Click Here!

Reviews for Defining Torture

By : CoffeeGyrl
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 03, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
    Report Review

  • From ANON - No Name Eva Fan on December 17, 2006
    nothing wrong with a litle Striaght shota now and then is there? i'd like to see this pairing more often.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - poisonangel7 on November 23, 2005
    Hey you, long time no see. My fault, of course. I have let new obsessions and pasttimes drive me away from the poor fics I started and have yet to bring to their chilling conclusions (whatever those might be.) And, perhaps more regretably, I am way behind in reading the updates to the stories that I found so interesting and well-written in my fanfic days of yore. But I am very glad I took a trip down memory lane and discovered you had written another chapter as I hoped you would!

    You are a fantastic writer with truly original ideas and I certainly hope you continue to explore this talent! I still have goals of one day updating the poor fics I left hanging. Unfortunately, that may take place first on the fics I have on my other penname. But with readers like you wanting more, how can I resist? Still, it is a slow process for me especially since it means doing a lot of rereading at this point.

    I hope you don't mind that this review served a dual function as a response to your review and to your chapter. I certainly didn't mean to overshadow your update. I thought it was well done, and I look forward to more!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Shard on October 21, 2005
    Very nice, I loved reading this story again and I really hope that the editing work will lead to even more of your great story.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Suryallee on October 11, 2005
    You see, I came and read and I must say you write very good!
    If you really want to beta it for me then I think it could work.
    If you want I can send you the chapters tomorow, just tell me.
    Suryallee
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Rob on September 14, 2005
    I love it! Please update soon.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - goddessango on September 11, 2005
    Great Chapter love how in her dream kagura was a goddess and kohaku was the offering loved how she tortured and dominated him i'd love to be him keep it up
    Report Review

  • From ANON - sirhcnotlih on September 11, 2005
    Please tell me you will keep going on this fic. I love Kagura soooo much. I put myself in Kohaku's place in that fic. That was fun the way she tortured him in her dreams. Maybe she can make it a reality.

    A 5 out of 5.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - monecque on July 30, 2005
    that was a very good story short sweet and to the point.
    that reminded me of a song called mrs. robinson. you may
    be too young to know what i am talking about but you did a
    wonderful job.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - inuficcrzy on March 25, 2005
    wow. i never would have thougth of this pairing. this was really different and cool.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Shard on March 24, 2005
    Great story , I loved it and I hope you continue to a chapter 4 , maybe Kagura's payback or something

    Report Review

  • From ANON - Kitara on March 23, 2005
    :3 i loved the story!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - fushigiyugifan on March 23, 2005
    wow really good. please update soon. i loved it
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Rob on March 22, 2005
    I love it! Please continue this great story.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - whirleeq on March 18, 2005
    Damn girl.. that was really good... and I have to give you props for using the most, er, creative line I've seen in hentai fanfics yet = "He ran just the very tip of his tongue from her neck across her breast leaving a trail, like a hentai snail across a marble maiden in a garden"

    LOL

    Betcha you could sell those snails on ebay for a hefty profit! :)

    Seriously - great job. You should do a sequel! (I'm going to channel my inner Randy Jackson for a moment): That was da BOMB!
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!