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Reviews for An Entirely Different Kind of Cheating

By : SchrodingersCat
  • From ANON - trina on March 23, 2005
    i love it. there is no other way to put it. i love it. i love it. chapter 3 was so good . but i still have no clue really on what happen in their past. cant wait for your next chapter. did i tell you how much i love the fact that you update often.bye bye. love the story.
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  • From ANON - sexykagome03 on March 23, 2005
    I bet it was Naraku! o__o

    Ha ha. GREAT STORY! PLZ continue!!

    ~sexykagome03
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  • From DarkAngelYame on March 23, 2005
    Heyy,
    Well...what can I say? This fic of yours is deviously amazing! I love it's unique-ness...especially the gambling/casino/romance factors. I hope to see another chapter soon. Keep up the great work! So until next,
    Claire ^_^
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  • From ANON - Hillary ( Biganimefan1) on March 23, 2005
    I think that kag may have been almost raped or killed by someone she dated/trusted. But Miro is soooooooooooo overprotective!!!!! And I think you are doing such a great job with this fic and wanted to know if you can make this a threesome with kag/inu/-koga-sessy-or with another anime characterlike yoko- and/or kurama!!!!
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  • From ANON - keke on March 23, 2005
    DAMNIT!!!! write the next chapter PLEASE??? I cant wait any longer...
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  • From fallenangel7583 on March 23, 2005
    o_O. i honestly don't know what this story has done for me but somewhere around 2pm i realized that i forgot to include in my review yesterady how absolutely much i LOVE your inuyasha. now, i love all of the bad boy highschool yash stories (hell, i wrote one) but this blows EVERYTHING out of the freaking water!!! i mean, absoulty freaking across the world goodbye out of the water!!! but your yash is to die for...i'm serious. to-freakin-die for. ::giant sigh:: damn kagome. ANYWAY....great addition to the story, i'm sooo happy that you're continuing it. i was escastic when i saw that you updated. woot!! hmm....virtual pokey. (pokey is really the best thing on this planet). let me think...i don't think that Kagome is really using Yash against Miroku (she doesnt' know of his issues with Yash yet) but i'm willing to bet that either 1) miroku has chased off past boyfreinds on Kagome or 2) he is overbearing becasue of a prior circumstance that he prevented from happening, posibly? hmm....

    anyway, yes, i am no longer confused by the first chapter and was glad to see they didnt' get down and nasty cause that makes this nice and sweet to watch unfold. i love it,i love it, i need more of it!!! keep it going, this fic is perfect!!!!
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  • From ANON - Keik0 on March 22, 2005
    that was so hot smut
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  • From ANON - crazy-ezcaped fan on March 22, 2005
    such passion & descriptions leaving me in inuyasha's state lolz jk
    honestly, (probably cz im a mix of traditional/wild) that...
    they moved a little too fast ...inuyasha's character as a demon SHOULD make
    him suspicious of women EVEN though she offers him such comfort (emotionally).
    my wild/kinky side tells me that shouldn't they just get over the attraction & conquering state & move on??
    sorry, my mind runs away with me but ur story is a really REALLY hotttt
    i don't bother writing to much authors BUT since ur so exceptional i decided to let u hear me "voice."
    in conclusion...plz UPDATE SOON ASAP ;P
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  • From ANON - Chokoreto on March 22, 2005
    this is the BEST story i've ever read...love the way your first chapter came up nice and long...the ending was good too! xD update onegai shimasu
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  • From ANON - scerpixy5 on March 22, 2005
    I really like this story. I have not read one with this type of story line before. I like the fact that it was a long chapter and it contained detail. Please uodate this story I really enjoyed reading it.
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  • From ANON - T on March 22, 2005
    I liked it. The story is very interesting and I can't wait to read more. It was a little odd that Kagome would just fall into Inuyasha's arms like she did. I kept thinking she would do somthing to distract him so she could leave. I am hoping that her behavior will be explained more later. Great job!
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  • From ANON - ME... on March 22, 2005
    Great story so far! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - VeryViciousVixen on March 22, 2005
    Hey this is a very good beginning to the story. I can't wait to see how Inuyasha's going to keep his professional attitude now that he had slept with a cheater. Will he let her get away with it? Will he keep her around since she's his now? Please write more soon!
    I'm surprised that you described Kagome as "slutty" in your author's note while she was described as "innocent" through the chapter. I can't wait for the background information next chapter :)
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  • From ANON - Mija on March 22, 2005
    hey I like it...lol..its something new and diffrent and I cant wait to see where this goes, if Kagome is true to her nature thus far, she wont stop cheating and Inu will have to do something wont he??/ hehe cant wait to find out, hope to read more till then be well safe and happy, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From fallenangel7583 on March 22, 2005
    okay, well...review, ey? here we go. GREAT story. i love the abundant amount of description and dialogue contained. you have such a great frame set up for your characters that it is amazing, there should be no reaason in the world as to why you would not continue this story. you really worked your characters well in this! i love how you have InuYasha as the 'good' son, which is a fresh idea that i have NEVER seen done. i love your Kagome, she's also a fresh character, away from the facade of 'pity me, i'm innocnet'. i love how you have her play the role of it but then wham, she isn't. that's GREAT!!! also your dialogue with Miroku and yash at the bar, excellently done!! i was laughing histerically. you really really have a great peice of writing here and i really hope you chose to continue with it.

    if you want some constructive critisicm, my only words to instill would be towards the end. i was reading and reading, thinking to myself, holy shit, she's really up shit's creek, and nearly died when he said she cut her cousins ears off. that was AMAZING, but then i felt the last few paragraphs, where the climax of the story (for kag and inu lovers) led to was suddenly...cut short maybe? i was really confused as to what EXACTLY happened between them. maybe its the hentai in me, or the website and teh expectations, but i was really thrown there. the way i read it written in context was that they simply made out but the 'afterglow' was that of a sexual relationship, teh way she suddenly found herself on his level and able to talk to such a man as he. if they did or dind't have sex is basically where you lost me. you might want to consider either revising that or maybe going into a slight definition at the start of the next chapter as to what exactly happened.

    anyways, as i said before, great story!!!! i love it!!! keep it up!!!!
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