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Reviews for On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon

By : ryukotsusei
  • From CoffeeGyrl on April 16, 2005
    I love this I absolutly LOVE THIS!!! This is one waaaayyyy dark fic and I like it alot such angst has so much potential for such a great love story I can't wait until you get them together. Now Hiei is remembering this so we know Kagome eventually goes back to her own time but when will they meet again? And is Inuyasha and Shippo in the Maki as well? This story really keeps me guessing and I can't wait to see the next chapter this is very different and I love it ^_^
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  • From LestatsDarkAngel on April 15, 2005
    kill him kill him kill him!!!!!! but i love this :) lol i think kagome should killl the mata guy.i like how u did the whole physocological thing
    it's gonna be so great when you put up more chapters for this....and when are the binding items going to come off? is Kag gonna go through more hell? it's a bit confusing cuz i don't know whats gonna happen next bu i like your story and YOU KICK ASS!!!!! LOL so get ta movin lil lady hehe

    ttfn
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  • From ANON - Bree on April 11, 2005
    Ok I'm really getting addicted to this story... its about time that Hiei had someone that understood him. now I just can't wait untill he's walking down the street and sees her... well this story is great PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From KaiWren on April 09, 2005
    wow, this is really good. you are truly talented. I have also read 'you will be mine' and I think you are an excellent author. never let anyone tell you otherwise! And remember that I am only one of many who admire you.
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  • From ANON - MysticAngel77 on April 04, 2005
    I really love how the story is progressing and you seem to be doing a good job on keeping Kagome and Hiei in character - although it IS sort of strange to see Hiei being concerned and helpful right away, but it also makes sense since he has been in that situation much longer and understands what Kagome is going through. Plus, he's curious, and he cant get answers to his questions if she dies right? There's always the fallback of how it ties into the prophecy and that they're connected to eachother and that's why he cares about her. Doesn't matter to me since you did a fiiiiine job! Cant wait to read more, but take your time and wait until you're satisfied, then I'm sure your loyal readers will most definitely be satisfied as well! I check to see if you update each evening, just because I have no life outside of my silly college classes - heh... I absolutely love all of your stories though. They have plots!!!! So hard to find in fanfiction nowadays... along with the fluffyness romance gives us and really nice sexual tension! Anywho, keep it up and hope to see an update within the next week! Month? Better be within the next year missy! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on April 03, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - fluffyzbrevis on April 03, 2005
    i like. you write really well and set up the story astoundingly. i wish that last chapter could have been a bit longer but oh well. question: when did he take the whip out of her, or is it still in?
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  • From ANON - Jasmine Fields on April 03, 2005
    Wow. So, now, I am curious as to why Kags is in the Makai (besides the whole
    prophecy ordeal) ? Can't wait till you update again... a good story just isn't a
    good story without angst somewhere thrown in there.


    -Jazz-
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  • From ANON - Gem on April 03, 2005
    Given the situation they are in what IS ooc? In real life stress make people do very strange and uncharacteristic things. Hostages even bond with their captors. Flip the way your looking at it. How could they NOT gravitate towards one another as the only two not evil beings there? Kagome will always reach out, both for herself and to help others. Heie well, I'm sure he would do anything for his revenge, and if allieing with Kagome helps, its a far easier step then having to side with a captor. He just won't trust her completely right away. Remember too, that no matter how cold and distant any character that is "good" may appear, most have some aspect that shows they don't always want to be that way, not to everyone.
    Now as for Masakazu's demise, call me sentimental but I prefer the punishment fitting the crime ending. Bring the hell of his own creation home to him, up close and personal so to speak. Something like every soul he has killed visiting vengeance on him while he is dragged to hell(I know, stolen plot line from Inuyasha but it works)kicking and screaming. Well screaming anyway as he should be helpless as it happens.
    Now that I've bored you into a coma, I'm looking forward on how you will write the next few chapters. Hey if nothing else my ideas were bad enough to scare/shock your muse into action!
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  • From ANON - Gem on April 02, 2005
    intense. I really want this villain to die a slow prolonged painful death. Where Hiei is concerned payback is so going to be a vicious bitch after all that suffering he went through.
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  • From ANON - Jasmine Fields on March 30, 2005
    Ouch. My stomach's churning.

    I'm glad that you've been fairly tasteful as you possibly can given the
    kind of violence that has ensued, so far... and I hope, with as much
    of an angst lover as I am, that you give breaks to us... well, me, anyway.
    It doesnt have to be right away, since it is your story, and since I'll read
    no matter what you write. (Because I really love your work). Anyhoo,
    that's my two cents.

    I think I'm going to go take time to smell this bouquet of roses I received,
    now.... a short stop from the intensity, that it is~~

    -Jazz-
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on March 30, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - windmagelita on March 30, 2005
    i dont usually review here , but i had to
    its a well writen story so far
    with a very creative plot
    but all i ask is that you dont get graphic with the rape and stuff like that
    thought its a wonderful story so far
    i beg you to not go into detail later
    thanks and keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Dark Hunger on March 30, 2005
    BURN,BURN,BURRRRRRNNNN
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  • From ANON - Gem on March 30, 2005
    You warned us. I trust your judgement on how graphic or violent a passage need be to convey the feeling you want, you have not been off yet. This isn't normally my taste, but I will stick with it because it promises to evolve into yet another good read.
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