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Reviews for On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon

By : ryukotsusei

From ANON - Animefreak242 on November 16, 2005
Oh, ok! Thanks for answering my numerous questions and also for clearing that up. I thought that males were fertile from the time they hit puberty (guess you learn something new everyday). I was just so annoyed (it wasn't you). Some authors constantly use terminology that I thought was wrong.

In any case, these past few chapters were pretty good. I don't like Aiko. I know that she wants revenge, but she knows nothing about the situation, and if her attitude is anything to go by, she doesn't WANT to. I really hope that this gets cleared up soon. I'd hate to have a confrontation that ended in bloodshed (though a confrontation itself is fin ^_^).

Ryuji will get what's coming to him too right? Both he and Masakazu should rot. >< So mean... But I wonder what happened to the skeleton? Hmm... Are you going to have him show up again? And if you do, will it be as a double/another Ryuji? *wonders*

Well, at least Kagome and Hiei have gotten their feelings (somewhat) straight. I'm glad about that. ^_^ Just don't hurt them too much? Please? Their lives are crappy enough. Poor things...

~Animefreak242
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Kawaii Girl
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From ANON - Sayuri-chan on November 16, 2005
Omgeez...does that guy ever give it a rest? Sheesh! Kags and Hiei are my heros--them going through this and leaning on each other is so great, and the way they come together just makes me melt. Its the beauty within the beast of the situation. I can't wait to see that bastard finally eat dirt. Update when you can...oh, and that wolf bitch doesn't stand a chance. I somehow think that Kouga will protect her when the time comes. His spirit was still around, so hopefully something good will come of it.
Sayuri-chan
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From ANON - Sithathoryunet on November 16, 2005
Thank you for updating, very good chapter. I was wondering when that crow was going to make his reappearance and what would happen when he did. This plot just keeps getting better and better. Please update soon.

P.S. As far as the authors note goes, yes, I agree. Seems to me that if anyone wants to make a big issue out of terminology or to say that all males of all species are fertile 100% of the time should go back and pay attention in Biology and Zoology 101 before they speak.
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From ANON - LestatsAngel on November 16, 2005
as always i love your story!!!! WOOT hehe. So This is looking like it's leading twords a sad ending, like Kagome's gonna die. WHy is Kouga's mate intent on killing Kagome? logicly she could see that Kagome had nothing to do with what Kouga did i mean come on! It wasn't her fault that Kouga loved her first and his mate was her shadow. Oh well. Maybe Kouga's spirit will give her some light. I am happy though. I can tell it's beginning to come to an end in this part of the story....or so it seems lol the way you write you never know but thats what makes it so much fun!! Well look at me i'm rambling so let me get to the point here. I LOVE YOUR STORIES! and please update soon ^_^

tooldes!!!
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From ANON - sendosha on November 16, 2005
Great chapter. I just hope that there will happen something like the wolf bitch shows up and the crow can�t lay his filthy hands on Hiei again. Maybe the crow can torture the bitch, she would deserve it. I can�t believe that Kouga had her as a mate, why did he mate this cruel and jelous bitch?
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From kimisan on November 15, 2005
I know you didn't just leave that evil ass cliffie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! How dare you?!!! What's up with that? No more Hiei cookies for yous. *Shakes head* You're lucky I lubs you or I'd be throwing Jaken nuggets at you right now. I'll forgive you cause I just know you'll be updating again some time this week. Or I won't let you rest till you do. You're not allowed to eat, shit or sleep until you let us know what's going to happen. Understand? Good!

Other than that it was an awesome chapter, the Hiei/Kagome action was very sweet. Keep up the good work. Update Now....
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From ANON - kougalover123 on November 15, 2005
another great chapter. i am gald they have voiced their feelings and promises to each other. please update again soon.
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From kimisan on November 15, 2005
The above review is correct! I'll be nicer about it though. It is all fanfiction and I use it also. Ryu did a wonderful job of explaining the sitch. As far as the comment about it being more possible but at the same time impossible for Kagome to go into heat. But only if she were an animal. Let me point this out, if we wanted to be technical humans do. Sure we don't bleed out the snatch during but in general it is when an animal becomes fertile, the females body prepares itself for impregnation, all that good stuff. If I'm not mistaken, I am a female after all, but there is a time of the month were the female body changes. The walls of her uterus thickens leading to the egg dropping. Which in case the woman is becoming fertile, should we say then that the woman is coming in heat? Sure most do this every month unlike animals who have larger time spans in between or specific times when it happens. We have our fertile cycles just like animals, so I'd say it is possible and realistic when authors say Kagome or any other female is in heat.

Other than that Ryu is doing a wonderful job with the story. Atleast she went into detail explaining things, unlike some that put them in heat and have the guy walking around saying "let's fuck, let's fuck". That said keep up the good work and we love you! *Blows Kiss*
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From ANON - Kimmey on November 15, 2005
The story is awesome. And for the review commenting on Hiei going in heat. Let me remind you that this is FANFICTION. Okay buddy, youkai don't really exist so who the hell are you to say whether or not the males don't have a cycle in life such as going in heat? I see nothing wrong when authors do this. I've yet to see any anime where youkai actually mark their mates but some authors add that. Thats all good, its what they want in their story. What kind of person would nit-pick over something so stupid. And let me point this out, males are not fertile 100% of the time. Go tell that to my ex!

For example, drinking heavily or some activities can kill a man's sperm, like wearing jeans too tight. For all you know Hiei's nutts might not produce sperm until he goes into heat. I think using the term going into heat is alot better than saying Hiei entered a stage where he's really fucking horny. I think the detail and explaining Ryu need was exceptionally well done. If you are going to bitch find something valid before you open your trap.
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From ANON - Animefreak242 on November 12, 2005
Chapter 14: I liked this chapter, as well as the reat of the story (as depressing as it is at times). Hopefully Kagome won't be completely broken once this story is over. You'll have her heal at least enough to normally function, right? Well, on one hand, I hope you have both Kagome and Hiei healed, but on the other, I don't think it should be an entirely happy ending. That'd be too far from the original plot. Dunno... either way, good chapter!

Oh, one thing. I have a question. Why is it that authors (it's not only you) have a good story then you come up with something like 'Hiei'/'Inuyasha'/'Sesshomaru' going into heat? You DO know male animals don't go into heat (going into heat means you're fertile - males are ALWAYS fertile (unless born otherwise)). I know it may work with the story, but it doesn't make sense. It'd make more sense to have Kagome herself go into heat (though that's more possible, yet at the same time, impossible). Well, if she were an animal... I was just wondering why people always do that.

Okay, I'm done now. [Link: http://www.deviantart.com/view/25130971/]

~Animefreak242
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Kawaii Girl
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From ANON - Milii on November 06, 2005
OMG! I love your story! I have been reading it for a long time now and religously check back for updates every day. ive ready your story so many times i could probobly recite it from memory. Please keep up the amazing work! I hope that you can get another chapter out soon! thank you for giving me a story i can enjoy reading over and over without ever getting a hint of boredom!

~Milii
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From ANON - lonelylulaby on November 06, 2005
that was beautiful. i loved the new chapie and want you to keep up the good work.

ja ne till the next time
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From ANON - DarkFelineHuntress on November 06, 2005
Great chapter, I really like Kagome and Hiei's interactions. Can't wait to read more.
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From ANON - kougalover123 on November 05, 2005
how sweet she finally told hiei how she feels, i can't wait to see how he responds. please update again soon.
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From ANON - the one who says moo on November 05, 2005
OMFG!!! great chapter!!! i luv it! please u[dtade soon!
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