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Reviews for What Never Should

By : FireandIce
  • From ANON - madamebutterfly1983 on April 06, 2005
    Aww man Sess is my favorite character.....but I will not knock this 'cause I want to see where it goes..... you are an awesome writer by the way.
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  • From ANON - Fire Kitty on April 06, 2005
    Wow, this is a really really good story, and its great that you update it every day! I hope sesshoumaru is...umm...not...dead or...zombiefied...yeah...>
    Cant wait to read the ending! Its sure to be a great as the story:o
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  • From ANON - firekitty on April 05, 2005
    wow. that was an awesome story. i almost felt like crying at the end...keep up the great work^^
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  • From ANON - Polka dot on April 05, 2005
    i doubt naraku could deafeat Sessy but it was an unexpected twist. Sad for Inuyasha though.
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  • From on April 05, 2005
    WHAT!!!!!SESSHOUMARU IS DEAD!!!!!!AND HE BROKE HIS PROMISE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WHAT IS INUYASHA GOING TO DO!!!!!!!!!!!11111
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  • From ANON - Kaorustalker30 on April 05, 2005
    *stares in despaired shock* Se..seh..Sesshomaru... *wails* He's dead?! And now Inuyasha thinks that he broke his promise. I hope nothing happens to Rin on her way toward Kaede's Village, and that Inuyasha at least gets Sesshomaru's message... *sniffles* He's not... really, really, *really* dead is he? *tear's well up in eye's*


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  • From ANON - Kogas Hentai Luver on April 05, 2005
    What a wonderful fic. I am soooo enjoying it. Sess can't really be dead, can he? You have me glued to my seat. This is so perfectly written too. WoW! That's all I can say, just WoW!
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  • From ANON - Bakura on April 05, 2005
    Don't kill Sesshy!
    He's... well, He's Sesshy! and he's cute!!!!!!!!!
    make Inuyasha revive him or something ;_;

    oh, and the fic is great. Inuyasha's bit OOC, but it's fine.
    Lemons are great, too. I love to see Inu chan in pain ^_^

    update~!
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  • From ANON - maria on April 05, 2005
    great chapter. update next chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - Lady Aqualyne (Too Lazy To Sign In) on April 05, 2005
    WOAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I was totally not expecting Sessy to DIE!!! ::Sobs:: How are they going to be together now?! ::Whimpers and clings:: BRING HIM BACK!!!

    Okay I am done ranting...

    Anyway great chapter, totally unexpected things happening. I like the way you write, and that part where he tells them to tell Inuyasha he's sorry and he loves him I thought I'd burst into tears...

    Okay I did...

    HAPPY NOW?!

    ::Giggles:: Update soon!!!
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on April 05, 2005
    *Blink-blink…blank stare* Ohh ..OMG what happened in chapter 4..OMG..don’t want to give it away…but why do I feel like Inu is fixing to go all youkai on Naraku’s fine ass!!!(not like that wouldn’t be hot….oops off subject) Wow!! You go these chapters out quickly (3 and 4) Good job!!
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  • From ANON - libra_ryu on April 04, 2005
    I love your story so far, and can't wait to see how the others react to Inuyasha. The thing with Sango's cat, though. In the Japanese version the name is Kirara. It was changed to Kilala in the English version. Don't know why.
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  • From ANON - whirleeq on April 04, 2005
    This is pretty good, but I have one constructive bit of criticism for you: watch your use of tenses, when you write. You jump back and forth from present and past tense quite frequently, and it can be a little confusing for the reader. Other than that, good job so far...


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  • From ANON - nicole on April 04, 2005
    That was a cool story. wish to read more! I must be out of my mind, but I just think those two are hot. Of course that's just me! Love your story. Love It!
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  • From ANON - inu-chan puppy (too lazy to sign in) on April 04, 2005
    your story is very good, well done. ans sango's weapon is called "Hiraikotsu". Keep up the goop work ... :D
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