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Reviews for What A Girl Needs

By : SoutasSister
  • From ANON - Catz2.0 on June 19, 2005
    Oh my goodness! I love your story, it's so emotional, I've cried like 6 times already. It's so wonderful how you pasted everything together! Keep up the GREAT work and update as soon as possible! Gotta love ya! I'm becoming your biggest fan quickly!
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  • From ANON - sublimetrickster on June 19, 2005
    I'm really enjoying this story. It's extremely well thought out and the characterisation is closed to flawless (at least that's how I feel). I love that you stick to the manga story. I like the anime fine, but when it comes to the real story, I like the manga better.
    I look forward to your next chapter, and take your time, I know all about the life getting in the way thing or writing thing.
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  • From ANON - Sareanna on June 18, 2005
    please update soon.... this is a wonderful story.
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  • From ANON - inuficcrzy on June 18, 2005
    very very cool! i love how you've done this. i think sess is right on in character, but something i've always wondered. do you think he's completely without a sense of humor? i think he would appreciate dry wit, he'd never show it, but i think he'd admire it if its done right. kag could be good for that maybe once or twice, but afterwards, koga would have to fill that in. wolf-boy does have his brights spots of sarcasm, so i think sess might find a good conversationalist in him, once koga learns some discretion.

    as for the kama sutra, if i'[m not mistaken, buddhism was formed in the hindu area. it is possible that, while miro may not have read the traslated version of it, he would be aware of it. the scroll's original intention, as i understand it, was to help make couples have children by having them be more at ease with each other by learning the intimate arts together. (happy couples like activities, activities lead to children, etc) and since some of the positions depicted are pysically impossible, (or at least it seems that way without a harness or a winch) many speculate that some of the so-called advanced positions were meant to make partners learn how to laugh at and with each other, without hurting anyone's feelings.

    can't wait to see more!
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  • From ANON - Chio on June 17, 2005
    Hi, what can I say? I began reading your story and....I couldn´t stop. Please continue and update soon. Jane
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  • From ANON - DEEP Serenity on June 17, 2005
    Love this last chap, everything about it, Sess is prefect and I agree shippo IS A DEmon and needs to grow up a little.

    Sango...well her personality is RIGHT for your story, I just still as a reader wish she'd come to terms with her natrual feelings, maybe next chap a little more M/S

    I skimmed your AN notes. just a suggestion from another author-Stop explaining yourself in so much detail! Your writing speaks for it self(it does since you are a great writer) and if some readers are to immature or picky to understand and apprieciate your story line the way YOU want to write it oh well.

    You do a good job of making your story flow well and make sense people will either like it or they wont

    Update when you can and I will continue to read and Review, your doing an awsome job!
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  • From ANON - Shadowknight on June 17, 2005
    A great chapter 8 here. This is one that I'm always looking for updates on. One of the best, if not the best of the IY fics I've read so far. Plot, emotional depth, character strengths/weaknesses, and more are detailed well. What can I way about spelling/grammar? Superior as usual, and most welcome.

    Top of the line fic, and awaiting chapter 9. :)
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  • From ANON - KenYasha on June 16, 2005
    Wow! It is a pleasure to read your story and the newest chapter again! I enjoyed it as I always do when I read this story ... I really really like it. And the lime ... it was beautifully written, and very erotic. I do look so much forward to read the next chapters... keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - jodibetz on June 16, 2005
    Wonderful!
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  • From ANON - Inu-Shinta on June 16, 2005
    I agree with what Sesshoumaru said about Kagome having insecurities. I think Kagome needs to build up her self-confidence, and when you think about it, Sesshoumaru is right about her clothing, it may be acceptable in her time, but in the Fuedal Era it woulb be very revealing.
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  • From ANON - Peacemaker on June 16, 2005
    Ch.8 was another great chapter and it had a lot of angst in it. If only Inuyasha could express himself better things would be so much easier for him and Kagome. Keep up the good worka nd upate when you have time please.
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  • From ANON - gracemis on June 16, 2005
    Another great chapter. I think you are very good with your characterizations overall. I think you have a pretty reasonable portrayal of Sess. I'm not a big fan of the Sess/Rin relationship because i do think that is more of a father/child relationship- made even more special/precious because it is one where they both "chose" each other. But if i put that aside, i think your view of him is quite good.

    All the classic InuKag misunderstandings are great! very takahashi! very frustrating for fans who want them to just figure it out!

    about the recent manga, yes that is some really good story development. i guess we all know now why she had that other major character die (don't want to spoil it) as a powerful foil to move sess's character along.

    thanks for sharing your story with us and good luck on the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Jimmy11 on June 16, 2005
    This story is great because from the manga this would be how both Inyuasha and kagome would in this situation because there both to afraid of the truth or rejection. Anyways great job so far and please update soon.
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  • From ANON - fallenangel7583 on June 16, 2005
    i have to say that i love the character you have put together for Sesshoumaru. i agree that he really does't hold bland disregard for yash's life just more of a pretncious attitude towards the boy. to me, you really wrote him in perfect. the chapter was great!!! very well done. have to say, you really rounded teh characters perfectly because i'll tell you, the opinios of what inu meant and what he said had me floored. i never would have thought him to be able to hit so low yet mean such praise. like the comparison to tetsusaiga! my mouth droped at that scene and i was rooting for the good sitting he got. yet when you wrote in his rationalization of the problem,i felt like an ass. GREAT job!!!! i love this story!!!!
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  • From ANON - srg1 on June 16, 2005
    Yay! You updated! Finally! And it was perfect for me! I had a bad day and this really, really cheered me up! I can't wait for the next chapter! You are a great writer!
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