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By : LadyKurama86
  • From Sexgoddess2110 on May 20, 2005
    Well it's been 19 days since you updated and said you would in 14 days sorry to be a update bugger but I love this story and I'm ready for a lemon grrr update soon please or I'll keep counting the days past updation

    loves arry
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  • From ANON - animechick on May 19, 2005
    they need to stop playing games they want each othet let them have each other
    update soon also kagomes relationship with shippo is super cute
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on May 13, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - liz on May 12, 2005
    i liked it alot are you gonna whrite more?????????
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  • From ANON - terralupess@yahoo.com on May 10, 2005
    Although I like the premise of the fic, there are a few things that have been bothering me about it. There are a large number of spelling mistakes, such as repeatedly calling Sango “Sang” and “bough” in stead of “brought”. There are some places where the wording is rather confusing, such as when Sesshoumaru asks Kagome if she is “angry”. The tense changes way too often. There are times where it seems like you’re trying to write in present or future tense, but after a few sentences you switch back to past. People don’t usually speak in past tense when referring to the present, for example when Shippo tells Rin that she “talked funny”. If you get someone to beta-read the fic before you post any of the chapters I believe that it will make it considerably better and probably gain more readers. =) If you would like I can beta for you, just send me an e-mail.
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  • From ANON - TricksterGoddess on May 10, 2005
    Well, all I have to say is at least you're updating now... yayness. Is there going to be a lemon in the next chapter, I hope so, or at least a lime. I think its cool that she's going to go back and hunt shards, this should be interesting, for Inu Yasha and Sesshomaru hate each other and Inu Yasha might challenge him or something like that. Well, can't wait fo the next chapter and keep up the good work^__^!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 10, 2005
    Can't wait for more... Constructive critism: Either everythings going screwy when it uploads, or your grammer/spelling sucks. And what's with the missing words? Got particularily worse in the later chapters. But anyway, love the story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 09, 2005
    Please continue your story its great.
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  • From ANON - TricksterGoddess on May 05, 2005
    I'm really liking this story. I hope next chapter there will at least be another juicy lime^^ Please update soon and keep up the good work^__^!!!
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  • From ANON - Jebus on May 05, 2005
    I will be honest. I hate Sess/Kag. But this is different. I like it.
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  • From ANON - Jazmine on April 18, 2005
    awwww! thats so sweet! shippo crying for his second mother and sesshomaru and kagome falling for each other. Great Fanfiction!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • From ANON - Anon on April 18, 2005
    this story is good so far but you need a beta desperately.
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  • From ANON - Galadrihm_Star on April 17, 2005
    Loved how you made Kagome pound on Inuyasha!! Not to mention her new 'no b.s.' attitude rocks! Can't wait for another chapter!
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  • From ANON - Arryelle on April 16, 2005
    I like this story I like it alot please update as soon as possilbe I'm addicted to it's WAFF when it gets bloody or angsty try not to make me cry lol well do upate

    Loves arry
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  • From ANON - rachi (NOT LOGGED IN DAMN IT!!!) on April 16, 2005
    UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! peasie?? I can't wait to hear more, so, UPDATE VERYVERYVERYVERY SOON PEASIE!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? great job, by the way, tank u n ja ne!! ^-^
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