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Reviews for Evolution

By : Macx
  • From ANON - Flash on March 21, 2005
    ^__^ Glad to see you've continued this series. I thought for a while that reassembled was going to be the end, so I was very excited to see another sequel. Since I've never gotten around to reviewing you ( and man am I feeling guilty about that) I thought I'd make up for my lurking now. *ahem* What I love about your series:
    1) It's original: Most of the themes, plot twists, ideas, pairings even (I blinked for 5 minutes straight at the first hints of Sango/Sesshomaru, I don't think I've ever seen that one before, and I'm surprised to find that I rather like it ^.^) are not commonly used, unlike a great deal of the stories on this site
    2)It's believable: I don't think I've come across even one plot hole, and even some of my favourite authors have those occasionaly. While the characters have in some cases changed, you've managed to make that believable as well (The first OOC Inuyasha that hasn't made me cringe in quite some time, and I am *extremely* impressed with how you write Sesshomaru)
    3)Good grammar, spelling and vocabulary: O.o are you quite certain English isn't your first language? I wouldn't have been able to tell if you hadn't mentioned it in you author's note. It's obvious you take care to make sure your writing is good, unlike many of the authors in the Inuyasha category. While I occasionally find a wording that is a bit odd, I never need to puzzle over a sentence to understand your meaning, (Unless of course you meant to do that by way of plot twist ^.^) and despite the urgings of your reviewers you take your time in updating.
    4) I just love the way you write!

    Thank you for your amazing stories!
    Eagerly awaiting your next update,
    Flash
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  • From ANON - Nightclaw42 on March 21, 2005
    Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Your back. I was hoping that you would continue. I had been to your website and saw that you had a fic in the making. I could hardly contain my excitment. Update as soon as possible. ;)
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  • From ANON - HMPrune on March 21, 2005
    I'm glad that you are back! I've been anxiously awaiting the next staage in the story - it looks great so far...
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