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Reviews for Demon spawn: Naraku's child

By : Starbrat
  • From ANON - Amonsdaughtrr on May 10, 2005
    It's a good start! Keep going!
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  • From ANON - Diane on May 09, 2005
    The 1st chapter is OK but the 2nd is all run together and REALLY hard to read, so if you could fix it so it has paragraphs that would be great. Have no idea if it was an upload error or not but spaces would be good. Haven't really read them yet, I wanted to save both chapters to Word to read when I go offline shortly.
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  • From YoukaiObsessed on April 16, 2005
    Love the prologue. Very interested to see where you go with this. Looks to be very interesting!! 0,0’ I will definitely read more of what you come up with!!
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  • From ANON - swissnights on April 15, 2005
    so Naraku killed kagome and now has Sango as a sex slave. Inuyasha you better find Sagno before to long
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