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By : SoutasSister
  • From ANON - 4kagome on May 17, 2005
    Please update soon! I love where tihs story is headed. I have a wonderful plot that can and mostlikely will take many turns and subplots. Great job!

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  • From ANON - jodibetz on May 17, 2005
    So wonderful! Its great! I can't wait for the next confrontation between inu and kag.
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  • From JebusOfNazareth on May 17, 2005
    If I haven't reviewed this, Smack me. IF i have. Jsut want to say. Awesome.
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  • From ANON - nabikineum on May 17, 2005
    Thanks for the update!

    Another great chapter. I loved the scenes with Yuka. Makes Kagome's modern friends seem more 'human.'
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  • From ANON - DEEP SERERNITY on May 17, 2005
    great chap 7! good job, lol, I do think Kagome should stop being so shy she's 19! She should go for it.
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  • From ANON - IamReven on May 17, 2005
    You've just about got me ready to pull my hair out. I'm glad you settled the Houjo issue. I just can't stand the creepy little bastard. The abduction by Sessy is going to drive Inuyasha completely insane. I can't wait to see his reaction when he finally gets back to Kagome. Should be intense! You've done a great job of keeping everybody in character and supporting the storyline. I can't wait till you for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - freelke on May 17, 2005
    great story and u update so fsat, keep 'em coming, ill be checking, love your story
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  • From ANON - Shadowknight on May 17, 2005
    Wow! A moving fic. Very nice indeed. The plot is great, and handled quite well. This could have turned into a Sess/Kag boinkfest like others I've seen here on affn (similar setup with Kagome's desires, but no reasons as to why she suddenly wants "Fluffy"), but this plot is pretty seamless in execution. The spelling and grammar are both well done, and any mistakes are not even noticed due to the smooth flow of the stoyline.

    To those that mentioned Kikyo with respect to pity, I'd rebut that with her deserving more than just pity. She does need to put aside the hate that grew from the love she had for InuYasha though. Newtype USA's May edition has InuYasha in it, and there is an "ending" spoiler about what will happen with the Shikon no Tama. I was suprised at it indeed. I'll not ruin anything by telling, but those who have the May edition know also.
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  • From ANON - Mikey on May 17, 2005
    Hey I like your story its cool.
    In the end note in chapter 7 however, I think you give kagome a little too much credit. In chapter 17
    Sesshoumaru does ask Kagome "Who/What are you?". However he doesn't ask that because he "senses something within her", he asks because
    both he and Inu Yasha (who both have demon stregnth) tried to free the Tetsuiga from its pedistal and failed.however Kagome clumsly trips
    over herself and by accident frees the sword. He doesnt know that the Tetsuiga was forged to protect humans . So, when he sprays her with
    his poison he doesnt realize that the tetsaiga's barrier protected her. So of course he was surprised. I highly doubt Sesshoumaru, a demon war lord,
    ever felt threatened by kagome for one second. He changed into his demon form not because kagome was an ounce threatening, but because
    Inu Yasha has the sword that Sesshoumaru desperately wants. Sesshoumaru put so much effort into find the sword only to :
    1.)not be able to touch it
    2.) watch some human girl pull it out by accident
    3.) have it fall into the hands of his hated half brother

    Personally if I were Sesshoumaru I would be mad as hell too. Kagome is one of the weakest characters in the whole manga so far.
    She's not physically strong nor does she have a strong character. So think about it before you give her too much credit for anything..

    Anyway..Good story ! Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 17, 2005
    I do love the way you write. You seem to capture the characters well and write it in a way that makes me smile. Thanks so much, it's nice to find something that appears to be written with actual intelligence.
    Please keep it up! oxo
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  • From ANON - Jaxomruth on May 17, 2005
    I love this story. It is so funny and well written. I can't wait for the next chapter. I love the talk with Fluffy.
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  • From ANON - peacemaker on May 17, 2005
    Ch.7 was another great chapter, the plot is progressing very smoothly and it is easy to follow. This story is very original, I have never read a story like this one before so it makes this one even better. Keep up teh good work and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - serena on May 14, 2005
    um...yeah.....update, POR FAVOR!!!!!!!!!!!!! ME GUSTA MUCHISIMO!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE this story!!!! Incredibly gifted writer, by the way, too ^_~
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on May 12, 2005
    I really love what you're doing with this story thanks for the update:)
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  • From ANON - 4kagome on May 11, 2005
    Please update soon!!
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