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Reviews for Agent Under Fire

By : BakaInuGirl
  • From fallenangel7583 on March 25, 2005
    ::hands flailing about in the air:: i do! i do!!!! hehe. great story, wonderful twist on using Juuromaru and Kageroumaru...asses the both of em, but never the less intresting foes to pick from. ::sigh:: i love this story. it's so....fresh. never read anything like it and i love the formalities...cause you know they are all but ripping inside at that. hehe...inuyasha was gonna make sure she stayed at the office, wasn't he. uhh..huh.....that could really lead to some 'unprofessional' positions in the work place. ::covers mouth and widens eyes: oh no! heheheheheh. great story, really really wonderful plot and you have me on the edge of my chair. intresting idea of the ink place wiht all of the artificts. at first i was figuring the old dude to be totosai but he was to sane to be him. LOL. great story and i really can't wiat to see what you do next. woot woot for inu and kag. (hehe...now inu can 'see' all of the disadvantages having only one good hand can do him....ain't karma a bitch? LOL..so qouteith the lord of the western lands). hehehehhe.
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  • From ANON - fallenangel7583 on March 23, 2005
    wow...my mouth dropped when i read that it was Rin that was kidnapped. that is SOO not coool...or good...or both. poor girl, i swear if naraku hurts her...ugh, i'll jump through this freaking screen and strangle him!!!! GRR! i'm trying to peice this together slowly, but i'm hitting dead ends as well. So, kikyo was the first victem? nicely done. now, if we follow along with ideas of teh show, then Kagura is the missing link betwen the group but she has little to do with the other victims, or does she? ::strokes chin:: and Naraku must have known the relation between InuYasah and Sesshoumaru...so now if he kills Rin and InuYasha captures him, the baka expects for inuyasha to let him go so Kagome is safe...is he sick???? LOL. GREAT story so far, you have me on the edge of my seat. now i'm sure i was reading into this to much but catching It’s an old sentiment from the demon ye know as Inuyasha with the demon statement, i am slowly wondering. are they truely human, or covering for teh demon side? if so, jakens comment makes sense. hmm.. GREAT FREAKIN STORY!!! keep it up!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 23, 2005
    awesome chap!!! Update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Morgan on March 23, 2005
    Okay, I've read your entire story so far and I must say it's brilliant. I love it! It's unique but in a good way, ya know? Please update soon. If you don't I'll be forced to take drastic measures. *Laughs evilly*
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  • From ANON - MIROKU0716 on March 23, 2005
    DUDE JUST READ 7 & 8!!!

    it gets better and better.

    DONT LEAVE ME HAnGING!!
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  • From ANON - ? on March 23, 2005
    what happened to all the reviews?
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  • From ANON - Miroku0716 on March 23, 2005
    IM FREAKING LOVING THIS STORY< THE CASE,THE ROMANCE, ITS AWSOME!!!
    dont stop now!!!!!

    I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!
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  • From fallenangel7583 on March 23, 2005
    wow...great freakin story. i'm up till 4am, FYI, reading it. LOL. i love it...never really read anything like it honestly. i love how some people can successfully transpose these wonderful characters into alternate situations...much like how you have...and make it work. GREAT JOB!!! i can't wait to see what 'spider guy' ::cough::naraku ::cough:: is plotting and man, i normally don't go for the sweet jack ass inuyasha's but yours has swept me off my feet. great job, keep it up!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Miroku0716 on March 23, 2005
    I just read ch1 and im liking it.
    it has a sense of reality......pretty good so far.
    im really enjoying it
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  • From ANON - drake220 on March 21, 2005
    i love it when authors love their chapters! good for you! and no, i am not being sarcastic. i liked this fic. its cute!
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  • From ANON - Deep Serenity on March 21, 2005
    Ohhhh chap 2-love how you have them acting mature, hate when people take them in a AU and no matter what the situation haveing them acting like their back in the fedual era. I like the personalities! It fits the story and plot
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  • From amberlinat on March 21, 2005
    VERY well written for a first fic.

    Personally I love it!, I know the cop thing has been done(never read one, but have seen them) but yours started out very promising. THe training scene had me rolling.

    only read 1st chap, but I hope you have INU with a brain and not too big of and ass in the story!
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  • From ANON - Catt on March 20, 2005
    Hey!!! your the girl from mediaminer!!! I SO LOVE YOUR STORY!!! ALL OF THEM!!! THEY TOTALLY ROCK!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 20, 2005
    this story rocks... update soon!!! LoL
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