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Reviews for An Entirely Different Kind of Cheating

By : SchrodingersCat
  • From fallenangel7583 on March 27, 2005
    yay for good chapters!!! yay!!! so...fluffy has yet again impaled inuyasha? hehehehe....that alwasy seems to happen to the poor kid....(i did it too, LOL). really good chapter, i can understand where your road blocks are coming up. i love the idea of daddy getting involved...hehehehe....that will definatly prove intresing. (how would he feel about inu sleeping with a 'theif'?) or for that matter, Kago returning home to find daddy dearest waiting for her and having to return to inu or naraku finds his way to the casino? eep!!! (Naraku versus inu no tashio...royal rumble!!! woot!!!) hehe. great chappy and keep it up, the story is amazing!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Al on March 27, 2005
    best fing story ever
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  • From ANON - Chokoreto on March 27, 2005
    and here i thought inu/sessh dad died.....LOL hahahas and its like no wonder my friend called me a crackhead. ANYWAYS....FINALLY the girls get to party without the guys! hahahahahs i really like the humor when inu and miroku played go fish and watch black beauty at the same time...i thought they were going to play poker and bet using money and shiet hahahas anyways UPDATE =D
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  • From ANON - sexykagome03 on March 27, 2005
    HOT DAMN, I GOT IT!! ^___^ *does dance* Wheeeee!!! hey, so do I get pocky for getting Naraku right??? HUH!!!
    DO I!!! O___O;

    he he....anyways, GREAT STORY AND I LOVE THE SPEED OF YOUR UPDATES!

    Keep rockin' the world! ^_~

    sexykagome03

    Oh, and could I ask a little favor? Maybe you could read my story one day and tell me what you think of my lemons? Thank you so much!
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  • From ANON - Bunnie on March 27, 2005
    Aw Man! You killed the Wolf!!!! That was DAMN gutsy!!!! I almost cried. Almost. Well I was wrong. It wasn't Hojo. Damn. No virtual pocky for me. Shoot. NEWayz great chapter! Keep up the great work and update soon! Pretty please?
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  • From DarkAngelYame on March 27, 2005
    And yet again, two other well-written chapters (5 AND 6). I love it! Awesome plot-twisters by the way. So what else is up your sleeve? I'm anxiously anticipating more of this GREAT story. So until then,
    Claire ^_~
    Keep up all the amazing work!!!!
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  • From ANON - Chokoreto on March 26, 2005
    Yey~! another chapter well done..im glad kouga...got shot LOL is he really dead? or like inuyasha just shot him and leave him out to suffer? though im glad kagome purified him shitless...hahahas anyways please update =D
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  • From ANON - thebigguy69 on March 26, 2005
    Damn!! Two great chaps. Nice lemon, and a HOLY SHIT!!! ending in chapter 6. So naraku was Kagome's dad huh? and he tried to rape her? what a sick fuck. ant wait for the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Hillary on March 26, 2005
    THAT SICK DISCUSTING PERVERT HO-HOW-HOW COULD THAT BE AN EXCUSE TO DO SOME THING LIKE THAT!!! NARAKU!!!!!! UHRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!1 HOW I DESPISE THAT MAN-NO-DIRT! HE'S NOT EVEN WORTHY TO BE THE DIRT BETWEEN MY TOES!!!!! AND KAGOME SHE STILL SEEMS TO THINK THE WORLD OF HIM!?!?!?!? HURMPH! P.S. I STILL WANT A KAG/INU/? 3SUM
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  • From fallenangel7583 on March 26, 2005
    .... ..... ... . uhhh.....hmm. i'm kind of sitting here with a 'crap' and yet a rather 'duh, how didn't i see that' look on my face. plot twists, ey? i say the evil plot bunnies had their way with you!! bad, bad plot bunnies. well, from the first sentence, “You have failed.” i knew it was fluffykins who set yash up...don't ask me how, i just knew it. shaking my head, i read that thing going, oh sesshiles, what did you do? not cool...not cool at all. cause that means that sesshiles has to die adn that is...uhh....not cool? i love fluffles!!! ::silently sobbing:: damn baka...damnit, he needs a subjigation spell!!!! down boy ::see Sesshoumaru fall to floor:: bastard. GRRR. as for throwing Naraku in...i was very.........intrigued....to see that you made him her father. not a comon thing done (cause he's naraku and that's...weird....) but i see the whole brain tumor thing flying very well....see Narkau in a corner talking to himself like golumn out of Lord of the Rings. eep!!! so....her father nearly raped her and Miroku killed him to protect her? deep....very fuckin deep. good for Roku...just....ouch. specially since while InuYasha would never rape Kagome, there is still the sliver of comparison between his taking lives and that bastard. nothing that can bode well...specially if Kag finds Kouga's blood on Inus hands, metaphorically speaking, mind you. ouch....just....ouch. not gonna pretty in angst town, that's for sure. i love that inu asked Kag to come stay with him but honeslty, how SAFE can that be, specially with sneaky bastards like fluffykins lurking around. hmmm......... anywho's, great plot twists, love them all. intrested to see where you run with this and just how Kagome deals with all of it. poor kid. great story, as alwasy!!!
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  • From ANON - Drew on March 26, 2005
    Whoa, totally blindsided! I didnt even think a little bit that perhaps Kouga was hired. But Im almost completely positive I can guess by who... Hehe. It wouldnt happen to be Inuyasha's older brother, would it? That is my guess. Yes. Im pretty positive that it is. [ Watch me be wrong and it wont be ]. Another very nice chapter. So sad to see Kouga go but in all actuality I feel very little to no remorse. He just made a good bad guy. Although you seem to have many more in this story [ or at least one more whos still alive ] so its all very good. Very very good. Also [ although it wasnt as suprising ] nice ending. I was close with the secret!! Although, I thought he was still alive and was going to resurface later in the story, but I was close. Im suprised that not many people guessed that option. Cant wait for the next chapter!

