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Reviews for Houshi Love and Demon Passion

By : HentaiHoushiMiroku
  • From ANON - senbo-sama on December 10, 2005
    Hmmm...very interesting! ^-^ I like the whole concept and Sessie stalking his "prey" is very sexy but I found all the grammar mistakes very distracting. : I will admitt I'm a spelling/grammar freak but I think it might be distracting for a lot of people. ^^; May I beta read for you and fix it up a bit? :)
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  • From DragonflyMina on November 08, 2005
    that was cool. you should have them find a woman that they want to mate.
    would be cool. and more smut dun dun dun.........
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  • From ANON - glaze on November 04, 2005
    Hello come on now finish up your chapters the story is getting great lol......
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  • From ANON - adry on November 04, 2005
    please update as soon as possible your story is great!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - fire_an_ice on June 06, 2005
    OMg so funn y alil ooc in the second chapie but hey that the beauty anyway i love it great story.
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  • From Yamima on May 04, 2005
    MIROKU YOU LECHER DON'T YOU DARE PUT YOUR PITTED HAND ON HER!
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  • From ANON - BloodAndChocolate on April 28, 2005
    Oooh, the ending didn't sound good. A man? why should he be surprised? o.O Miroku isn't gonna lose a mate is he? Continue please, I MUST know what happen. ~Blood
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  • From ANON - Rawben on April 28, 2005
    lol! whoa! was he out of it for that whole thing?? the first and second chapter??? lol! this is gonna be interesting! also, it was kinda difficult to understand who was who when you changed the POV... so maybe put in headers? that say sess pov or miroku pov? or somehting... anyhow, it took me awhile, but i figured out who was thinkin/talkin. ;) updates are love!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 15, 2005
    the pairing is fucking hot!! damm! wish i could join in!! keep writting!! ( do any other hot boys hook up) hint hint
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  • From ANON - T on April 06, 2005
    I like it! ^^ lol I can't imagine going for a swim, then losing consciousness...only to wake up in someone's room! creeeepy! but..I guess if it's Sesshoumaru it wouldn't be AS scary XD...cute story! ^^
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  • From HentaiHoushiMiroku on April 04, 2005
    So tell me how do you like the revised edition?
    Signed,
    Miroku the Hentai Houshi
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  • From HentaiHoushiMiroku on April 02, 2005
    In response to the replies. This is not a one shot, I really do enjoy writting this kind of thing but I never get around to editing it. I was going to spell check everything but it was like 2 am and I had to be up to bike to school at like 6:30 am so yeah. I really do need a beta, I was reading through it after I got some sleep and got embarrassed by all my typos. As I type this I am making a rewrite, it is going to be longer and more detailed, but hopefully you'll like it even more. At this point I will accept almost anyone as a beta and will give you credits for a job well done. To ask to be a beta contact me via aim nicvkname: origmiroku or via email inuyashagang@hotmail.com. I also use msn as well, you can add me through the hotmail address on my profile; please I really need a beta that isn't disgusted by yaoi. *gets on his houshi knees and begs while making puppy dog eyes*
    Signed,
    The Hentai Houshi
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  • From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver on April 02, 2005
    I liked the storyline a lot and I think this can turn into a really good fic; however, you absolutely need to find a beta. Your sentences are all smashed together, making it difficult to read. You have a ton of typos and no paragraphs. It also looks like you're missing a section from when Sessh was watching Miroku to Miroku in his bed. If you want to go and do a quick editing job on this story, just move the dialogue to a separate line. That at least will be a quick fix to make it easier to read until you can find a beta. And this is not a flame at all. I'm just expressing some advise that will help other readers enjoy this story more. You really do a have good plot and storyline and great ideas. Good Luck with the next chapter ^_^
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  • From ANON - Rawben on April 01, 2005
    awwww!!! i liked it! this isn't a oneshot is it? keep going! oh, and your format is somtimes difficult. you should have more paragraphs. i lose my place easily in all those letters... and i think part of the story got accidentally deleted. it jumped from sess watching him to miroku liking to cuddle... i'm excited for the next chapter! i love miroku yaoi!!
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  • From ANON - Shinna on April 01, 2005
    I look forward to reading the next chapters.
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