the show don't make it modern day.
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  • From ANON - jessica on March 17, 2005
    you should add more to this it was Dam good
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  • From ANON - i Naraku on March 16, 2005
    i say you need to add a new chapter and add me to the mix Inu/Sango/Naraku or Inu/Sango/Sess will do to.
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  • From ANON - Fisher on March 16, 2005
    I want more
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  • From LadyKurama86 on March 16, 2005
    I hate apples. I Like strawberries better...anyway, you're the first to answer to my challenge, so i can't make a decision yet.
    Thanks for answering...
    DC
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  • From ANON - Saiyan God on March 16, 2005
    That was a sweet fic. You should have trown in the servant as well. This is cool, continue it if you can. long live Inu/San^_^
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  • From ANON - Queen123 on March 15, 2005
    that was hot steamy and i want more!
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  • From ANON - Dude82 on March 15, 2005
    Sweet!
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  • From ANON - christal-chan on March 15, 2005
    i though this was the best. i loved it. make more lemons with sango in it. maybe you could make one with kouga and sango. even if you don't just make more with sango, because there aren't really enough of them out there.
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  • From ANON - SchizoxPsycho on March 15, 2005
    hmmm...
    all I can say right now is 'interesting.'
    Um yeah...
    Its niiice....
    ok yeah time for me to go...
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