    - Drew
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  • From ANON - Hillary (Biganimefan1) on March 25, 2005
    wow so its like that. uh-huh........... i get it!!!!!! so far i really enjoy it except with the whole koga thing.
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  • From fallenangel7583 on March 25, 2005
    don't worry about cliche, just go with what fits your story. this fit the story wonderfully. great lemon, BTW, and i understand what you mean about wondering what to put and what not to put in the scene, i had the same issue on the first one i wrote. it gets easeir. LOL. wonderful chapter, i love how Kouga set up the whole shabang just to get a go at Kagome, which doesn't make TOO much sense now, but i'm sure it will. (meaning he's some 'hot' actor that chicks flaunt their bodies at, why kagome? then agian...look to the show. LOL. baka Kouga...baka baka baka). i can't wati to see where you go with that one. as for the demon yasha boy, i love it. sexy, loving, and was in semi control of himself. i haven't toyed wiht that thought yet, making him wall out but you did a GREAT job with it. i can only guess how angry Miroku is going to be about that whole scene. wonderful chapter and update. you threw me with the term 'daddy' and have me wondering. hmm...the super senses are going haywire. lol. i'll figure it out, give me another chapter. LOL. GREAT story, keep it up!!!
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  • From ANON - xXlovablekdXx on March 25, 2005
    yay! you updated. that was fast, most authors don't bother to update till like 6 months later. well good chapter, hope you update soon, again.
    keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Drew on March 25, 2005
    Wow. Okay. Me again. And just incase you are like me and were thinking I thought your lemon was funny, no. I was talking about how it was funny that I was thinking about what was going to happen when she was supposed to leave and about how the very next part of your story cleared that up. Although, not to say you were thinking that. I have to admit at times that I can be quite the stupid girl (hah) and I probably would have though that. -smacks self- Anyways Im going to stop talking now. Heh.

    - Drew
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