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By : Quillwing717
  • From chanda on February 07, 2007
    Happy day's you updated! Great update...oh they were so close. Awww the angsty torture. Look forward til your next chapter.

    Chanda
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  • From cukid9 on February 07, 2007
    *chuckles* That was fan-freakin'-tastic! My favorite part? When Kagome storms to her room and slams the door shut...and then opens it to slam it shut again. Not that I haven't been holding my breath for quite some time now waiting for them to do...well, SOMETHING, but I'm highly amused by the little things (the plottings of Miroku and Shippou invariably send me into fits of giggles). And now that Inuyasha seems to be in denial about the whole thing, the anticipation will be even worse! Ah, well, I suppose I have it in me to be patient.

    I understand and sympathize with your anxiety about not getting certain things to "feel" right to you in your stories; and I know that no amount of anyone telling you that your pacing and delicately intricate plot are excellent will lessen that anxiety. However, whether it takes you three weeks or three months to write these tantalizing chapters, I've throughly -and enviously ^_~- enjoyed them.
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  • From kookookitty on February 07, 2007
    now this is some thrill ride... the emotional rollercoaster!! that kiss was hotter than most lemons, the wicked exhilaration of the pilfered kiss.

    this is intelligent, entertaining, captivating, intreiging, eloquently written... and the list goes on (abbreviated for lack of time).

    eagerly anticipating future installments!

    thank you,
    ginny
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  • From InuGoddess715 on February 07, 2007
    Great chapter. It was HOT of course, but at the same time funny and emotional. I loved the end where Inuyasha ran like a scared little rabbit to keep from doing what he had just said he wouldn't do again. It was so CUTE! And I hope Kagome sees that "the gentleman doth protest too much." He's stubborn as a mule, but it looks like she's beginning to see through his bluff. I can't wait for the day when Kagome doesn't let him retreat! LOL
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  • From ANON - SkatCat on February 06, 2007
    Awesome! This chapter was worth waiting for! It looks like Kagome might be close to finally getting some of her memories back. I'm really excited to find out what happened to her. Plus I LOVED the "first kiss scene", with Inu fighting but eventually giving over to the feelings he has for Kagome. I can't wait to see how he going to try to deal with what happened between them, or more importantly, how he eventually won't be able to keep away from her now! Anyway, again, awesome chapter! Can't wait till the next! ^_^
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  • From szaugg on February 06, 2007
    Just lovely. that was a great first kiss. Sweet, and sexy, and funny. I liked the pace of the physical description, and wording was just...spot on. All that rewriting paid off, IMO! It just gave me little happy shivers and I'm smiling like an idiot and enjoying the heck out of the whole thing. Along with desperately hoping for more, of course! Sigh...I do so admire the ability to work until you get it just write. It's taking a while to get where the story's going, but in the best possible way. The type of story where I know I'll be happy to know the ending when it comes, but terribly sad that it's actually over!
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  • From Shaid on February 05, 2007
    I really really REALLY love this story. I'm looking forward to more as soon as you can get it out.. and god DAMN that was a hot kiss!! My husband would be getting mauled tonight if he weren't sick as a dog with a 101.5 fever...
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  • From ANON - amhor56 on February 05, 2007
    That couldn't possibly be anymore perfect. Don't change it at all. Damn that was intense. I'm glad you updated! Please update soon
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  • From ANON - Celest on February 05, 2007
    God I love this story. I've been waiting for you to continue. I thought you died. I wanted to cry. I've never reviewed this story but I've been following... and waiting.. a long... long time. It just took way... WAAAAAYYYY to long that I couldn't take it anymore. So I'm reviewing in hopes that you might update fast. I'm so happy you came back to us. Update soon. Please...... I'll be waiting.
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  • From ANON - shaid on December 19, 2006
    Wow... That is.. ok, that is one of the best AUs I've ever read, and I've read quite a few. It looks like it's been some time since you updated but I hope you can update again sometime soon, I've really enjoyed it. The writing is supurbe and the plot is wonderful! And all these mysteries! I so want to find out what's going on!

    Wether you're still working on it or not, I'd just like to say how much I;ve loved this. It's great!
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  • From ANON - Bailey on October 09, 2006
    I really like this story. I like it a lot. Its been a while since you updated. But if there is something going on in youre life, I really hope youre okay and I hope you finish whatever you need to before you update this story.

    Update as soon as you can. And I will love you fo-EVAH. :)
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  • From ANON - Elle on September 28, 2006
    Update soon, dear. I think I'm addicted to this story. :)
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  • From ANON - InuGoddess715 on September 24, 2006
    Good story. Your character development is so rich, and I like how you are developing your plot slowly enough that we can follow it easily. Keep up the good work; I look forward to your updates.
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  • From ANON - cu-kid on September 17, 2006
    "Was all this building pressure evident only to her? Affecting only her?"

    Uh, no! It's killing ME! I thought the last chapter had it bad, but this one was worse! ^_^ Building tension is such a delicate process and you have it down, unquestionably. I liked the indepth look into not only Inuyasha and Kagome's inner struggles, but Miroku's as well (I am still very happy that both he and Sango are being written as three-dimensional characters). I think there was only one sentence I saw that was a little hinky (and, more likely than not, I just read it wrong), but it didn't in any way distract from the overall flow and purpose of this chapter.

    And, don't worry about your citrus! You did a splendid job with it in "Waiting..." and I'm sure you will do well again! Just take your time -we'll all still be here.

    *dies slowly with anticipation* ^_~
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  • From Titaness on September 16, 2006
    I love this story.
    I wish that I could write like this, but sadly, I am limited to appreciation.
    All the characters seem so very real, with multiple facets to their personalities. The plot and execution are brilliant, if I do say so myself. Which I shall, because I just did.
    I eagerly await all of your updates, because this story is so engrossing.
    It definitely sucked me right in.

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