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Reviews for An Entirely Different Kind of Cheating

By : SchrodingersCat
  • From ANON - Drew on March 25, 2005
    Yeah lemon! Hah. And an intensly good one at that. I cant believe that was your first time writing one. -applaudes-. Good job. It was funny. After I finished reading the lemon I was like 'whats going to happen when shes supposed to go home! She cant go home!' and then the very next part was him asking her to stay and not go home. I was like hah. Yes. Well anyways. Yet another very nice chapter, Im excited for the next one. I love how their so long and how you update every day. Its awesome. Anyways. Yes. Im very curious to know what Kagome and Miroku are talking about. Something to do with her dad? Was he by any chance Naraku? Considering hes not in the story yet and all (if you're even planning on having him in there at all that is). Tell us soon! o.0

    - Drew
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  • From ANON - 817 on March 25, 2005
    if sesshy's gonna be in tha story, will rin ? i hope she is !
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  • From ANON - xXlovablekdXx on March 25, 2005
    you, have to, have to update soon!
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  • From fallenangel7583 on March 25, 2005
    excellent chappy. very thrilled with how that turned out. ohhh...baka Kagome....in front of all of those guys...epp? ins't the cut throat business under teh rules of 'if you show weakness, they kill you?' can't be good. no plots agianst yasha boy, rigth? ::pleading eyes:: heheheh...kidding, mind you. not a bad alley to travel. as for the hotel thing, LOL, i'm sorry...i must have been rather ambigious with my review. i know the casino is below the hotel (much like alantic city and vegas, both of which are AMAZING) but i meant when she returns home home, back to her residence, what happens? is this all in tokyo, where she lives normally or are they visiting foreign places, like Kyushu or Beppu city? (sorry, places i love). GREAT story and as for Sango being the comic releif, i thought it was great that the bartender came after her. at first, i swore up and down you were speaking about Koharu but being that she isn't a demon, i was a bit lost as to who it was but still...wonderful. loved it. and fluffykins...well...he's always been a god of few words so...hey....it works well. great story, keep it up!!!!
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  • From ANON - Bunnie on March 25, 2005
    Great Chapter! I really thought that Kagome and Inuyasha were going to break up! Not like they're really together...like she said, they don't really know each other that much. But it was still great! Keep up the wonderful work and update soon!!! Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Drew on March 24, 2005
    Wow. Well, I decided to review because your story is SO FANTASTICALLY AWESOME. And I only review my favorite stories so there. That can tell you something about yours. That I think its awesome. And its one of my favorites. Yes. And I actually really liked the way you used Sango as some comic relief for this chapter. It was nice, to not have all angst. I like angst of course, but only in small does. Or when Im sure the end result will turn out... well, citrusy.

    "One track mind, I swear"

    Hah. Im glad you have a one track mind. That makes the both of us, although the parts of the story that arent focusing on citrus are also very interesting.

    -Drew
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  • From DarkAngelYame on March 24, 2005
    haha...Sango was afraid of a metal-bat swinging, sixteen-year-old Koharu...but then again I'd be freaked out too. I've said this once, I'll say it again: I absolutely LOVE this fic (and I'll keep saying it too! ^_^)Sooooo...what did Kagome see to make her gasp like that? Well...I suppose I'll find out next chapter, no? Until then: keep up the amazing work!!!!
    Claire (^-^)
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  • From ANON - GreenRider on March 24, 2005
    Something anout Hojo? I LOVE your story it's one of my very favorites!!*~ ^_^
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  • From ANON - keke on March 24, 2005
    thanks... um... ok Damn it I cant think of anything to say!!! well thanks again
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  • From ANON - Bunnie on March 24, 2005
    I think that Kagome was betrayed by an old boyfriend...maybe hojo? I don't know. Well I really like this story and I think that Inuyasha is really HOT in this one. Being the owner of a casino and all mob like...kind of......keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Chokoreto on March 24, 2005
    wow...hahas im actually blown away by this chapter..once again its was nice and smooth =D hahahas love the conflict between inuyasha and miroku...though sango needs to get more into action...hahas yeahh thats just my advice..please update!
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  • From ANON - RAchel77 on March 23, 2005
    Great story, keep the reviews comin', and i'm guessing that kagome was involved with another character either an OC or possibly Naraku i'm thinking and miroku tried to warn her and keep her away from him but she didn't listen and something really bad happened that my brain has yet to decide on. But anywho UPDATE!!!!!!!!!! Please! ^__^
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  • From ANON - andross on March 23, 2005
    ill guess!! virtual pocky is tasty. ok i think kagome was NOT raped because inuyasha could tell if she was still a virgin, so i think that she had a boyfriend that cheated on her and left her for this woman. most likely hojou? or maybe naraku?
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  • From ANON - Thebigguy69 on March 23, 2005
    I KNOW! I KNOW! NARAKU!!!! That sumbitch is the one who hurt her in some way. not rape, shes still a virgin oooohh mabye kikyo, nope she uses that as a fake name. Did he cheat on her or beat her up? Yea naraku is the type of coward that would hit a girl. Bastard.
    Pocky please.. uhn no POCKY NOW!!! Ahh thank you.
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  • From fallenangel7583 on March 23, 2005
    WOOT for pocky!! and yay for another great chapter. excellent character digressions. i love how protective miroku is, no matter how annoying it may be. just grabbing her out of the cafe was ballsy and earned him so giant 'you go boy' points. yay!!! hmm...so, still dishing out the pocky, huh? i stick by my guess that some asshole tried to force himself on her and was probably stopped to close to acheiving his goal (since she is still a virgin). but i'll throw in the clause that maybe it was one of Miroku's friends? hmm...anyway, i'm hooked and really really realllllllly loving the story and inuyasha. (i have a forboding feeling that Miroku needs to stop worrying about inuyasha and START worrying about kouga). so...here's my next question. where is this hotle and how far is it from where they live? and what is poor Kagome goign to do when the week is over? (become a card dealer, thats what, LOL). GREAT story!!!!
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