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By : ChocolateHentai
  • From ANON - I\'mLuvinit on May 29, 2005
    OmG! Update soon I wanna know whats gonna happen next. How is this going to end? Is Sango gonna end up with anyone or is she gonna be alone? Please let her end up with soome one... preferably a girl! Anywyas! UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - KagsKitty on May 28, 2005
    Great chapter!!! I hope sango ends up with kagome, Please update soon~~
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  • From ANON - Interested on April 25, 2005
    Wow... Another cliffy. I hate it and love it at teh same time. I wonder who Sango is going to end up with in the end. Is Miroku gonna end up finding about Sango's deeds? How is Miroku going to react to everything? Please update soon!!! I'm dying to find out what'll happen next.
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  • From ANON - KagsKitty on April 25, 2005
    LOVE IT!!! its really good Please make another chapter soooon!

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  • From KnightmareRhias on April 25, 2005
    Brings back memories of a staircase. The Hunter Hunts, but still doesn't know the prey.
    Long and filled with... sex. A lot of stories on this site are filled with it. Give me some more plot, that is what I will rate you on. Up for it? (You're the random reviewed for the morning. Goodnight.)
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  • From ANON - sirhcnotlih on April 25, 2005
    Can I proofread the next chappie?
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  • From ChocolateHentai on April 25, 2005


    Aww...thank you all who have been supportive and opend minded about my story:0)

    YEAH.....You guys liked the Kagura/Naraku twist...I was a little worried about that one.

    HAP......THANKX for the love, mean alot from a fellow child of the rainbow:)...lol

    Don't worry, I'm working on the next chappie....my schedules going to be hectic....last few weeks of the semester: y'all know how it is:)
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  • From ANON - HAP on April 24, 2005
    Would also like to add:

    Congrats on the fourth chapter! You deserve so many more reviews than you're getting. You're truly an amazing writer!
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  • From ANON - HAP on April 24, 2005
    i apologize for the lack of reviews from me... i've been bad. My compy hasn't been the greatest of friends as of late *glares at computer*

    Anyways... *waves her precious rainbow flag* excellent excellent story. My favorite on this site, i believe. It's so hard to find good yuri on this site. And when i find ones i'm interested in the author drops off the face of the earth. Anyways... i've been terrible, i know. So, since i can't remember if i reviewed for two and three (probably not) i shall review all three chapters (i know i did one, of course)

    Two: Cliffhangers are stupid. XD Of course once i actually got around to reading it you were updated, so i guess it doesn't matter. I like how you provide conflict. Instead of making it just smutt you offer challenges and conflict, which is good. I love it. Though i wish Kagome were more coroporative! *shakes fist*

    Three: Sexy, sexy, sexy smutt! I loved this chapter so, so much. It was sexy, it was excellent... crap, i can't think of any more adjectives to describe this chapter. The way you had Sango pleasure Kagome and vise versa was absolutely breathtaking. It left me breathless... among other things. Perhaps a suggestion i can offer you is maybe a little more detail? Not too much that it becomes nasty, but enough for us to *really* get the feel. I love your writing style, don't get me wrong. I adore this story.

    Four: Smutty goodness, though tamer than the last few chapters. I'll assume you're leading up to bigger and better things, huh? XD Lol. Anyways, i liked it how you teased us and then pulled us away from Ayame. Too bad, Sango and Ayame is an interesting couple. And Kagura turned Naraku? Awesome. Though now it seems that Sango's in for more conflict with Miroku (and Kohaku if the poor boy's ever finds the courage to face her)

    Good chapters, update soon.
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  • From ANON - sirhcnotlih on April 21, 2005
    Wow.

    That was a twister!

    Your're good!

    5 out of 5!
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  • From ChocolateHentai on April 10, 2005


    Hey you:)
    Thankx again for your reviews....you know what, I might need a proofreader. Just email me, let me know what to do ok? Thankx
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  • From ANON - sirhcnotlih on April 10, 2005
    Aww!

    Poor Sango.

    It was still good though.

    5 out of 5!

    Do you need a proofreader?

    And what about Kagura?
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  • From ANON - sirhcnotlih on April 04, 2005
    Very good!

    Maybe they should have a threesome.

    5 out of 5!

    PS-I have something for you.E-mail me.
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  • From ANON - Majia on April 03, 2005
    Awwwww-pouts- i'll wait...
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  • From ChocolateHentai on April 01, 2005


    WOW....Okay this is cool. More people are diggin' it....Oi, thankx?

    Hmmm...Sango and Kagura....I'l have to think about that one;). Well, my next chappie is coming up soon!
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