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By : sauceyjill
  • From ANON - inuyashafanfreak on April 17, 2005
    This is a great story. Please Please Please Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Yana on April 15, 2005
    hahahahahahaha poor InuYasha
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  • From ANON - nokomarie the Snake on April 15, 2005
    Oh, goody, do continue.
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  • From ANON - smurfsicle on April 14, 2005
    Wow.. keep going i really like this story so far! *applause*
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  • From ANON - hi\'s on April 12, 2005
    hi this is good you better not abandon your fic i cant waite to read what happends to kagome and inuyasha
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  • From ANON - K.M. on March 26, 2005
    PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^date SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really really really really really really really really really really want 2 c wut happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Plus I like this story so far!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Nokomarie the Snake on March 24, 2005
    Be strong, resist cliche. Inuyasha loves junk food in general, not just ramen. Also, you seemed to have him clearly just outside the hut in the first few sentences and, suddenly, in the clearing by the hanging corpse. Which would've dropped with a messy thud. Not just subsided with a stink. Corpses being the unwieldy things that they are.

    And, please, no gratuitous screaming. Inuyasha is a clueless jerk; not a squalling idiot. It's bad enough finding a cluless jerk attractive, but a squalling idiot? Depends on whether or not you intend doing satire rather than romance. You've got such a promising beginning and a perfectly good name for your fic. Don't fall apart now when you're, what, a thousand words in?

    If I didn't like it I wouldn't be poking you.
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  • From ANON - Phalon22 on March 24, 2005
    Oh wow, uh oh. Poor Inuyasha, Poor Kagome. I hope he shows up next chapter being the big hero. Nice job about the Raman! Update Soon!
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  • From ANON - KimiAnnn1RebAnn1 on March 24, 2005
    Hey thiis is good please continue soon would like to see how one of your Inu/Kag lemons are.
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  • From ANON - nancey on March 24, 2005
    Good story thus far, I think you should try to add more to each chapter. I think that I would lose intrest without more in each chapter. I'm not saying longer chapter. Just make sure that everything you wanted to say in each chapter is said.
    my son just got hurt i'll finish review later sorrry
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  • From fallenangel7583 on March 23, 2005
    oi...this can't be going anywhere that isn't leading to trouble! kagome's somehwere in the middle of the forest alone in a small hut...probalby in the company of jewel shards without her bow and Inuyasha is wounded. not good at all. you have my intrest, i'm awaiting your next installment. good job!!
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  • From ANON - drake220 on March 21, 2005
    ah yes, the glorious blanket fic! i like how you are putting up a valient effort to not be cliche and jump into the sack (how's that for a pun? get it? blanket? sack? lord, i need more sleep)- update soon!
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  • From ANON - Nokomarie the Snake on March 21, 2005
    O.K. I'm reviewing, you keep writing. Seems reasonable to me.
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  • From ANON - Meres on March 21, 2005
    Shaping up pretty well so far.

    ( . . . I, too, have a rather unwholesome liking for blanket scenarios. I don't know why. Let's not investigate to closely. Shh.)
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  • From ANON - nokomarie the Snake on March 21, 2005
    I have a secret fondness for blanket fics. Shhh, don't tell.
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