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Reviews for Toying Around

By : dragonlorelei
  • From ANON - Lenn on April 11, 2005
    You have so got to update I totally loved the story. The only constructive critisism (ah I can't spell!) I have is that Inuyasha is kind of acting out f charector and although we already know, you havn't described what any of your charectors look like. I seriosly hoppe you update cause I will defintely read
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  • From ANON - gittelbug on April 11, 2005
    Wow that was great. i can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Fallen_angel on April 10, 2005
    Cool first chap. Great writing. Will definitely continue :)

    Fallen
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  • From ANON - Mystic Hanyou on April 03, 2005
    This is great. Poor Inuyasha. A doll. Man that's sad. So what will happen now? Update soon, later.
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  • From ANON - DRAKE220 on April 03, 2005
    oh that was funny! hahaha!!! much better then the other two chapters! inu was more himself and kagome was more entertaining! i am DYING to see how miroku is going to take this. i mean if anyone can give inu some interesting 'how-to-be-a-guy' rules, it'd be miroku.
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  • From ANON - gv on April 01, 2005
    this intreges me...please update so i can reed more...PPPLLLLLEEEEAAASSSEE..........
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  • From ANON - Zelix on April 01, 2005
    Ehehehe.... hahahha... oh boy, this just keeps getting better and better, really good stuff you got here!
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  • From Zoid on April 01, 2005
    Kch, this is funny. Nice job! Spelling seems a little off at times but who am I to complain? Doesn't really matter to me anyway cause I like the idea. ... I wish I had an Inuyasha doll too...
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  • From ANON - Sassy Chan on April 01, 2005
    Wow, I really like it! I never seen this idea done before, it's really nice! Please continue!
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  • From ANON - Nocturne22 on April 01, 2005
    This is definitely something new for Inuyasha fics. I think you can turn this into a really great story so please update and write as much as you can! ^_^
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  • From ANON - gittelbug on April 01, 2005
    this is really cool. keep up the good work! ^^;
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  • From ANON - drake220 on March 31, 2005
    horrible HORRIBLE movie. tayra banks was in it and it was mentally stuprifying. however, this is a cute story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 31, 2005
    man. i'd be driving myself to a freakin doctor! "i've lost it! i haven't had sex in forever, and i've finally lost my mind!"
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  • From ANON - sexykagome03 on March 31, 2005
    LOL!! This story is rlly cool, PLZ update soon! Constructive Critism: Inuyasha is a bit OOC (Out of Character). Maybe you could make him a bit more...Inuyasha-ish? Like, fighting and being a smart ass all the time? Just a thought

    ~sexykagome03
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  • From ANON - Kat8125 on March 31, 2005
    Hahaha. If this isn't an original story, I don't know what is! Very interesting. THis is such an amazing plot, so please don't screw it up *lol*. But from your first two chapters, I can tell that your a great writer so I think I'm in for a fantastic story. Keep up the great work :)
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